MisamisUniversity

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Paper Title: Ensuring Food Safety: From Production to Consumption in the Philippines

Please mark the appropriate box with  based on your detailed review of the paper. Your comments
and suggestions are very important to the researcher. It would be great to have your comments listed in
the comments box. Thank you.

Exceptional Very Good Good Fair Poor

Originality 
Comments: Based on my observation the author just copied some content of the introduction from the
other published journal.

Appropriateness of
the research/study 
method
Comments: The author of this study did not state the methodology of the study. She/he did not explain
the type of her/his research.

With great
significance to the

targeted
respondents
Comments: Based on the data that the author presented, I did not notice that she/he mention the targeted
respondents. She/ He did not even state the number of the respondents involved in this study, and also
the place and how the research conducted.

Presentation of
arguments and 
ideas
Comments: The author of this study did not present any table for us the reader will understand how
she/he come up with this study.

Sufficiency of 
theoretical basis of

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the ideas in the

paper
Comments: Based on my understanding of the Methodology of the Research, The researcher will
explain how he conducted the study. The researcher will explain how he gathered the data. The
researcher will explain where the study conducted, etc. But upon reviewing this study I found out that
the researcher just copied the data from this source :
https://www.doh.gov.ph/sites/default/files/statistics/2017%20Food%20and%20Water%20Borne
%20Diseases%20MW%201-22.pdf

Relevance, clarity,
and preciseness of 
figures and tables
Comments:
Based on this study, there is no table presented in this study to come up with how he gets the data. I
can’t give exactly comment the relevance, clarity, and preciseness of the figures and tables.

Correct citation of

listed references
Comments:

Grammar and
sentence 
construction
Comments:

Overall presentation 
Comments: This research paper is good. The researcher fail to remember to discuss the significance of
this study. The design of the research is not presented well.

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Recommendation: (Please highlight your recommendation)

Accept unaltered
Accept with minor, required changes
Review again after major changes
A major rewrite is required

My Recommendations on how the researcher presented of his study:

In Methods, the researcher should present how he will come up with data of his study. The researcher
explains what survey methods he used if it is qualitative or quantitative. Because after complying with
the survey tools it is easy for you to discuss the result and discussions of your study.
Note: This is just in my own opinion.

Thank you