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Oral Presentation in the Workplace 4. Use only reliable sources. Interviews, 6.

Do not overload your visual aids with


- While public speaking and oral observation and survey. text.
presentation in the workplace are similar 7. If your situation permits, arrive earlier
they also have their own distinct features. Steps in Planning and Presenting an Oral than the members of the audience.
Unlike the usual public speaking for Presentation 8. Dress professionally.
general purposes, an oral presentation 5. Outline your presentation. 9. Do not read your visual aids.
uses a more business-like tone and 6. Practice your presentation. 10. Include real-life experiences when
language because it is used for work 7. Deliver your presentation. presenting ideas.
purposes. Utilizes audio-visual materials 1. -Ensure that each major idea is supported -6. it’s not pleasant for the eyes.
such as projectors. by sufficient details and evidence.
7. Professionalism
May be delivered to an internal or 2. Do this in front of a mirror or with your 8. One way of gaining respect
external. Ex. Departmental meetings, friends. 9. Come prepared. Be sure to explain it
employee orientation, sales presentation 3. Master your presentation and speak 10. To make your discussion relatable and
and business proposal. With technology sincerely. interesting.
presentation can be also done through
video conferencing. Some Useful Tips in Delivering an Oral Some Useful Tips in Delivering an Oral
Presentation Presentation
Objectives: 1. Visualize yourself delivering an excellent 11. Never apologize for your materials or
1. Explain the qualities of an effective speech. credentials.
presenter. 2. Emphasize the relevance of your speech 12. Maintain eye contact and use natural
2. Identify the common manifestations of to your audience. gestures.
communication anxieties; 3. Clearly explain your objectives at the 13. If your situation permits, occasionally
3. Deliver an effective oral presentation start of your presentation. move from one place to another.
using appropriate technology; 4. Use multimedia in your presentation. 14. Repeat the question of a member of
4. Evaluate an oral presentation; and 5. Have a bottle of water for yourself. the audience.
5. Reflect on a learning experience. 1. -Belief and confidence. Placebo effect 15. Allow enough time for questioning.
Steps in Planning and Presenting an Oral -11. Make use of what you have.
2. Explain the practicality or usefulness of
Presentation
your topic. 12. To keep their attention.
1. Know your purpose.
3. It’s good that you tell your audience what 13. One way of controlling the behavior of the
2. Focus your topic.
do you want to achieve or happen so they audience.
3. Know your audience.
will know that they will achieve something. 14. To make sure everyone heard the question or
4. Gather references for your presentation.
4. Makes your presentation dynamic. Cone of to make sure what you heard is right.
1. -Will guide you in organizing your ideas.
Exp. Edgar dale 10-read, 20-hear, 30-see, 15. This is your responsibility as a presenter. To
2. Be sure that it is specific enough. By 50-see&hear, 70-say, 90-say&do. address confusions.
focusing your topic and aligning it to your 5. Helpful when your mouth becomes dry
purpose, the audience will have a clearer Some Useful Tips in Delivering an Oral
understanding. Some Useful Tips in Delivering an Oral Presentation
3. Align the content of your presentation to Presentation 16. Know the set-up of the presentation
their values, interests, needs, and desires. venue.
17. Do not be defensive. • They are more accessible and can be Date- It is placed between the letterhead and the
16. You can address the problem and apply retrieved by the reader at any time inside address. It should never use plain numerals
solutions. convenient to him/her. for dates as it may create confusion. Instead of
• They present the message in details. using 02/02/19, February 02, 2019 or 2 February
17. Admit something that you are not
• They can be documented and filed. 2019 can be used.
knowledgeable
Inside Address- It identifies the reader’s name,
Ethics in Oral Presentation Business Letter position, and company, and address. It should be
1. Never waste the time of your audience. placed immediately below the date.
• An effective business letter elicits the
2. Make sure that you have a valid purpose
expected response from the reader. Attention line- It is used when the writer wishes
or objective.
to the address the whole company but wants to
3. Never distort information for your own • This can be achieved through concise
bring it to the attention of a particular person in
advantage. tactful and accurate writing style.
the company. It can be written in two formats:
4. Never use abusive language or name-
call. Is a type of letter which serves as a means of
Attention Peter Burkin
5. Cite your sources. communication written for various commercial
6. Be courteous at all times. purposes. Attention: Peter Burkin
1. -Don’t come unprepared. A business letter serves several purposes: for sales Salutation- It refers to the writer’s greeting to the
2. If your purpose is to discredit someone , it efforts, for complaints, for information, reader. It can appear in different formats:
is clearly unethical. dissemination, for relationship building, and for
Dear Sir:
3. People will know whether your telling the problem-solving.
truth or not. Sir:
Examples: application letter, acceptance letter,
4. It will offend your audience. letter of complaint, letter of intent. Dear Mr. Burkin:
5. Never claim an idea as your own even if it
is not. • A business letter serves several purposes: Body- It contains the message of the letter.
6. Maintain a respectful and professional Paragraphs are single-spaced internally but
tone when delivering your presentation. double-spaced to separate paragraphs. If the
letter is too short, the body can be double-spaced
or triple-spaced to separate the paragraphs.
Letters, Memos, and E-mails
Complimentary Close- It is an expression used to
Is a type of writing that seeks to elicit business end a letter. Below is the level of formality of the
response. It’s a purposeful piece of writing that complimentary close (Merriam Webster’s Guide
provides relevant info to help a reader know to Business Correspondence, 1996):
something or do something. Must be substantive,
clear, correct and easy to scan. Highly Formal Informal and
Parts of a Business Letter Friendly
Essentials of Business Writing Respectfully yours, As ever,
Letterhead- It identifies the writer, his/her
• They allow the writer to have time to think Respectfully, Best regards,
address, and contact numbers.
about the message he/she wants to convey Very respectfully, Kindest regards,
thoroughly.
Polite and Formal Enclosure Notation • A notice directing the employers to
Regards, Indented undergo physical check-up is an example of
Very truly yours, this kind of memo
Yours ever truly, 1. Use a language that is appropriate to the
Yours truly, target readers. 2. Request Memo
Less Formal 2. Arrange your ideas logically. • Asks readers to provide certain information
Sincerely yours, -. Ideas are grouped together, and each group is or take certain actions.
Yours, discussed accordingly. Use transition words like, • An example of this memo is when
Cordially yours, Firstly, Secondly…. requesting fund for a seminar
3. Use a direct and tactful tone.
Signature block- Includes the signature and the - . Polite tone 3. Announcement Memo
typed name of the sender. The typed name can be 4. Use the active voice in most of your • Provides information about an event,
in all caps (PETER BURKIN) or CLC format (Peter sentences. person, or thing.
Burkin). The space for the signature should be -Active voice is a grammar term used to classify • An example of this memo is when
three to five lines. sentences in which the subject of the sentence is announcing a meeting.
the one actively performing the action of the verb.
Identification Initials- It indicates the typist’s
Example: I am writing a letter. 4. Transmittal Memo
initials if the sender is not one who personally
• Serves as a cover note for a more formal or
typed the document. 5. When writing, put yourselves in the shoes
lengthy document.
of the target readers.
Enclosure Notation- It indicates the attachments to • An example of this memo is when
6. Use correct format, punctuation, spelling
the letter. It can be written in the following transmitting an annual report to the
and grammar.
formats: members of the board of directors.
7. Specify the receivers’ name. However, if it
-Transmittal- is a document that is sent along with
Enclosures (2) is impossible to get the name of the
other documents, files, or samples. It shows when
Enclosure receiver, use a generic title such as The
the items were sent and provides proof that they
enc./encl. Human Resource Director.
were sent.

Reference – refers to a file where all the letters Memorandum 5. Authorization Memo
and documents about the same matter are kept. (Memos) • Gives permission.
• Memorandum is a business • An example of this memo is when allowing
Three Formats of a Business Letter correspondence which aims to inform and an employee to study on Saturdays.
1. Full Block persuade target readers who are within
2. Modified Block - Complimentary close the organization. Similar to news writing Advantages of a Memo
Signature Block format, it follows an inverted pyramid 1. It reaches a large number of readers at the same
Identification Initials stricter. This means that the most time.
Enclosure Notation important information comes first. 2. It provides a written record that can be accessed
3. Semiblock Block- Complimentary close 5 Types of a Memo any time.
1. Instruction Memo 3. It allows a detailed and accurate delivery of
Signature Block Provides information that the readers need to message.
Identification Initials perform accurately. Disadvantages of a Memo
1. It is not ideal to convey complex topics since Identification Initials- It indicates the typist’s Electronic Mail (E-mail)
memos are generally used for short texts. initials of the sender is not the one who
• One study of the United States showed
2. It takes time to reach distant branches and personally typed the document
that 98 percent of employees consider
offices.
Enclosure Notation- It indicates the attachments email as extremely important (Gerson,
3. It is more expensive that e-mail.
to the letter. It can be written in the following 2009).
formats:
Parts of a Memo • It is important not only in the workplace
Letterhead- It identifies the writer, his/her Enclosure (2) but also in personal communication.
address, and contact numbers.
Enclosure • email has revolutionized the way people
Date- It is placed between the letterhead and the communicate.
inside address. It should never use plain numerals enc / encl.
for dates as it may create confusion. Instead of -The advent of technology has introduced us to
Copy Notation- It indicates the name of the
using 02/02/2019. February 2019 can be used. new form of the business communication; that is
secondary recipients of the letter. It is indicated
email communication. In fact, one study of the
“To” Line- It indicates the name and the title of by cc: which means carbon copy or courtesy
United States showed that 98 percent of
the receiver. copies.
employees consider email as extremely important
(Gerson, 2009). It is important not only in the
Attention Line- It is used when the writer wishes
workplace but also in personal communication. We
to address the whole company but wants to bring Tips for Writing a Memo send emails to our friends and relatives locally and
it to the attention of a particular person in the
1. Use bullets, numbers and letter to list abroad; and teachers and classmates.
company. It can be written in two formats:
information. Undoubtedly, email has revolutionized the way
Attention Peter Burkin people communicate.
2. Use a positive tone, active verbs, and
Attention: Peter Burkin concise wording. Similar to letters and memos, emails serve many
purposes. It can be used to give directions, to
“From” Line- It indicates the name of the sender. 3. Use heading to improve the readability. transmit documents, to record important data and
The sender should affix his/her initials on the right
4. Eliminate grammatical and typographical information, to confirm requests, to explain
side of his/her name for the verification process.
errors. procedures, to make recommendations, to inquire,
Subject Line- It announces the main content or and to submit feasibility and status reports.
topic of the memo. Subject is more preferred than 5. Use correct format and structure.
the old term Re. 6. Put your initials in a signature from beside
Body- It contains the message of the memo. your printed name as sender.
Paragraphs are single-spaced internally but 7. Flush the memo heading to the left (“to”
double-spaced to separate paragraphs. If the line, “from” line, subject line, and date
memo is too short, the body can be double- line).
spaced or triple-spaced to separate paragraphs.
Paragraphs in the memo are not indented. 8. Say thank you or state a directive action
(e.g., for your compliance, for immediate
action, for your approval, for your
information) at the end of the memo.
Advantages of E-mail 5. Ensure the correctness of the email Executive session is a private meeting within an
1. It reaches the target reader fast. address of the recipients. otherwise open meeting, such as an organizational
2. It confirms an acceptance or rejection easily. 6. Instead of using “letter1”, use “request board meeting. Boards may hold an executive
3. It is less costly than letters and memos. letter barrot” session involving only board members to discuss
4. It can easily reach the farthest parts of the globe. 7. Never use “all caps” in the main text. This sensitive or private information.
5. It is environmentally friendly. is unacceptable
6. It is easier to document. Body
Disadvantages of E-mail 8. State your purpose in the first sentence of 1. Reading, correction and approval of the
1. It is prone to hacking and technical glitches. the memo. previous minutes:
2. It can cause information to overload. 9. If the message is sensitive, compose it “I move that the minutes of the meeting
3. It can be used to transmit computer viruses. first using the word processor. dated March 25 be approved as corrected.”
10. Avoid emoticons and informal jargons like 2. Business arising from the previous minutes
“LOL” and “BRB” in formal memos. of meeting.
Tips for Writing an E-mail or a Memo
8. -State your purpose in the first sentence of 3. New Business
1. Make the subject line informative or the memo. a. Agenda 1
descriptive of the memo content. b. Agenda 2
9. If the message is sensitive, compose it first
c. Agenda 3
2. Keep the subject line simple and short. using the word processor.
-2. Any reports, pieces of information or other
10. Avoid emoticons and informal jargons like
3. Do not change the subject line when you matters of substance that were requested at the
“LOL” and “BRB” in formal memos.
are replying to an email. previous meeting are debated and a vote is taken
on the appropriate action to take.
4. The “to” line should contain names of the Minutes of the Meeting
primary readers. • Minutes of the meeting are a descriptive Conclusion
report that provides a written record of
5. Ensure the correctness of the email 1. Announcement (including the time and
what transpired during a meeting.
address of the recipients. date of the next meeting).
• In short, the minutes are summary of the
6. Make the file name of the attached proceedings. 2. Other matters (new topics that need to be
document meaningful. covered in future meetings).
Standard Elements of the Minutes of the Meeting
7. Never use “all caps” in the main text. This Introduction 3. Time adjournment
is unacceptable 1. Name and address the organization. 4. Name and signature of the minutes-taker
2. Type of meeting (special, executive, and presiding officer.
1. -Avoid vague subject lines such as follow-
committee, board, regular, emergency.)
up, additional information, or request. -It should be noted that the format structure of
3. Call to order: time, date, and presiding
2. Keep the subject line simple and short. minutes of the meting may vary from one
officer.
3. Do not change the subject line when you organization to the other.
4. Attendance
are replying to an email.
4. Secondary readers must be placed on the Tips For Preparing The Minutes of the Meeting
-Special meetings are unscheduled meetings called
cc line. Primary readers are those who are
from time to time by the Board for a specific
directly involved in the message of the
purpose.
email.
1. Use the meeting agenda as a guide in or play up one particular angle or piece 5. Problems caused by natural calamities
organizing the information in your of information. 6. operation related problems
minutes. - 13. As much as possible, attach the
original minutes ti the revised one. This structure of incident report
2. Make sure that the minutes are factual, is to ensure accuracy of revision. 1. Problem description- narrates the events
free from editorial comments, and subtle
related to the incident. Includes the people
slanting of factual statements.
involved, time, date, place, and problems.
➤ INFORMAL REPORTS
3. Summarize the major points of the - This section needs to be clearly narrated in a way
What is a REPORT
meeting. that the reader can visualize the events.
a type of business communication that provides an
2. Actions taken- states the actions that were
4. Record verbatim parliamentary points such update about a project or event related to an
taken by the sender or by the personnel directly
as motions, resolutions, and points of organization.
involved in the incident.
order. Include the name of the speaker. -Its primary purpose is to inform or persuade the
3. Recommendations- provide some suggestions
target reader who is usually the immediate
5. Never include the name of the seconder of on how the incident can be prevented by
superior of the writer of the report. They may be
the motion unless ordered by the body. happening again.
formal or informal.
6. Enter the number of votes on each side in ➤ Types of report • TRIP REPORT
matters that required voting. Formal reports are those that are lengthy and A Trip report provides a record of a job related
7. Focus on the action taken rather than on cover complicated topics. trip and evaluate whether it was a success or not.
the topics. Informal reports are those that are shorter (not
more than five pages) and deals with a specific examples:
8. Be objective. event or aspects of an organization. 1. Inspection of a site
-A formal report is an official report that contains 2. Attendance in a conference or convention
9. Type the minutes as soon as the meeting is
detailed information, research, and data necessary 3. Participation in a training program
finished.
to make business decisions. Some examples are
10. Use single space when preparing the annual reports, expense reports. structure of a trip report
minutes. 1. Background- provides basic information
Infomal report includes incident report, trip report about the trip. These includes the date,
11. Number all the pages. and progress report duration, objectives of the trip,
Common Types of informal report destination and the rationale for the trip.
12. Place the corrections made in the previous
• INCIDENT REPORT 2. Discussion- contains the details and
minutes above the affected line or in the
-An incident report provides a factual account of findings obtained from the trip. It includes
margin.
an incident to make sure that the incident will not observations, contacts, sessions attended
13. Never throw out the original minutes. happen again. and problems encountered.
- 8. Never let your own personal bias Some of the common situations that require an 3. Conclusion- presents what you have
cloud your accuracy in taking down incident report are as follows; accomplished from the trip such as sales
notes. 1. Machine breakdown made and linkages established.
- Subtle slanting- only tells a part of a 2. Installation problems 4. Recommendation- presents suggestions
story, or when they highlight, focus on, 3. brawl between and among personnel to make the next trips more successful. It
4. Accidents also recommends certain steps that the
company may take relevant to its own B. Forecast for project completion • Viability- having a reasonable chance of
growth and advancement. C. Willingness to make adjustments success.
D. Contact details
2. Unsolicited internal
• PROGRESS REPORT
PROPOSALS • Follows a memo format
Progress report- provides an update on the
Informal Proposal • Is used when the sender and recipient
completion or status of a particular task.
• Is a form of informal report that aims to belong to the same organization
persuade its readers to address a particular • Is a self-initiated proposal
1. completed task since the last report
problem. • Is used when the target reader has not yet
2. tasks that are in progress
• May be in either letter or memo format realized that a problem exists
3. delays and their causes
depending on its origin. • Is used when no decision has yet been
4. resolution of the progress encountered
• Generally, it does not exceed five pages. made to solve a problem
5. remaining work
-Informal proposals are written when people need An Unsolicited proposal is a written application for
6. other tasks to be done
to ask permission to make a purchase, undertake a a new or innovative idea submitted to an agency.
7. target completion date of the task
project, or write a paper; this type of proposal is a
I. Introduction 3. Solicited external
way of persuasively putting forth an idea and
A. Purpose of the report
B. Period covered by the report
asking for action to be taken on that idea. • Follows a letter format
C. Brief summary • FOUR TYPES OF INFORMAL PROPOSAL • Is used when a sender and recipient do not
D. Main progress to date or since last 1. Solicited internal belong to the same organization
report 2. Unsolicited internal
II. Body 3. Solicited external • Is used when responding to a specific
A. Description of the work completed 4. Unsolicited external request from someone who does not
1. Completed tasks or accomplished belong to the same organization
items 1. Solicited internal • Is used when the problem has been
2. Duration of accomplishing the tasks • Follows a memo format identified
or items • Is used when the sender and recipient
3. Compliance with the schedule belong to the same organization • Is used when the decision to solve the
• Responds to a specific request within the problem has already been made
B. Problems encountered such as delays
organization An external proposal is one written from a
and incomplete work
• Is used when the problem has been separate, independent organization or individual to
C. Remaining work identified another such entity. The typical example is an
• Is used when the decision to solve the independent consultant proposing to do a project
1. Remaining tasks
problem has already been made for another firm
2. Projects to be completed
A Solicited Internal Proposal – These are proposals
3. Timetable and strategies to do the 4. Unsolicited external
are requested by a manager or supervisor. There
remaining tasks
may not be a need for you come up with 'the
4. Possible risks and strategies in • Follows a letter format
answer' or solve the problem. Your boss may have
controlling these risks.
already provided the solution and simply requests • Is used when the sender and recipient do
III. Conclusion
you measure its viability. not belong to the same organization
A. Evaluation of current status
• Is a self initiated proposal IV. Conclusion Resume & Cover Letter

• Is used when the target reader has not yet A. Benefits and risks of adopting the  What is a Resume?
realized that a problem exists proposal
 Marketing Tool: Designed to capture
• Is used when no decision has yet been B. Call to action (specify what you attention and get you to the next stage in
made to solve a problem want the target reader to do next) the recruitment process. It presents in
writing the skills, accomplishments and
STRUCTURE OF AN INFORMAL PROPOSAL C. Contact person for further
qualifications that you bring to a potential
information
I. Introduction employer.
• TIPS FOR WRITING AN INFORMAL
A. Purpose of the proposal  Key Component: It is the first essential tool
PROPOSAL
in the job search process. The resume is
B. Description of the problem that the first introduction a hiring manager will
1. Anticipate the possible criticisms or
needs to be solved ( nature of the have of you. You want them to feel drawn
objections of the target reader and address
problem, effects on the company, in and motivated to invite you in for an
them in your proposal
causes, the deadline for solving it, interview.
and sources of data) 2. Describe the problem and the solution
accurately and clearly.  Written Inventory: The resume is an
C. Scope or limitations of the inventory of your skills, accomplishments,
proposal (i,e., information covered 3. Correct all grammatical and typographical experiences and education to date. It
by the proposal includes method, errors. should be customized and targeted for
cost, and timetable) each individual position.
4. Ensure that your proposed solution is
II. Detailed discussion of the proposed solution feasible especially regarding cost and  Interview Getter: This is your ultimate goal
schedule. with a resume; it tells the hiring manager
III. Justification of the proposed solution
5. Highlight the benefits of the proposal to that you have the necessary experience,
A. Arguments that support the skills and education.
the target readers and all stakeholders.
proposed solution (i.e., research
that supports solution, the 6. Make the document visually appealing. What to include in a Resume
companies that have already used Here's a list of what many students include in their
7. Put the target reader, context, and
the proposed solution) resumes. Some of these may be heading titles, or
purpose in mind.
B. Justification of the needed not. Not all resumes will include all these things.
8. Use attachments for less important Remember, each job-seeker is unique.
resources such as equipment
information.
( specific model), personnel who • Education
will do the work and their 9. Use proper headings.
qualifications, time frame, and • Coursework
costs ( the budget required for the 10. Use the format required by your
organization. If none, then use the • Computer Skills
solution, is broken down by
category, i.e., personnel, suggested standard format. • Projects
equipment, transportation, etc.)
• Leadership Activities
• Co-curricular Activities  Consulted with customers regarding  Organized an awards ceremony
service and provided feedback to company attended by over 200 student
• Internships
owner athletes.
• Work Experience
 Trained new employees on use of Before You Write Your Resume
• Volunteer Experience equipment and proper landscaping
 What type of job are you seeking? It can
techniques
• Awards help to have a specific objective or use the
 Demonstrated punctuality by starting shift position to craft a targeted resume.
What Makes a Good Resume? at 5 a.m. every day and achieving 100%
 What type of person and experience are
• Clear – It gives the reader a clear attendance
required for the job? You can find this
understanding of who you are, what skills  Exhibited a strong work ethic by providing information through research,
you possess, your accomplishments, and hard labor in demanding conditions informational interviewing, and
the career path you have chosen. networking.
Note that the job candidate did not talk about the
• Concise – Every word has purpose. Only actual duties that would be obvious, e.g. mowing  What skills and abilities do you have to
content that makes you a strong candidate lawns and trimming trees, but instead focused on offer an employer and what ones will you
is included. the transferable skills that would be important to stress? Focus on those that support your
• Consistent – A consistent format focuses an employer hiring for a management trainee career objective.
the reader on what you have written, not position.
The Cover Letter – Purposes
on how you have written it. Transferable skills- also known as “portable skills,”
The cover letter accompanies your resume and its
• Focused – For most people, this is the most are qualities that can be transferred from one job
purposes are to:
challenging part. You must market yourself to another.
on your resume. Focus on your  demonstrate a match between the
Quantify Accomplishments
achievements, strengths, and skills. Use employer's needs and your attributes
action verbs. Quantify your accomplishments if you can. For
 demonstrate your knowledge of the
example:
 Focus on Transferable Skills organization and why you would be a good
 Consistently ranked as the #1 or #2 "fit" if hired
A transferable skill is a skill gained in one job that is sales associate out of a team of
useful in another. Many high school and college  showcase your communication skills,
approximately 20 sales
experiences do not directly relate to a post-grad writing ability, and writing style
professionals.
career, but most people can always talk about
Cover letters only define your professional
transferable skills! Here's an example of a resume  Awarded "employee-of-the-
qualifications and the purpose of the letter.
entry describing a yard work job, by a student month" twice during eight-month
seeking a management trainee position: employment. Cover Letter - Guidelines

Yard Care Worker  Planned and implemented  Single space your letter and double space
Smith's Lawn Service, Sacramento, CA: Summers activities for groups of 8-10 between paragraphs.
2007 and 2008   elementary school students.
 Use a business letter format.
 Keep your paragraphs brief and relevant. I recently completed a job with an interior designer 5. Ask a question
in Northern California where I was given the
 Tailor your letter to the position and Example: Are you looking for an individual who has
responsibility of running a fine art gallery and
company. You are selling yourself, so show set sales records for two different companies and
participating in multiple interior design projects. I
how your qualifications match the job has reorganized an ad campaign to reach
am looking for the opportunity to perform in this
duties and company goals. thousands more customers? (Follow with the
capacity for Arthur McLaughlin & Associates.
details of this accomplishment).
 Proofread your letter carefully and ask one Please consider my resume in regards to your
or two others to proofread it as well. design consultant position. Example: How much are rising production costs
Misspellings and grammatical errors affecting your bottom line? (Immediately give an
2. Name drop
communicate that you are a poor writer example of how your work can improve the bottom
and/or are careless. Don’t let this happen Example: Laurel Flower, who supervised my work line.)
to you! as an intern with your company, recommended
Cover Letter – Middle Paragraph
that I apply for the position of assistant sales
The Cover Letter – Structure
manager. (Follow with a description of your Write about how your experiences and education
A good cover letter is typically short, usually three- qualifications). match what the employer is looking for. You can
to-five paragraphs. expand on the main point(s) you introduced in the
Example: One of my friends, Mark Star, works as a
opening and bring up new examples. Provide
 The opening paragraph should catch the manager for XYZ Company. He recommended that I
specific examples as to how your qualities meet
employer's attention and state what write you about a position as a management
the employer's qualifications.
position you are applying for and why. trainee. He speaks highly of your company and
believes my leadership and past sales experience Example: My organizational communication major
 The middle paragraph should develop your would be an attribute to your organization. has given me four years of public speaking
theme by providing specific examples of
experience and an extensive background in
your qualifications. 3. Refer to company or career research
professional writing.
you have done
 The last paragraph should close by Example: I read the April 20 issue of the Wall Example: Competing on my college basketball team
requesting an interview and providing Street Journal with great interest. The article, for three years strengthened my teamwork skills
contact information. "Future Directions of Ten Corporations," and provided the opportunity to build strong
Cover Letter – First Paragraph mentioned that your company is looking for college relationships with my peers.
graduates with marketing backgrounds who are
Employers receive hundreds of resumes for each bilingual in Vietnamese and English for your new Employers consider achievements to be indicators
position. You want your cover letter to stand out, office in Saigon. (Follow with a description of your of future success, so do not be modest about
so start with an opening that grabs attention qualifications and how they match company yours. Using numbers as in the example
immediately. Following are a few examples of needs). demonstrates achievement. Show how your
openings that are effective and interesting. experience and achievements match the position
4. Refer to the content of the employer's requirements or company goals. The better job you
1. State how your skills and background ad do at matching yourself to the position, the more
match the job and are a benefit to the Example: When I read your ad in the Daily News likely you are to get an interview.
organization for a civil engineer, I almost believed you had
written it for me. (Follow with a description of your Example: While I served as the fundraising chair for
Example: In December, I will earn a degree in my fraternity, I planned the campaign; researched
qualifications).
interior design at California State University, Chico.
and identified possible donors; and organized  “Matter-of-Fact” Document
phone solicitation efforts, visits to potential
 Skills, Experiences, Education
donors, and several one-day events. As a result, we
raised $50,000— a 200 percent increase over the  Include Scope, Size, and Achievements
prior year. To be successful, I trained teams in
solicitation techniques, acted as mediator when Cover Letter
tempers became frayed, and recruited committees  Enthusiastic, Passionate, Persuasive
who worked together to anticipate and resolve
difficulties before they became crises.  How your Skills meet the position Needs

Cover Letter – Final Paragraph  How and Why you can help

Your closing paragraph or sentence should


encourage action. Offer one of two choices: either
"you call me" or "I will call you." If you have a
personal connection with the employer and
actually have a personal contact name and phone
number, the "I will call you" approach is good.
These days, however, it is often difficult to get
contact information so do not worry if you can't
follow-up. Finally, thank the employer for taking
the time to read and consider your letter and
resume.

Example: As I have described above, I am confident


my sales skills, organizational abilities, and
technical expertise will benefit (name of company).
I will call you in a week to check on the status of
my application. I look forward to setting up a time
for an interview. Thank you for your consideration.

Example: I would appreciate the opportunity to


meet and further discuss my qualifications and
your new graduate registered nurse program.
Please contact me at 530-898-3245 or
sjsmith6@yahoo.com. I look forward to hearing
from you. Thank you for your time and
consideration.

Resume vs. Cover Letter

Resume

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