arguement ai

by Malcolm Alexander

Submission date: 28-Feb-2021 06:04PM (UTC-0800)

Submission ID: 1520671547
File name: Malcolm_Alexander_-_Argumentative_Essay_2021_-_FINAL.pdf (83.58K)
Word count: 1659
Character count: 9027
Fantastic hook and great introduction
overall!

Great explanation and use of

ethos

Great vocabulary
Good - I like how you changed this
part.

Both supporting paragraphs are extremely well developed and give

strong evidece and examples.

This is a well developed, logical refutation of the

counterargument.
What a positive and hopeful way to end this essay! You are a very strong writer and have done a great job developing
your ideas and using ethos, pathos and logos to argue your points. Well done, Malcolm!
Grade: Mastering
Mastering Ideas

Mastering Organization
 Mastering Voice

Mastering Word Choice

Mastering Sentence Fluency

Mastering Conventions
arguement ai
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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PAGE 1

Text Comment. Fantastic hook and great introduction overall!

Text Comment. Great explanation and use of ethos

Text Comment. Great vocabulary

PAGE 2

Text Comment. Good - I like how you changed this part.

Text Comment. Both supporting paragraphs are extremely well developed and give strong
evidece and examples.

Text Comment. This is a well developed, logical refutation of the counterargument.

PAGE 3

Text Comment. What a positive and hopeful way to end this essay! You are a very strong
writer and have done a great job developing your ideas and using ethos, pathos and logos to argue
your points. Well done, Malcolm!

QM Grade: Mastering
Mastering: Your grade was based on the following four sections of the rubric: Ideas, Organization,
Word Choice and Conventions.

PAGE 4

QM Mastering Ideas
You have a clear thesis with two strong supporting reasons.
 QM Mastering Organization
Your paper is well organized and easy to follow.

PAGE 5

QM Mastering Voice
Throughout the essay, you use an appropriate tone and voice for an argumentative paper.

QM Mastering Word Choice

You use appropriate vocabulary that engages the reader and enhances the essay.

QM Mastering Sentence Fluency

You use strong transitions and a variety of sentence lengths.

PAGE 6

QM Mastering Conventions
The majority of your paper used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.