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Tool Design
Abstract
transporting 5 heavy materials 6, these can only be used 7 in Repetitive word: materials
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Passive voice
flat surfaces and 8 it can't transport 9 from one floor to 4
[really]
another. To asses 10 this problem, the concepts of 5
Repetitive word: transporting
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transporting 11 materials using trolley carts and wheels Repetitive word: materials
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rolling over bumpy surfaces are studied to know the factors Passive voice
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transport tools that can climb stairs, transporting cargos Overused word: effective
stairs with this wheel isn't that smooth because of the gap
between the wheels.
There are several existing designs of transportation tool
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available in the markets that can carry loads in incline 30 29 Passive voice
approach of the wheel will also be made 41 so that the tool 42 Possibly confused word
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[differs → differ]
can roll over different surfaces and to 43 reduce bumps 32
[differs from]
when it is operating in incline or stairs. Proposed 44 design 33
[to fully motorize → to motorize fully]
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will be based 45 according to the results of the kinematic Overused word: effective
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Passive voice
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[in order to → to]
2.3 Hand Truck
Fig. 2.3 – Hand Truck
The Hand Truck provides a novel 65 vehicle of the barrow 56
[the stability]
or hand truck type, so constructed that it may be rolled 66 on
its wheels along an approximately horizontal surface, or b
slid downstairs or upstairs, without bumping it being 67
possible. Thus, to handle merchandise readily, without 57
Passive voice
unloading it, when it is desired to transport the 58
[the floor]
merchandise from one floor to another. The lower portions 59
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of the wheels are substantially flush with the lower edges Overused word: certain
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of the runners, and the truck can be slid down a pair of Passive voice
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stairs, or be drawn up a stair, on the runners without Repetitive
Passive word: floor
voice
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2.5 Manual Scissor Lift Table Overused word: certain
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Fig. 2.5 – Manual Scissor Lift Table [a certain]
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A scissor lift is type 89 of 88 platform that can move only [over center → over-center]
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vertically. Scissor lift was easy to use/operate and 90 it will Noun string
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be used conveniently at industries and other common 91 [push pull → push-pull]
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equipment handling devices. Scissor lifting mechanism was [push pull → push-pull]
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Passive voice
design 92 to lift person, materials, and loads smoothly to 80
Possibly confused word
desired 93 height. A scissor lift provides most economic 81
[, and]
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dependable & versatile methods of lifting loads; it had few Passive voice
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moving parts which may only require lubrication. A scissor 84
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lift mechanism was a device used to extend or retract a Dangling
Passive
Passive voice
modifier
voice
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platform by hydraulic, pneumatic, or mechanical means. 87
Passive voice
Passive voice
and down in stairs because of its arc surface. To be able to [the desired]
transport tool must be able to roll over stairs and as much Possibly miswritten word: wheel chairs
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[has → have]
as possible it should not cause too much bump since
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transport tools like carts or wheelchairs deals on certain 114 Overused word: effective
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Passive voice
transported 123 load 124 can be tilt 125 at any time to succeed Vagueness
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Vagueness
in working in even exceptional conditions. Chainwheels is 110
[In addition → Also]
capable to move 126 on different tracks and even 127
uncertain flooring effortlessly up and down slopes. A two- 111
Passive voice
wheeled hand truck has a vertically inclined upright frame 112
Dangling modifier
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with a load supporting nose at its lower end. The frame 128 Overused word: effective
is supported 129 on a pair of wheels mounted on an axle by
brackets which are pivotally connected 130 to the frame for
movement from a first load supporting position adjacent 114
Overused word: certain
the frame to a rearward second position for supporting
higher center of gravity loads.
second position in which the wheels are moved rearwardly Passive voice
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to support loads with relatively a higher center of gravity; Passive voice
wheels and axle are moved from said first position to said Passive voice
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second position, and back again. 137 Passive voice
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[, it → ; it]
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[movement is or movement was]
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Overused word: effective
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Overused word: certain
Fig. 4.1.1 – Existing Cart
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Passive voice
Fig. 4.1.1 shows the existing cart having a caster wheel of 145
[, and]
140mm overall height. This height is not enough for the 146
[the back]
mounting of the roller wheels on the cart.
Sizes
The cart being used 156 is the usual cart available in the
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market. The cart has a capacity of 150kg, 720x480mm bed, Faulty parallelism
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690mm handle. These dimensions are followed for the Passive voice
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making of the roller wheels since it will be attached to the Overused word: certain
cart to make the usual cart to roll over stairs. An
adjustment on the caster wheels of the usual 157 cart is
done 158 to raise the cart to a certain height. The original
caster wheels used in the cart has an overall height of
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140mm. Having this height 159, the roller wheels can't be [a free or the free]
kept effectively in the cart because when the roller wheels
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are in raised position, it might have contact with the caster Repetitive word: tool
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wheels when it is to be operated 160 in flat surfaces. The Repetitive word: tool
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caster wheels are then replaced 161 by a 189.5mm fixed and Repetitive word: determine
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swivel 162 caster wheel. Repetitive word: tool
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The roller wheels are composed of 46 wheels having a [could possibly → could]
Design Presentation
5.3.1 Cart
The cart has a capacity of 150kg having a 720x480mm bed,
and 690mm handle. The original caster wheels of the cart
are replaced with a 189.5mm fixed and swivel caster
wheels.
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6.0 Recommendation
The proposed design has the advantages 175 based on the
methods that has 176 been done 177. These advantages are:
It can climb stairs through the roller-wheels.
It can have smooth movement while climbing stairs.
There is the same position of the user while working it on
flat 178 surface and on 179 stairs.
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Passive voice
Since the roller wheels is a conceptual design, it is
recommended to create a prototype to test its operability. It
is also recommended for an FEA to further verify 180 the 168
[a travel]
members that would likely be first to fail. A further study
of materials that are less expensive for the equipment to be 169
[a lever or the lever]
used 181.
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[lift → Lift]
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Repetitive word: material
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[, and]
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Passive voice
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[the advantages]
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[has → have]
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[a flat or the flat]
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[on]
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[to further verify → to verify further]
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