aenda se brod line k page pr likhen is se writing and impression clear ho jata hy

1. never use signs, these are infomral

Title? Hmesha complete title likhen,

do not order the examiner, say: Avoiding the

1
imperative? ing
ing

ment of
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harsh

of what type? specify

Sports
ing
s

better now, though global level pr efforts ko comprehensive krny ki zarurat hy

I appreciate your quick learning skills

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1. wordy thoughts, extra and unneeded

jehan jehan cause ya impact likha hy wo points note kijiey, para mein ye sb scattered hyn, while
hona ye chahiey k causes ik jaga, impacts ikathey and issi trah ik jesi thoughts ikathi likhen
rewrite this para expressing all thoughts in an appropriate logical order

cause

has impacts

cause
,
,

1
[ Islamo
ing a impact

sometimes
impacts

cause
has

again word limit cross kr li jis se para distacted bn gya

etymology mein nahi jatey

deep

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para is fine, butagain more than 120 words. do not exceed the limit of120 words

ap ne para mein apna topic sentence prove krna hy

as
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why, how? any evidene? focus shift

focus shift
another shift

topic ap ne kuch aur shru kia hy aur prove kuch aur kia hy, para dobara likhen, aur apna topic
sentence hi prove kren

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conclusion yahan tk theak hy, end pr positive futuristic note lazmi add kren k is trah global community peaceful ho jaey
gi especially Muslims

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