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Rhetorical Analysis
Rhetorical Analysis
English 112
Rhetorical Analysis
“Welcome.” The first words a person researching schools expects to find. A welcome
page is the first page you will see on a website. College design tours around the idea of making
the person of interest feel welcome on campus. Promotions and advertisements only sell and
convince high school seniors to apply if they feel welcomed. The welcoming feeling creates a
lasting impression on the student that will eventually lead them to find a place of belonging on
said campus.
A college is a form of business. The more students they get applying and committing, the
more profit they will receive. Colleges want to attract students to apply and stay. The institutions
benefit by creating a warm, welcoming environment to show new coming students. William and
Mary took this idea to heart. They send positive messages about the campus through personal
experiences on social media and handwritten notes from alumni. William and Mary’s primary
goal is to attract students through their student body. Current students are constantly raving about
their unique and positive experiences regarding their peers. They use the appeals: the need for
achievement, affiliation, and autonomy. They combine them to create a sense of belonging on
their campus. William and Mary want to spread those positive stories to all who apply and visit,
Every December, William and Mary host their annual “Yule Log Ceremony.” The
college takes this special date to share a poem with prospecting students on their email list. It is a
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very casual, heartfelt email to encourage students to relax for the upcoming holiday. At the very
end is a postscript. It read, “P.S. The January 1 application deadline applies to a student’s actual
test scores, and recommendations may still be submitted after the January 1 deadline.” This
message encourages and reminds students of how flexible they are willing to be to gain new
applicants. They hope to create a warm message that encourages students to become interested in
their school. William and Mary also include a photograph of the Yule Log Ceremony. They hope
to spark excitement and interest in attending the same ceremony one day in the future. William
and Mary is using pathos to create a feeling of enjoyment and comfort at the idea of attending
their school. They also use ethos when explaining their application process in an attempt to ease
the stress of applicants. The main appeal they are trying to give the audience is the need for
affiliation. By using the appeals needed for aesthetic sensation and affiliation, they create a
William and Mary is predominantly seen as a more difficult school. Filled with high
prestige, this public ivy league is well known for its hardcore professors and rigorous academics.
Their message “For the Bold'' inspires the reader to believe they can achieve greatness. They use
pathos because it inspires a feeling of self-worth and intelligence, especially when received
directly in the mail. Audiences feel empowered and special that this was sent to them. William
and Mary uses the appeals need for affiliation and achievement. It inspires applicants to achieve
the impossible and to become bold to finish their education. William and Mary desires those who
care about their education and are willing to work for it. This message speaks directly to those
students.
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“William and Mary & You.” An inspiring message. It makes the reader feel noticed and that they
belong at this school. Followed by a sweet note about a student's possibilities, William and Mary
hopes people feel welcomed just by looking at the card. They use pathos to inspire and spark a
student's interest in going to this school. They want students to feel special and noticed when
applying here. They also use ethos when explaining all the possibilities a student can pursue here
at William and Mary. By using the appeal’s need for affiliation and autonomy, this school
promises a special experience and a home for each student. They know everyone will find their
Finally, William and Mary wants to share their statistics that make their school a great
environment. They use logos to share statistics about their graduation rate, organizations,
Princeton Review rankings, and the faculty-to-student ratio. The Princeton Review even ranked
William and Mary as number 4 in happiest students. This is to continue the need to have students
feel welcomed. They use ethos and pathos to encourage students that if they decide to come to
William and Mary, they will be happy and they will find their place. They use the appeal’s need
for achievement, autonomy, and affiliation. They want to tell prospective students that they will
succeed here due to their high graduation rate, great facilities, and amazing staff. They want to
share with applicants that they will be happy and find friends here, fulfilling their need for
affiliation. Last but not least, they will fulfill applicants' need for autonomy by giving them small
classrooms and a sense of belonging in their community. They want kids to be seen and heard,
William and Mary’s main goal is to create an environment in which students can succeed and
find their place. They want to express their beliefs and values to all applicants in the hopes that
they will attract more students. By creating a welcoming environment, they will continue to grow
1. Highlight the thesis. Is the thesis valid and written appropriately? Explain.
Yes because it lets the reader know that the essay will be about the effects of college marketing
on undecided students.
campus.
5. List the examples of strong, precise words the writer has used –
a. aesthetic e.
b. Prospective f.
c. rigorous g.
d. h.
(Hint to the writer – If the peer editor cannot find at least 8 strong words, you need to improve
word choice)