CEL2103 WRITING ACADEMIC TEXTS

WRITING PORTFOLIO TASK 2 - 25%

NAME : MUHAMMAD FIKRI BIN MOHD NAJIB MATRIC NO : 203354 GROUP : 44

Based on your outline in Task 1, write your thesis statement, topic sentences and supporting sentences.
These must be written in COMPLETE SENTENCES.

Theme : Technology
Topic : Comparing and contrasting between Iphone mobile device and Redmi mobile device
Subjects : Iphone and Redmi

THESIS STATEMENT
Although Iphone mobile device and Redmi mobile device share similarities in term of basic function as smartphone, they differ in aspects of
smartphone specification.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1 – SIMILARITY

TOPIC SENTENCE

The similarity between of Iphone mobile device and Redmi mobile device is same basic function as smartphone.

SUPPORTING SENTENCE 1 SUPPORTING SENTENCE 2

Both Iphone and Redmi mobile device can communicate using their Iphone and Redmi mobile device allowed us to surfing the internet
own aplication like Facetime and Mi Community. using Safari and Google Chrome.

BODY PARAGRAPH 2 - DIFFERENCE

TOPIC SENTENCE
Despite this two device have a similarity in basic function as smartphone, Iphone and Redmi mobile device also have a differences in term of
their specification.

SUPPORTING SENTENCE 1 SUPPORTING SENTENCE 2

Mostly people said that quality of Iphone camera is quite better than Furthemore, battery capacity for Iphone is quite low around 3000
any other smartphone. Meanwhile, quality camera of Redmi also mAh while the battery capacity of Redmi is incredible higher to
great and not really far with Iphone camera but people still choose compare with Iphone around 5000 mAh.
Iphone camera because of their originality in picture.
 Task 2 Score

PO3 (n/17)

PO4 (n/8)