Name: Jesreil Achumbre Yr&Section: BIT 1F ELECTRICAL

Write the C (courtesy, clarity, conciseness, concreteness, completeness) not applied

in each sentence and REWRITE it. *You may add words or remove some just to fix
the glitch in each statement.

1. Mop the floor as soon as possible else we will be forced to replace you.
CONCISENESS
2. We will attend the ceremony tomorrow.COMPLETENESS
Tomorrow we will attend the ceremony.
3. Notify me if I qualify for the position. CLARITY
I know that I would be a great part of you company, just notify me if I am
qualified for that position.
4. America is the world leader. CLARITY
America- world leader.
5. I no longer need your services.COURTESY
You know what? I no longer need your poor services.
6. If you have nothing sensible to say, better shut up. CONCRETENESS
If you don’t have anything to say, you better shut up!
7. The company is experiencing a crisis; hence,management is considering to
retrench a number of employees.COMPLETENESS
Management is considering to retrench a number of employees because the
company is experiencing a crisis.
8. You should dispose of the garbage.CONCRETENESS
The garbage should be dispose by you now!
9. Move aside.I can’t see the painting.COURTESY
Hey little Man! Can you move aside, I can’t see the painting clearly.
10. CTU university is one of the country’s biggest universities. CLARITY
Cebu Technological University is a premier multidisciplinary-technological
university it is also one of the country’s biggest university.