QUIZ II

MI-1205
D3 AKMET
Second Semester 2020/2021

Name : Elma Febriana

NIM : A020016
Date : 18 Mei 2021

INSTRUCTIONS
1. Write an 1800 – 2000-words argumentative essay consists of Introduction Paragraph,
(Minimal) 2 Body Paragraphs, and Conclusion Paragraph.
2. Choose 1 topic from the table below.
3. Before you write the essay, please write your essay outline in the given column. Then
write your argumentative essay on the given space in this file.
4. Upload your answer sheet on Schoology in Doc. file
5. The file name must be: Name – NIM – Quiz II
6. The deadline to submit your Quiz II is today at 16.00.

Topics for Argument

Banning cigarettes Banning violent video games
Requiring school uniforms Using animals for medical research
Mandating military service Requiring a test for people who want
children
Lowering the drinking age to Banning cell phones in schools
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Getting rid of zoos Requiring a year of study abroad

Essay Outline

Try to complete the following outline before you begin writing your essay. You may use
more support sentences if you need. And try to use complete sentences when it is
possible.

1. Introduction (Paragraph 1)
1. Hook:
What is the role of cell phones for us?
2. Connecting Information (Bridge):
Cellphone is one of the interpersonal communication tools. This
communication tool is considered the most effective to date for building
communication between people. Various types and brands are readily available in
the market so that they are easily obtained and purchased by the public. Likewise,
the prices are varied and affordable to all people. Currently, almost all people in
society use cell phones. Not only the middle and upper class people, the lower
class people are also able to have it. So it is not surprising that small children,
adolescents, adults and parents are familiar with this one communication tool.
Maybe schoolchildren or teenagers are the communities that use cell phones the
most. For them, cell phones are not just a means of communication. Various
features are available that can be used for other activities. For example Facebook,
Twitter, messenger, and other facilities. Of course, the most common reason for
school children is browsing to find information about learning materials and
assignments given by teachers at school.
3. Thesis Statement:
Currently, many schools have implemented prohibitions for students to bring
cellphones to school. This prohibition is of course acceptable to the parents of
students. This prohibition was imposed by schools with the aim of avoiding
disruption of the teaching and learning process in schools. In addition, schools
have also imposed a ban on bringing cellphones to school to avoid misuse of
cellphones by students and avoid cyberbullying. Even though the ban on carrying
cell phones had been announced, there were still students who did not pay
attention to it. There are even students who are desperate to carry and store them
in their bags. But for the astute students, they keep their cell phones under the
seats of the motorbikes that are parked in the parking lot. Maybe the school needs
to make a special policy to overcome this. Certain students may bring cellphones
but must be deposited at the picket table or the teacher council room. If there are
parents, family, or anyone who wants to communicate because of an urgent
situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but must contact the picket
officer first. That way at least the school takes a policy so that parents or family
or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the urgent
situation during school hours to contact the picket teacher. they keep the cell
phone under the seat of the motorbike parked in the parking lot. Maybe the school
needs to make a special policy to overcome this. Certain students may bring
cellphones but must be deposited at the picket table or the teacher council room.
If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to communicate because of an
urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but must contact the
picket officer first. That way at least the school takes a policy so that parents or
family or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the urgent
situation during school hours to contact the picket teacher. they keep the cell
 phone under the seat of the motorbike parked in the parking lot. Maybe the school
needs to make a special policy to overcome this. Certain students may bring
cellphones but must be deposited at the picket table or the teacher council room.
If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to communicate because of an
urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but must contact the
picket officer first. That way, at least the school takes a policy so that parents or
family or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the urgent
situation during school hours to contact the picket teacher. Certain students may
bring cellphones but must be deposited at the picket table or the teacher council
room. If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to communicate because
of an urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but must contact
the picket officer first. That way, at least the school takes a policy so that parents
or family or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the
urgent situation during school hours to contact the picket teacher. Certain students
may bring cellphones but must be deposited at the picket table or the teacher
council room. If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to communicate
because of an urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but
must contact the picket officer first. That way, at least the school takes a policy so
that parents or family or anyone who needs to communicate with students
because of the urgent situation during school hours to contact the picket teacher.
2. Body I (Paragraph 2)
First Reason topic sentence:
Bringing your cell phone to school can interfere with the teaching and learning
process at school.
Supporting details/sentences
1. Currently there are many acts of cheating students in various learning
activities, one of which is by taking photos of exam questions and sharing them
with other students. By taking a photo of the exam questions, students who have
not tested will know in advance which questions will appear on the exam later.
That way the student who gets the question will learn what is in the question only
or even look for the answer then make a cheat sheet and take it during the exam.
Students who take photos of these exam questions usually work together with
other students. Those who work together usually exchange questions. That way,
students who get these questions will get higher scores than students who take the
exam honestly. This is very detrimental to other students who take the exam
honestly.
2. In addition to these actions, many students also use their cellphones to search
for answers on the internet during exams. With the development of technology
that is getting more and more advanced every day, it will make it easier for
students to get various information on the internet. Now this has happened a lot
in schools. Even now this is considered normal by many students because
nowadays there are many cheatings that have been done. Searching for answers
on the internet during exams gives students good grades but in a bad way. If
students are always looking for answers on the internet every exam it will cause a
sense of laziness to study and dependence on cellphones because students have
started relying on cell phones. Cell phone addiction is not very good. With this
incident,
3. in addition to the various cheats committed by students during exams with cell
phones, by keeping cell phones at school also made students' learning
concentration decrease. This often happens when notifications on the cellphone
sound. That way it disturbs the students' concentration while listening to the
teacher's explanation. Even though there are regulations that require student
cellphones to be in silent mode, there are still several instances of students
forgetting to turn their cellphones on silent mode. When there is an incoming
notification, there will be a feeling of wanting to open the cellphone.

Body II (Paragraph 3)
Second Reason topic sentence:
Student abuse of cell phones is common in this technologically advanced world
Supporting details/sentences
1. One of the abuses of this cellphone is that students use their cellphones to view
and even store indecent videos and photos. Most of them get pornographic videos
and photos from their friends, then they share them with other friends. The easy
access to pornographic films or videos allows teenagers or students to watch
freely so that it creates a tendency for teenagers or students to watch
pornographic films over and over again. This has an impact on the difficulty of
concentrating in learning, as a result of which student learning outcomes are
low.That is not very good because most of them are children who are still
unstable. Watching these videos and photos can arouse curiosity and encourage
them to do bad things. If this is not controlled, there is a possibility that sexual
violence can occur in schools.
2. Not to mention, lately a lot of news has spread on television and radio,
cellphones are also used by many unscrupulous students as a means of
exchanging exam answers, be it the School Examination or the National
Examination which are said to be very secret and there is no way to leak answers.
3. Many students also abuse cell phones by playing games while lessons are in
progress. That action was very bad and very disrespectful. When the teacher is
explaining, but students play games, it is an act of disrespect for the teacher who
is teaching. Besides that, playing too much games is also not good for students.
Playing too many games can also create a feeling of dependency and want to
continue playing them. Addiction to playing games can make students experience
concentration problems. When students are addicted to playing games, it causes
the child's concentration to decrease, so he easily forgets and fails to focus.
Radiation exposure from electronic devices can also weaken a child's
concentration. That way it results in student achievement in school also
decreasing.

Body III (Paragraph 4)

Third Reason topic sentence:
Currently, bullying can not only be done in person, but can also be done via
cellphone.
Supporting details/sentences
 The development of technology makes cyberbullying increasingly common
among teenagers. Cyberbullying is all forms of violence experienced by children
or adolescents and perpetrated by their peers through cyberspace or the internet.
Cyberbullying is an incident where a child or teenager is teased, insulted,
intimidated or humiliated by another child or teenager through other
mediathrough the internet, digital technology or cell phones. Cyberbullying and
bullying directly have the same effects for their victims. The various impacts
experienced by victims of bullying, among othersDistraction, Using illegal drugs,
Not enthusiastic about going to school, decreased learning achievement,
withdrawing from the social environment so that they cannot interact with other
people, can even make victims become bullies because of a sense of revenge.
Because of these various impacts, bullying victims experience a decline in their
performance at school.
3. Conclusion (Paragraph 5)
In conclusion, at this time students are increasingly using cell phones as a means
of communication as well as being used as a tool to see things that are not
appropriate to be seen, aka pornographic images or videos. This in turn can cause
many younger generations, especially students, today to become corrupted and
take deviant actions. Everyone may follow technological developments such as
Cell phones, as long as they stick to the rules and norms that apply. Something
will be good if it is done well, and conversely something will have a bad effect if
it is done badly. Also as students, it is better if they take advantage of existing
technology to deepen their knowledge so thdeat they can improve their learning
achievement. Perhaps this is the basis for the issuance of regulations that do not
allow students to bring cellphones to school.

Write your argumentative essay here:

PROHIBITION OF BRINGING CELL PHONE TO SCHOOL

What is the role of cell phones for us? Cellphone is one of the interpersonal
communication tools. This communication tool is considered the most effective to date for
building communication between people. Various types and brands are readily available in
the market so that they are easily obtained and purchased by the public. Likewise, the prices
are varied and affordable to all people. Currently, almost all people in society use cell phones.
Not only the middle and upper class people, the lower class people are also able to have it. So
it is not surprising that small children, adolescents, adults and parents are familiar with this
one communication tool. Maybe schoolchildren or teenagers are the communities that use
cell phones the most. For them, cell phones are not just a means of communication. Various
features are available that can be used for other activities. For example Facebook, Twitter,
messenger, and other facilities. Of course, the most common reason for school children is
browsing to find information about learning materials and assignments given by teachers at
school. Currently, many schools have implemented prohibitions for students to bring
cellphones to school. This prohibition is of course acceptable to the parents of students. This
prohibition was imposed by schools with the aim of avoiding disruption of the teaching and
learning process in schools. In addition, schools have also imposed a ban on bringing
cellphones to school to avoid misuse of cellphones by students and avoid cyberbullying. Even
though the ban on carrying cell phones had been announced, there were still students who did
not pay attention to it. There are even students who are desperate to carry and store them in
their bags. But for the astute students, they keep their cell phones under the seats of the
motorbikes that are parked in the parking lot. Maybe the school needs to make a special
policy to overcome this. Certain students may bring cellphones but must be deposited at the
picket table or the teacher council room. If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to
communicate because of an urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but
must contact the picket officer first. That way at least the school takes a policy so that parents
or family or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the urgent situation
during school hours to contact the picket teacher. they keep the cell phone under the seat of
the motorbike parked in the parking lot. Maybe the school needs to make a special policy to
overcome this. Certain students may bring cellphones but must be deposited at the picket
table or the teacher council room. If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to
communicate because of an urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but
must contact the picket officer first. That way at least the school takes a policy so that parents
or family or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the urgent situation
during school hours to contact the picket teacher. they keep the cell phone under the seat of
the motorbike parked in the parking lot. Maybe the school needs to make a special policy to
overcome this. Certain students may bring cellphones but must be deposited at the picket
table or the teacher council room. If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to
communicate because of an urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but
must contact the picket officer first. That way, at least the school takes a policy so that
parents or family or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the urgent
situation during school hours to contact the picket teacher. Certain students may bring
cellphones but must be deposited at the picket table or the teacher council room. If there are
parents, family, or anyone who wants to communicate because of an urgent situation,
students are allowed to open the cellphone but must contact the picket officer first. That way,
at least the school takes a policy so that parents or family or anyone who needs to
communicate with students because of the urgent situation during school hours to contact the
picket teacher. Certain students may bring cellphones but must be deposited at the picket
table or the teacher council room. If there are parents, family, or anyone who wants to
communicate because of an urgent situation, students are allowed to open the cellphone but
must contact the picket officer first. That way, at least the school takes a policy so that
parents or family or anyone who needs to communicate with students because of the urgent
situation during school hours to contact the picket teacher.

Bringing your cell phone to school can interfere with the teaching and learning
process at school. Currently there are many acts of cheating students in various learning
activities, one of which is by taking photos of exam questions and sharing them with other
students. By taking a photo of the exam questions, students who have not tested will know in
advance which questions will appear on the exam later. That way the student who gets the
question will learn what is in the question only or even look for the answer then make a cheat
sheet and take it during the exam. Students who take photos of these exam questions usually
work together with other students. Those who work together usually exchange questions.
That way, students who get these questions will get higher scores than students who take the
exam honestly. This is very detrimental to other students who take the exam honestly. In
addition to these actions, many students also use their cellphones to search for answers on the
internet during exams. With the development of technology that is getting more and more
advanced every day, it will make it easier for students to get various information on the
internet. Now this has happened a lot in schools. Even now this is considered normal by
many students because nowadays there are many cheatings that have been done. Searching
for answers on the internet during exams gives students good grades but in a bad way. If
students are always looking for answers on the internet every exam it will cause a sense of
laziness to study and dependence on cellphones because students have started relying on cell
phones. Cell phone addiction is not very good. With this incident, in addition to the various
cheats committed by students during exams with cell phones, by keeping cell phones at
school also made students' learning concentration decrease. This often happens when
notifications on the cellphone sound. That way it disturbs the students' concentration while
listening to the teacher's explanation. Even though there are regulations that require student
cellphones to be in silent mode, there are still several instances of students forgetting to turn
their cellphones on silent mode. When there is an incoming notification, there will be a
feeling of wanting to open the cellphone.
 Student abuse of cell phones is common in this technologically advanced world. One
of the abuses of this cellphone is that students use their cellphones to view and even store
indecent videos and photos. Most of them get pornographic videos and photos from their
friends, then they share them with other friends. The easy access to pornographic films or
videos allows teenagers or students to watch freely so that it creates a tendency for teenagers
or students to watch pornographic films over and over again. This has an impact on the
difficulty of concentrating in learning, as a result of which student learning outcomes are
low.That is not very good because most of them are children who are still unstable. Watching
these videos and photos can arouse curiosity and encourage them to do bad things. If this is
not controlled, there is a possibility that sexual violence can occur in schools. Not to mention,
lately a lot of news has spread on television and radio, cellphones are also used by many
unscrupulous students as a means of exchanging exam answers, be it the School Examination
or the National Examination which are said to be very secret and there is no way to leak
answers. Many students also abuse cell phones by playing games while lessons are in
progress. That action was very bad and very disrespectful. When the teacher is explaining,
but students play games, it is an act of disrespect for the teacher who is teaching. Besides
that, playing too much games is also not good for students. Playing too many games can also
create a feeling of dependency and want to continue playing them.addiction to playing games
can make students experience concentration problems. When students are addicted to playing
games, it causes the child's concentration to decrease, so he easily forgets and fails to focus.
Radiation exposure from electronic devices can also weaken a child's concentration. That
way it results in student achievement in school also decreasing.

Currently, bullying can not only be done in person, but can also be done via
cellphone. The development of technology makes cyberbullying increasingly common among
teenagers. Cyberbullying is all forms of violence experienced by children or adolescents and
perpetrated by their peers through cyberspace or the internet. Cyberbullying is an incident
where a child or teenager is teased, insulted, intimidated or humiliated by another child or
teenager through other mediathrough the internet, digital technology or cell phones.
Cyberbullying and bullying directly have the same effects for their victims. The various
impacts experienced by victims of bullying, among othersDistraction, Using illegal drugs,
Not enthusiastic about going to school, decreased learning achievement, withdrawing from
the social environment so that they cannot interact with other people, can even make victims
become bullies because of a sense of revenge. Because of these various impacts, bullying
victims experience a decline in their performance at school.
 In conclusion, at this time students are increasingly using cell phones as a means of
communication as well as being used as a tool to see things that are not appropriate to be
seen, aka pornographic images or videos. This in turn can cause many younger generations,
especially students, today to become corrupted and take deviant actions. Everyone may
follow technological developments such as Cell phones, as long as they stick to the rules and
norms that apply. Something will be good if it is done well, and conversely something will
have a bad effect if it is done badly. Also as students, it is better if they take advantage of
existing technology to deepen their knowledge so thdeat they can improve their learning
achievement. Perhaps this is the basis for the issuance of regulations that do not allow
students to bring cellphones to school. Ffg