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Bachelor in Education
Teaching English as a Foreign Language
Subject: Writing Strategies in English
Looping: Loop Two
In this section, you are going to think, choose and define a summary taking into account the
first activity calling Loop One, for writing free paragraphs on the following Topic:
* Plan: Establish a summary of the first activity in some short lines with the creating sentence in
the first unit: Use your summary sentence as your starting point.
* Write: Establish a new summary in two paragraphs taking into account the second writing in the
first activity one for this unit calling Loop One and with the idea:
My history is about when I was a child always I`ve been interested in music, In the other hand on weekends, I seat in
front of the speaker to listen ballad of my favourite singer Sabu.
Behind the success and fame, he has a terrible childhood because as a child he was very poor, he robbed other people
to buy food and was part of the youth gang, then Sabu ran away from the young gang, and he dedicates himself the free
time to compose songs and practice.
In Second place Sabu was my inspiration for your beautiful voice and your wonderful songs that he interpreted;
However, your real name is Hector Jorge Luis but the origin of the artistic name Sabu proceed from an hindi actor that in
the 40s year starred in a movie ``The Thief of Bagdad` `Finally Hèctor Jorge Luis adopted this artistic name.
Never I stop to listen to Sabu, he was the beautiful voice in the 80s, Thank to this positive espectation i used to being a
great Singer in one day after studying English.
In the present day i keep listening to Sabu´s songs and I going to Batuta on Wednesday to singing lessons and alto
metallophone, my Finally I love to tell this story because I am passionate about music.
In my spare time I practice Christmas carols on my guitar and sing and write the melodies in my notebook so that I don't
forget because my father taught me to take the melodies in order to learn new songs every day.
No only do like Sabu, Actually i like Mamie Van Doren, Jayne Mansfield, Jane Russell, Diana Dors, Because Your songs
does not appear in Google. ,I practice listening exercise repeat the songs and write down the lyrics.
Boy Catchers Theme It`s too late Wo Ist Der Man Looking for trouble
My sister taught me when the lirycs does not appear in internet, it was necessary to do the listening excersise, it is very
productive to improve my english level.
* Reflect: Read what you have written. Analyse. Look for the summary in the last two paragraphs
and identifying the most interesting thought, the richest detail, the most intriguing or compelling
issue. Your goal is to identify the ‘core’ in the text you have generated. Write an evaluation of you
have written and put it in the next lines:
R/= My detail most interesting in my summery is the beginning because always I`ve always interested in music,
on weekends I seat in front of the speaker to listen ballad of my favourite singer Sabu.
In Second place Sabu was my inspiration for your beautiful voice and your wonderful songs that he interpreted;
However, your real name is Hector Jorge Luis but the origin of the artistic name Sabu proceeds from an hindi actor
that in the 40s year starred in a movie ``The Thief of Bagdad` `Finally Hèctor Jorge Luis adopted this artistic name.
From my point of view the free writing contributes to overcome the limitations we find to
incorporate the vocabulary, However help to get more fluency in the oral and written
skills.
This technique is very enriching in the English language, to express what I like and What I
don’t like, to tell story, experiences etc.
THANK YOU
LOOP 3
In this section, you are going to reflect, choose and analyse the looping process reflection
taking into account the first activity calling Loop One and the second calling Loop Two, for
writing free drafts on the following Topic:
* Plan and write: Establish the reflection about the first and the second activities in some short lines
with some points Rinse and repeat until you’ve had enough, until you’ve got enough words to be going
on with. If you have the energy, you may like to conclude your looping session by reading through all of
the loops again and marking any ideas that you didn’t explore that are still worthy of following through.
Please answer the next questions?
R/= Very happy and proud because the topic is very enriching in the
English learning.
* Write: Establish a new draft if you want to check all aspects in activity one and two (It isn’t
mandatory):
I`ve always been interested in music when I was a child and sometimes, I seat in front of the speaker to listen ballad in one hour and
repeat the disc more than three times on weekends.
The singer who inspires me is Sabu, In the other hand he was a famous singer from Argentina for your successful song Small and
fragile and How much I love you.
Behind the success and fame, he has a terrible childhood because as a child he was very poor, he robbed other people to buy food
and was part of the youth gang, then Sabu ran away from the young gang, and he dedicates himself the free time to compose your
beautifull songs:
Never I stop to listen to Sabu, he was the beautiful voice in the 80s, Thank to this positive espectation i used to being a great Singer
in one day after studying English.
In the present day i keep listening to Sabu´s songs and I going to Batuta on Wednesday to singing lessons and alto metallophone,
my Finally I love to tell this story because I am passionate about music.
In my spare time I practice Christmas carols on my guitar and sing and write the melodies in my notebook so that I don't forget
Author: Diana Margarita Araque
Adapted by: Rubén Mauricio Muñoz – Elsy Marina Cantor
Corporación Universitaria del Caribe “CECAR”
Bachelor in Education
Teaching English as a Foreign Language
Subject: Writing Strategies in English
Looping: Loop Two
because my father taught me to take the melodies in order to learn new songs every day.
No only do like Sabu, Actually i like Mamie Van Doren, Jayne Mansfield, Jane Russell, Diana Dors, Because Your songs does not
appear in Google. ,I practice listening exercise repeat the songs and write down the lyrics.
Boy Catchers Theme It`s too late Wo Ist Der Man Looking for trouble
As well as I want to leave a phrase: The most important thing in life is to always find what you are passionate
about.
For example: In my point of view, what I am most passionate about is music because my grandparents were
musicians and composers
* Reflect: Read what you have written. Analyse. Look for the sentence (Loop One), the summary
(Loop Two) and the reflection in all process and write your ideas in the next paragraph (the next
lines):
In second place my summery in the Loop 2 = My history is about when I was a child always I`ve been interested in
music, In the other hand on weekends, I seat in front of the speaker to listen ballads of my favourite singer
Sabu.Behind the success and fame, he has a terrible childhood because as a child he was very poor, he robbed
other people to buy food and was part of the youth gang, then Sabu ran away from the young gang, and he
dedicates himself the free time to compose your beautifull songs:
R/=The Free-Writing has helps me a lot to write with clearly and express with security my
musical topic and I had the chance to describe my experiences and feelings about How
music has influenced in my life.
In second place the free writing is a enriching subject in my learning process However It
helps to contribute better the ideas and improve the concentration.