Draft 1 Describing Person

Name : I Gde Rama Putra Yuda

NIM : 20020084081

 Title. Dzawin Nur, The Humble YouTuber

Make it interesting and inviting for the
readers
 Topic sentence. Dzawin Nur Ikram is a unique YouTuber with 1 million
A general description of the place that you subscribers who have a casual appearance and fun personalities.
describe.

 Include:
1. 2 Controling ideas.
2. Use parallel structure.
 Supporting Sentences from the 1st Major When I saw him on YouTube, the first thing I noticed was his tan
Idea. skin which is different from the other because his skin is a bit
Choose some interesting features that related dark brown. He has a medium height like other Indonesians. The
to the first major idea and explain them in 2- short straight hair makes him more stylish. He has an oval face
4 sentences. and a sweet smile with white teeth. Also, he is a person with
glasses. He likes to wear simple clothes such as sweaters, t-shirts,
 Include: short jeans, and sandals or casual shoes.
1. Transition signals
2. Descriptive techniques to give detail
3. Sensory language
4. Spatial Order
 Supporting Sentences from the 2nd Major After his casual appearance, Dzawin has a friendly nature. He
Idea. likes to participate in social activities. Also, he is generous and
Choose some interesting features that related not arrogant. Besides that, he also has a great sense of humor
to the second major idea and explain them in which is why he is fun. Because he likes to make humor, he is
2-4 sentences. always cheerful like a person who has no problem.

 Include:
1. Transition signals
2. Descriptive techniques to give detail
3. Sensory language
4. Spatial Order
 Concluding Sentence. Overall, my favorite public figure is different from the others,
Must clearly show that the writer has because he has a simple sense of style and likes to make jokes in
completed the message presented in TS and different ways.
does not include new ideas.

 Include:
1. Transition signals
2. Restatement of TS (Synonym)
3. Sensory language
4. Spatial Order
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