ADRIÁN SERRANO GARCINUÑO 1º BACH

WRITING UNIT 2

Some centuries ago, there was a village called Matemotor. This town was localized in the east of
USA, in a very lonely valley. It was small and far away from the city, the nights were cold and scaring
there, and the people were strange and shy. It was 1869, a new couple from Europa moved there in
order to build their own farm, they were Josh and Cat.

They hadn´t met✓ anybody from the town, however✓ , they didn´t had good feelings about their
new home. As soon as✓ they finished preparing the farm, they fill it with a lot of animals such as✓
cows, sheeps, pigs…
There was nothing strange on the first few weeks, instead, the farm started to produce money, and
both were happy and cheerful✓ .
Usually Josh collect all the products early on the morning without problem, but the second weekend
of December was not the same. When he went to pick up the chicken´s eggs they acted strange, they
look like they were afraid of him. In the bottom of the barnyard there was a beheaded chicken. Since
that day, once a month Josh and Cat found a new decapitated animal. The amount of animals was
decreasing, because of that, they started to investigate.
One month later, Cat saw a strange black figure near the forest, it was killing one of their sheeps, so
✓ she immediately decided to go there and stop it. Suddenly ✓ the person stopped and looked at
her, she quickly took her wife´s gun and shot him afterwards.

In the end✓ the couple was so scared that decided to come back to Europe. The mystery is that
since they move away from the village, the animals have lived for their own, and once per month a
new animal appear without head.

Excelente Notable Aceptable Insuficiente

 El mensaje es claro, preciso
y coherente, con ideas
interesantes, que se atienen
al tema propuesto. Se sigue
el requisito de extensión
mínima.
0.5
Contenido
Se muestra capacidad para
desarrollar un punto de
vista personal, con
opiniones originales. Las
ideas se ilustran de forma
adecuada
0.5
Se emplean conectores de
forma efectiva y variada.
0.5
No hay errores importantes
de gramática
0.5
Forma
No muestra limitaciones en
el uso del vocabulario que
utiliza.
0.5
No hay errores importantes
de ortografía y/o puntación.
0.5
Content: 1,5
Structure: 0.75
El mensaje no es del todo
claro. Las ideas son buenas y
atienden al tema propuesto.
Se ajusta al requisito de
extensión mínima.
0.25
Se muestra capacidad para
desarrollar un punto de vista
personal, aunque falta
originalidad. Las ideas se
ilustran adecuadamente.
0.25
Hay transiciones temáticas
lógicas y conectores, aunque
no se varía demasiado.
0.25
Hay 1/2 errores importantes
de gramática
0.25
El vocabulario es algo variado
pero algunos términos no son
lo suficientemente precisos.
0.25
Hay 1/2 errores importantes
de ortografía y/o puntuación
0.25
El mensaje no es claro, El mensaje es demasiado
algo confuso y/o confuso, ambiguo o
ambiguo. Hay algunas incoherente, con ideas
ideas repetitivas. Se irrelevantes o repetitivas. No
ajusta a requisito de se sigue el requisito de
extensión mínima extensión mínima.
0.125 0
A veces no se distingue Es difícil distinguir la postura
la postura personal del personal del autor. Se
autor. Las ideas no se incluyen generalidades sin
ilustran adecuadamente fundamento porque no se
con datos o ejemplos. aportan datos o ejemplos que
ilustren las ideas expuestas.
0.125 0
Hay transiciones Faltan conectores adecuados y
temáticas lógicas pero se acusa una falta de
faltan conectores transiciones temáticas lógicas.
adecuados.
0
0.125
Hay 3/4 errores Hay errores (+4) graves de
importantes de gramática
gramática
0.125 0
Falta variación y/o hay Hay errores graves de léxico.
varios errores de
vocabulario o del uso de
éste
0
0.125
Hay 3/4 errores Hay múltiples (+4)
importantes de equivocaciones en el uso de la
ortografía y/o ortografía y/o la puntuación.
puntuación
0
0.125
Mark: 2.25 / 3