Question: Education is the key to a good life. Do you agree?

Introduction Introduce the Education is very important to every family and every parent
topic: wants their child to be educated. Governments spend a lot of
money to develop education in a country.
Definition Education includes all levels up to a degree, Masters or PhD.
A good life – a life where we are happy with ourselves,
financially comfortable and we have a good relationship with
others
QUESTION Many people say that “Education is the key to a good life.”

Stand: I fully agree with this.

Thesis I fully agree that education is the key to a good life because
Statement it provides opportunities for a good career, helps us to
(3 main improve our lives and helps us to have happy relationships
points)

Body Topic Education will provide better opportunities for a good career
Paragraph Sentence that will allow us to live a comfortable life.
Point 1
Elaboration ● With a good education, a person can get a diploma or
What? degree from university.
● While we are at university we will gain a lot of important
knowledge and skills related to our future job,

Why/How? ● With better educational qualifications like a degree, we can

get a good job with a higher salary.
● If we go for higher education like training or Masters, we
can also be promoted and earn more money.

Example ● For example we get a degree and work as teacher in a

school and later we get Masters and work as a lecturer in
university.
● In both these jobs we can earn a lot of money.

Explanation ● We will have a good life because we can have job

(Impact) satisfaction. All the things we studied in university can be
applied and we will be good at our jobs.
 ● With the money that we earn, we can afford a comfortable
life. We can buy a nice house, drive a good car and go on
holidays with our families

Tie up/ mini Therefore, I believe that education is the key to a good life
conclusion because it helps us to have a good career and comfortable life

Point 2 Topic Education is the way to fully understand ourselves, our

Sentence personality. Our health, our bodies, languages

Elaboration

Example

Explanation
(Impact)

Tie up

Point 3 Topic Education can help us foster happier relationships with

Sentence those around us

Elaboration

Example

Explanation
(Impact)

Tie up

Conclusion Summarize
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thesis
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