Academic Essay Writing

Cahya Fuadi Muchlis

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Topic : Shower at night
Title : Is taking a shower at night dangerous?
Introduction paragraph
Thesis Statement : The habit of taking a shower at night can actually have a detrimental
effect on the health of the human body.
Body 1st paragraph :
Topic Sentence :Shower night causes the body’s metabolism disturbed
Supporting sentence :

 Our body temperature rises as we go about our day. So when we take a shower at
night and the overall temperature of our bodies are relatively colder, the water could
"shock" you.
 Drastic changes in body temperature.

Body 2nd paragraph :

Topic Sentence : night shower cause rheumatism
Supporting sentence :

 the joint capsule will shrink every time the body poured with cold water or when the
temperature is cold.
 if you already have a rheumatic disease. Or if necessary, use warm water so it does
not recur.
Body 3rd paragraph :
Topic Sentence : night shower is not recomennded
Supporting sentence :

 it can cause various detrimental effect on the health of the human body