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My friend on his first day of work
The cultures of my country
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- sand castle exhibitions - Surf lessons - watch sunsets
- play volleyball or soccer

- The tourist wonders of my country

- Traffic in my country - how big is my country?
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The culture of Panama emerges from the diverse cultures that have
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Is a country with beautiful mountains,
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-shares its borders with five different countries

-There are four official languages

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air conditioned rooms
work out alone or with profesional personal trainers
staff nutrition experts
aerobics, swimming and kickboxing class
whirlpool bath or a sauna
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