Page 1 after 11 floors (.

) fullstop
Each (after fullstop) E should be capital
Post poned should be corrected as single word "Postponed"
1.2 can be named as "Objectives of the work"
1.2 point no 2 correct spelling thee as "the"

Page 2 Company name : You may think of better name than this
Turnover : You may assume and put as it is virtual company
Major sub-contractors : You can mention refer to page / section …
Estimation team has mentioned the names of sub-con

Page 3 Project specification : Clubhouse project is not very appropriate. You may
mention page no / section no etc
There is separate section on specifications. You may give reference to that

Page 7 Section 2.5.1 - Use Tender document or Tender BOQ. Tender bid BOQ doesn’t
sound appropriate
2.5.3 Wor (W) should be small and not capital. And it should be Works. In
contractual language, we use a word - WORKS e.g. RCC works, Waterproofing
works, Masonry works etc.

Page 8 On page no 2, you are mentioning budget as 29 Lacs and on page 8 , section
2.5.4, it is mentioned as 35.5 L.
Mention clearly that 35.5 L is inclusive of GST.
Use same figure both places
E.g. either mention 29 Lacs + 18% GST Extra or 35.5 L incl GST

On page no 3, you are mentioning timing upto 5:30PM and

2.5.6 pn page 8, time is upto 6:00 PM. Maintain uniform timings
point (g) Society has not allowed. Use word has
"an" arrangement use word "an" in point g

Page 9 point (i) tractor trolley can easily enter the site

Page 9 2.5.8 - 2020) Remove )

2.5.8, use works. Contractually we say finishing works etc.
Gym equipments installation. (s) use S for plural

Page 10 Use works and not "Work"

7.0 mention only overheads. Overhead payment is not correct
Page 12 WBS, 2.6 - Fire NOC wont be needed. Its needed if height of building > 15 mtr
or 4 storeys

3.2 correct word is barricading

3.5 machinery to site
4.1 use RMC ( RMC is procured )
5.1.1 Its not soft soil. It is B.C. soil
5.1.2 Pile boring ( drilling is not correct )
5.2.2 Where is raft ??

You have included services in 7.0 so title can be corrected as finishes &
services
Page 14 Fig No. 4, Put column no C1 and C5 in the box
Page 14 point e, (It) first letter after full stop is capital
fig no. 5, Whole pasting image in word, zoom in PDF, select image and then
paste to get clear image
Fig no. 6 ( same feedback as fig no 5)
Fig no. 7 ( same feedback as fig no 5)

Page 17 2.10.5, increase the font.

Page 21 2.13 Handing over process

Page 22 Staircase flooring, S should be capital and not small

Section 3.3 , Use word INR

BOQ 2.4, add word compacting as rubble soling needs compaction
Point no. 3, use page break to take it to next page
Use works. PCC works, RCC works ( its not work )

Page 24 5.1 b) use page break

Page 28 Point 11.1, use page break command

Page 29 Point 16.1 a) use page break

Page 30 Point 21, shift to next page using page break command

Page 35 Qty of steel - Mention unit MT

Add sample BBS ( 1 page is enough ) well formatted

 In scope , you have mentioned work order. But there is no work order
attached. Are you including W.O. in this report. Better to add as it will give
weightage

Page 40 Start first line from start of page. Delete unwanted space

4.1.2 Image is not copied properly

4.1.6.2 reduce unwanted space

Page 43 Beween Formwork and Foundation, reduce the space

Between columns and formwork, reduce space
Maintain uniformity of format

Page 44 Instead of word structural steel, use reinforcement

Structural steel refers to channel sections, H beams, I sections , pipes etc.
used in industrial projects

Page 53 Section 4.2.3. This project has fly ash brick masonry. Don’t use word
blockwork

Page 57 4.3.3 Checklist for blockwork ? We are using brick and not AAC blocks.
Add one more point. Metal beaning should be done at joints of dissimilar
material.
Non shrink grout mix mortar to be filled between beam soffit and last layer

Page 58-67 Use page break command effectively and format table well

Page 67 Allign table contents to the centre