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Nowadays, the reality show is very popular. I think everyone has watched it before.
Don't you think there are too many reality shows these days? In my opinion, there is
too many reality shows on TV.
Firstly, there are so many reality shows started on the same time. For example, a
reality show just started on the TV very popular, tomorrow there will be more reality
shows same like it. So make reality shows are worse than before. They always copy
others and nothing from themselves.
Secondly, I know some people like watching some reality shows to have fun.
Actually, many people don't like it. Even some shows make them feel embarrassed.
They prefer to watch some music video or cartoon.
Finally, reality shows are so boring nowadays. They always do some silly games,
that is so boring! Even some actors played negatively in the show. That made the
reality shows not that reall.
To conclude, I think TV should show more other variety shows and fewer some
boring reality shows. In the other hand, don't create reality shows from other ideas.
They really should create some new interesting game.
2. Is there indentation?
Does the introduction have a general statement and a thesis statement? Yes/No
General statement:
Thesis statement:
1. Major idea:
2. Minor idea:
3. Example:
7. Did the writer punctuate them correctly? Are there any mistakes in
punctuation?
Firstly,
I got to the airport two hours early. However, my flight was delayed.
I got to the airport two hours early; however, my flight was delayed.
Because I was late, I missed my flight. (Comma after the first clause).
I missed my flight because I was late. (No comma)