REVIEW PAPER 1

The Analysis of Indonesia Capital City Relocation

1. Opinion overall about the paper :

I think it is a good paper because you can explain clearly and detail about the
case. It is interesting because based on your brenchmark, i can get more knowledge and
understanding that help me to understand not only from one country side.

2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
I think your data used can support your overall content and analysis. Therefore,
for the readers can understand clearly about each issues related the case. But you can also
put some graphs, tables, or pictures that could be give more knowledges related your
paper.

3. Questions for the writer :

I want to know your personal perspective about this case. Do you support or not
about this relocation? Will you agree with government if they want to make it happen?
Please explain your reasons.
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Contribution of Tobacco Industry to Indonesia Economy

1. Opinion overall about the paper :

From my perspective, it is a simple essay because you put focus and highlight to
the importance cigarette industry in relation with tobacco.

2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
You can put more detailed about the good impact or bad impact of the tobacco
industry to indonesia economy. It is not really clear and deep about the benefit of the
industry in Indonesia.

3. Questions for the writer :

I want to ask from your opinion, why are you interesting to choose this topic? If
you become a distributor tobacco, what is your action to boost the production tobacco in
Indonesia?
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The Effect of Deficit in BPJS Kesehatan to Indonesia Economic in the Health

Segment
1. Opinion overall about the paper :
I think it is a good paper because you give some details information about the big
issues related to the case so i can understand about the impact to indonesia economy.

2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
Your data used can support your clarity and deepness of the analysis. But, you
also can put some graphs, tables, or pictures related your explanation that could be
supported your explanation.

3. Questions for the writer :

From your perspective, what important things that government can do to prevent
this case in the future?
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Coal Mining In Indonesia

1. Opinion overall about the paper :

It is good paper because you can give simple explanation related to coal mining
through your data used such us the graph.

2. Opinion about the data used, content of the paper, clarity & deepneess of the analysis :
You can put more detailed about the good impact or bad impact of the tobacco
industry to indonesia economy. It is not really clear and deep about the benefit of the
industry in Indonesia.

3. Questions for the writer :

I want to ask from your opinion, why are you interesting to choose this topic? If
you become a distributor coal mining, what is your action to boost the production coal
mining in Indonesia?