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Paraphrasing means putting someone else’s ideas into your own words.

Paraphrasing a
source involves changing the wording while preserving the original meaning.
Paraphrasing is an alternative to quoting (copying someone’s exact words and putting
them in quotation marks). In academic writing, it’s usually better to integrate sources by
paraphrasing instead of quoting. It shows that you have understood the source, reads
more smoothly, and keeps your own voice front and center.
Every time you paraphrase, it’s important to cite the source. Also take care not to use
wording that is too similar to the original. Otherwise, you could be at risk of
committing plagiarism.

How to paraphrase correctly


Putting an idea into your own words can be easier said than done. Let’s say you want to
paraphrase the text below, about population decline in a particular species of sea snails.
Example: Source text“Like other marine animals living near heavily populated coasts, horse conchs have
lost considerable habitat to development and pollution, including favorite breeding grounds along mud
flats and seagrass beds. Their Gulf habitat is also warming due to climate change, which scientists think
further pressures the animals, based on the negative effects extra heat has on other big mollusks”
(Barnett, 2022).

Incorrect paraphrasing
You might make a first attempt to paraphrase it by swapping out a few words
for synonyms.
Example: Incorrect paraphrasing

Like other sea creatures inhabiting the vicinity of highly populated coasts, horse conchs have
lost substantial territory to advancement and contamination, including preferred breeding
grounds along mud flats and seagrass beds. Their Gulf home is also heating up due to global
warming, which scientists think further puts pressure on the creatures, predicated
upon the harmful effects extra warmth has on other large mollusks (Barnett, 2022).
This attempt at paraphrasing doesn’t change the sentence structure or order of
information, only some of the word choices. And the synonyms chosen are poor:
 “Advancement and contamination” doesn’t really convey the same meaning as
“development and pollution.”
 Sometimes the changes make the tone less academic: “home” for “habitat” and “sea
creatures” for “marine animals.”
 Adding phrases like “inhabiting the vicinity of” and “puts pressure on” makes the text
needlessly long-winded.
 Global warming is related to climate change, but they don’t mean exactly the same thing.
Because of this, the text reads awkwardly, is longer than it needs to be, and remains too
close to the original phrasing. This means you risk being accused of plagiarism.

Correct paraphrasing
Let’s look at a more effective way of paraphrasing the same text.
Example: Correct paraphrasingScientists believe that temperature rises resulting from climate change
are negatively impacting horse conchs living in the Gulf of Mexico. Development and pollution have also
deprived them of important breeding grounds (Barnett, 2022).

Here, we’ve:
 Only included the information that’s relevant to our argument (note that the paraphrase
is shorter than the original)
 Introduced the information with the signal phrase “Scientists believe that …”
 Retained key terms like “development and pollution,” since changing them could alter
the meaning
 Structured sentences in our own way instead of copying the structure of the original
 Started from a different point, presenting information in a different order
Because of this, we’re able to clearly convey the relevant information from the source
without sticking too close to the original phrasing.

Examples of paraphrasing
Explore the tabs below to see examples of paraphrasing in action.
 Journal article
 

 Newspaper article
 

 Magazine article
Source text Paraphrase

“The current research extends the previous work by revealing The research of Brouwer (2019, p. 874)
that listening to moral dilemmas could elicit a FLE [foreign- suggests that the foreign-language effect
language effect] in highly proficient bilinguals. … Here, it has can occur even among highly proficient
been demonstrated that hearing a foreign language can even bilinguals, influencing their moral decision
influence moral decision making, and namely promote more making, when auditory (rather than
utilitarian-type decisions” (Brouwer, 2019, p. 874). written) prompting is given.

How to cite a paraphrase


Once you have your perfectly paraphrased text, you need to ensure you credit the
original author. You’ll always paraphrase sources in the same way, but you’ll have to
use a different type of in-text citation depending on what citation style you follow.

Paraphrasing vs. quoting


It’s a good idea to paraphrase instead of quoting in most cases because:
 Paraphrasing shows that you fully understand the meaning of a text
 Your own voice remains dominant throughout your paper
 Quotes reduce the readability of your text
But that doesn’t mean you should never quote. Quotes are appropriate when:
 Giving a precise definition
 Saying something about the author’s language or style (e.g., in a literary analysis paper)
 Providing evidence in support of an argument
 Critiquing or analyzing a specific claim

Paraphrasing vs. summarizing


A paraphrase puts a specific passage into your own words. It’s typically a similar length
to the original text, or slightly shorter.
When you boil a longer piece of writing down to the key points, so that the result is a lot
shorter than the original, this is called summarizing.
Paraphrasing and quoting are important tools for presenting specific information from
sources. But if the information you want to include is more general (e.g., the overarching
argument of a whole article), summarizing is more appropriate.
Example: Summarizing

Martin (2016) argues it is important to consider the impact of human architecture on the evolution of
other species. Stating that the indoor biome—the realm of species that live and reproduce largely inside
human-built structures—represents an understudied area for ecologists, Martin makes the case for
studying this biome as an essential way of understanding the world of the Anthropocene.

Avoiding plagiarism when you paraphrase


When paraphrasing, you have to be careful to avoid accidental plagiarism.
This can happen if the paraphrase is too similar to the original quote, with phrases or
whole sentences that are identical (and should therefore be in quotation marks). It can
also happen if you fail to properly cite the source.
Paraphrasing tools are widely used by students, and can be especially useful for non-
native speakers who may find academic writing particularly challenging. While these
can be helpful for a bit of extra inspiration, use these tools sparingly, keeping academic
integrity in mind.
To make sure you’ve properly paraphrased and cited all your sources, you could elect
to run a plagiarism check before submitting your paper. And of course, always be sure
to read your source material yourself and take the first stab at paraphrasing on your
own.

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