ENGLISH JOURNAL

SMAS TUNAS DAUD

ACADEMIC YEAR .

2018-2019

Student : Thomas Henry Aviocardo

Grade Level : XII IPA 1

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Subject Teacher : Sylvie B. Swinkels

SEQUENCE OF JOURNAL ENTRIES

First Semester

Date
Unit Unit Topic
From To
1. How do the senses shape our experiences. 27/8/ 28/8/1
1 8
8
2. How do generations differ from one 10/10 13/10/
another? / 18 18

3. What makes a community? 1/11/ 2/11/1

1 8
8

SEQUENCE OF JOURNAL ENTRIES

Second Semester

Date
Unit Unit Topic
From To
4.

5.

6.

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WRITING PLANNER
Unit Topic: What makes a community?
Writing Task: Persuasive Essay.
Date: 14 November 2018

Task Topic: Globalization impact on Indonesian culture

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Brainstorm / Graphic Organizer ​(see workbook)​:

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Essay Outline:

● Hook: Indonesian culture since ancient time always changes, because

of the society who really want a change of culture and the
culture changes so rapidly because of influence globalization into
Indonesian culture. Overview: The elements of globalization also
included into local culture, national culture, and global culture, because
of people should have much efforts to preserve and use indonesian
culture along with all of indonesian culture.
● Thesis: globalization impact are development of advanced technologies
that help humans but can also damage the mental and moral of youth.

● MP1: Indonesia is one of the biggest island states

● from Sabang to Merauke and each region has a different cultures

● the different cultures are characteristic of each of their respective

regions.
Con: it needs to be preserved, be preserved and utilized.

● MP2: But as the development of the times and in the world culture in
the era of globalization had made a significant difference and the
changes that could lead to a positive direction and towards negative
● positive impact that can be felt from globalization is the progress of
technology that has been giving up easy for everyone to communicate
● The negative impact that is like the values of Indonesian culture when
it was contaminated with western culture so this really have an impact
on the pattern of human life, for example, the manner of dress, manner
of social, foods and drinks.
Con: most unfortunate is to start the erosion of awareness of
the local culture which is something that for generations such as customs, dances,
traditional songs etc.

● MP3: Culture in society is always changes and changes occurred when

a cultural contamine from other culture.
● The impact of globalization changes life patterns of Indonesian society
● change of culture are happens and it can’t be separated from the role of

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 the community.
● All the things that concerns about globalization needs to be reviewed
Con: how the impact of globalization to local culture, national and global?

● MP4: To preserve our culture, we need to do something big in our

lives, we have to take our part in it.
● We could do little things like wearing batik to school
● we have so much uniqueness that other country doesnt have.

Con: if we don’t care about it, any other country could easily claim our culture.
● MP5: we as a young generation shouldn’t be shy for loving our own
culture
● When everyone is riding the wave, they always follow the trend, we
should not do that because our culture will slowly be forgotten.

Conclusion: We must remember our heroes’ struggle against every

countries that were trying to steal everything from our country. The biggest
reason they do that is because our country has everything that their country
doesn’t have. If we don’t love our country enough, many other country will do it
for Indonesia.

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 Globalization impact for Indonesian Culture

Indonesian culture since ancient time always changes, because of the society

who really want a change of culture and the culture changes so rapidly because of
influence globalization into Indonesian culture. The elements of globalization also
included into local culture, national culture, and global culture, because of people
should have much efforts to preserve and use indonesian culture along with all of
indonesian culture. Beside that also handling about all of globalization impact
which take a positive impact and negative impact. The pattern of society life now
are different from past, it also due to of globalization. Besides that, globalization
impact are development of advanced technologies that help humans but can also
damage the mental and moral of youth. Therefore, all of globalization elements
needs to reviewed first.

Indonesia is one of the biggest island states, from Sabang to Merauke

and each region has a different cultures, the different cultures are characteristic of
each of their respective regions. Indonesia is a country that has cultural also known
as the country with the social environment culture that is characterized by the
values of life of friendly people who had manners, and peaceful society. In
Indonesian also a lot of ancient remains a culture that is diverse neighborhood well
in the form of a complex as human activity, traditional, and all it needs to be
preserved, be preserved and utilized.

But as the development of the times and in the world culture in the era of
globalization had made a significant difference and the changes that could lead to a
positive direction and towards negative, all the changes must be wary if the changes
to negative point, positive impact that can be felt from globalization is the progress
of technology that has been giving up easy for everyone to communicate, etc. For
example in the english subject, we can use google classroom to submit our works,
we can save so much papers from that.

The negative impact that is like the values of Indonesian culture when it was
contaminated with western culture so this really have an impact on the pattern of
human life, for example, the manner of dress, manner of social, foods and drinks
banned and the most unfortunate is to start the erosion of awareness of
the local culture which is something that for generations such as customs, dances,
traditional songs etc.

Culture in society is always changes and changes occurred when a cultural

contamine from other culture. The impact of globalization changes life patterns of
Indonesian society, especially in local culture affected, change of
culture are happens and it can’t be separated from the role of the community. All
the things that concerns about globalization needs to be reviewed, how the impact

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 of globalization to local culture, national and global? How to preserve the heritage
of culture that has been there? All the questions it needs to be through and find
answers to keep the Indonesian culture with the values of culture.

To preserve our culture, we need to do something big in our lives, we have

to take our part in it. We could do little things like wearing batik to school, which is
one of our government’s regulation for now. We need to be proud as an Indonesian,
we must be proud of our own country, we have so much uniqueness that other
country doesnt have. But if we don’t care about it, any other country could easily
claim our culture, we as a young generation shouldn’t be shy for loving our own
culture, because it’s something to actually be proud of. When everyone is riding the
wave, they always follow the trend, we should not do that because our culture will
slowly be forgotten.

We must remember our heroes’ struggle against every countries that were
trying to steal everything from our country. The biggest reason they do that is
because our country has everything that their country doesn’t have. If we don’t love
our country enough, many other country will do it for Indonesia.

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 BIBLIOGRAPHY
Sources per essay MLA Style (websites, interviews, journals, books, etc.)

“Pengaruh Globalisasi terhadap Budaya Indonesia” kompasiana, 14 november 2018,

https://www.kompasiana.com/haritsmasduqi/591244dcca23bdb0058b4567/pengaruh

-globalisasi-terhadap-kebudayaan-indonesia

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 STUDENT REFLECTION
Answer truthfully by giving a tick in the boxes of choice

Characteristic Great Good O.K. Not So

Good
Did I plan my writing process well? (graphic x
organizer, outline, and essay)
Did I ask for guidance in planning for my own X
learning process?
Did I involve others in collaborative learning? X
(group work)
Did I plan the writing based on prior knowledge X
and experience?
Did I find the writing process interesting and X
motivating?
Could I meet the objectives set to achieve the x
writing task?
Did I construct meaning from my writing X
process?
Did I include peer editing in my writing X
process?
Did I follow my graphic organizer and outline X
to write?
What overall score would I give myself for my x
writing tasks?
Comments:

Signature:

Name: Thomas Henry Aviocardo

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Date: 14 November 2018

TEACHER REFLECTION
Answer truthfully by giving a tick in the boxes of choice

Characteristic Great Good O.K. Not So

Good
Did the student plan the writing process well?
(graphic organizer, outline, and essay)
Did the student ask for my guidance in planning
for his/her own learning process?
Did the student involve others in collaborative
learning? (group work)
Did the student plan the writing based on prior
knowledge and experience?
Did the student show interest and motivation
during the writing process?
Could the student meet the objectives set to
achieve the writing task?
Did the student construct meaning from the
writing process?
Did the student include peer editing in the
writing process?
Did the student follow the graphic organizer
and outline?
What overall score will I give the student for
his/her writing tasks?
Comments: Score:

Signature:

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Name: Ms. Sylvie B. Swinkels

Date:

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