Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in order to report a situation that I am experiencing living in one of the college's
accommodations.(To make it betterm you can use an imaginary room number) My roommate is
making use (using) of illegal illegal substances, and he is not caring about his responsabilities
(responsibilities) living on campus. Since he broke up with his girlfriend, he started being depressive
(depressed), getting excessively drunk and also started missing most of the classes. After a few weeks,
the situation became even worse. Two days ago he has threatened me because I've asked him to help
me out on taking out the garbage.

Due to all this (this entire) situation, it is been very difficult to concentrate and have my own space to do
my work properly. My performance is being strongly affected and I am afraid to loose (loose means
release or set free, lose means suffer loss of. Hence we use lose here) the entire term.

I would like to ask you to help both me and my roommate with this situation. He needs serious
attention, and I need an accommodation (accommodation) where I can fully focus on my studies and
carrer (career).

Yours sincerely,

Ricardo

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As long as people get retired, and not only they start not having losing that huge energy as they used to
have as their younger self, they also start needing some special attention. In some contries (countries), it
is very common having condos designed and reserved only for seniors this public. But how does the cost
of those places should be covered? Some people say the government should pay all the costs of them.
Others say that tenant's relatives should cover the costs. (remind me(tejas) to talk to you about this)

From my point of view, the government should pay for the major part of the costs, and families that
have sound financial condition should also support and help those places. The reason for the
government to pay most of the costs is because the people who live in these condos probably have
given all their energy and workforce for the development of the country, and they deserve at least
minimum conditions to live their the end of their lives in a cozy place. However, families should keep in
mind that their old relatives also deserve some level of attention, and they cannot depend 100% on the
government. Families need to monitor and help taking care of those places.

I've seen cases where the family had to borrow money to support an old relative, and also places kept
by government that doesn't offer minimal conditions for people to live. Having a balance would work
better than giving the whole responsibility (responsibility) to only one part, since those two parts agree
to keep as both the government and the families can help in monitoring and pushing each other for
doing a good job.

Wow. Well done Ricardo.

Dont worry about all the markups I have done. All those are
very small errors. I like your ability to form sentences and
communicate what you are saying. The mistakes are mostly
repetitive and hence if you correct it once, it gets corrected at
multiple places automatically.
Overall, I think you are doing very well.