Professional Documents
Culture Documents
(Indonesia Economic)
(232017511)
Accounting
Salatiga
2020
REVIEW PAPER 1 (Maria Lintang)
2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis
Data used : it is good because you can use from variuos data, not only from
the news.
Clarity : I think, you can give more detailed about the chronologies of the
case and the impact of indonesia economic itself.
Analysis : I think that you can put some graphs, tables, or pictures related
your explanation that could be supported your explanation.
2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
You can put more detailed about the good impact or bad impact of the cattle
livestock industry to indonesia economy. It is not really clear and deep about the benefit
of the industry in Indonesia.
2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
I think your data used can support your overall content and analysis. Therefore,
for the readers can understand clearly about each issues related the case. But you can also
put some graphs, tables, or pictures that could be give more knowledges related your
paper.
2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
You can put more detailed about the good impact or bad impact of the tobacco
industry to indonesia economy. It is not really clear and deep about the benefit of the
industry in Indonesia.
2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
Your data used can support your clarity and deepness of the analysis. But, you
also can put some graphs, tables, or pictures related your explanation that could be
supported your explanation.
2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
You can put more detailed about the good impact or bad impact of the tobacco
industry to indonesia economy. It is not really clear and deep about the benefit of the
industry in Indonesia.