NAME: LAST

NAME: YADHIRA AIMEE

TEACHER: CARRILLO MACHADO
COURSE: ZENIA LALI MORI GARCIA
SCHEDULE: ADVANCED READING (ARW1)
4:00 – 05:30pm.

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Step 1: Listing………………………………………………………………………………………………3
Step 2: Write the topic sentence…………………………………………………………………….4
Step 3: Graphic Organizer………………………………………………………………………….....5
Step 4: Basic Outline……………………………………………………………………………………..6
Step 5: Completed Outline……………………………………………………………………………..7
Step 6: First Draft………………………………………………………………………………………….8
Step 7: Second Draft……………………………………………………………………………………..9
 Step 1: Listing

01 Albert Einstein 11 Steve Jobs

20 Frida Kahlo
02 Isaac Newton 12 Bill Gates

L I S
03 Gregor Mendel DaVinci
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04 Rosa Parks 14 William Shakespeare

05 Rosalind Franklin Piotr Ilich Chaikovski

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06 Mark Zuckerberg 16 Wolfgang Mozart

07 Stephen Hawking 17 Nicolás Copérnico

08 Elvis Presley 18 Galileo Galilei

09 Charles Darwin 19 Ludwig Van Beethoven

10 Marie Curie
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Step 2: Write the topic sentence

Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was very

intelligent and has conducted scientific research as a naturalistic scientist for 34
years.
Step 3: Graphic Organizer

Topic
Opinion
Controlling Idea

Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because

he was very intelligent and has conducted scientific as a naturalistic scientist
for 34 years.

.He was an advanced math teacher for

two years.
. He developed the famous three laws
of genetics. . For two years he studied physics and
mathematics at the Olmütz
. He entered one of the most Philosophical Institute.
important universities in Vienna-
. He started scientific
. He made the first scientific investigations since he was 25
description of a tornado
years old.
. He proposed new methods of
research with plants and insects . He began a four-year course of
study at Brünn Theological College
in 1845
Step 4: Basic Outline

Topic sentence:

Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was very intelligent and has conducted scientific
research as a naturalistic scientist for 34 years.

A. Supporting sentence 1:
Gregor Mendel was a great naturalistic.
. Supporting Detail 1:
He developed the famous three laws of genetics.
B. Supporting sentence 2:
Gregor Mendel was a recognized experimenter
Supporting Detail 2:
He proposed new methods of research with plants and insects

C. Supporting sentence 3:
He is one of the most experienced naturalists.
Supporting Detail 3:
He started scientific investigations since he was 25 years old.
D. Supporting sentence 4:
Gregor Mendel became the father of genetics.
Supporting Detail 4:
He was the first to discover this theory for more than 30 years, his discovery
was published in 1865 although it was ignored for a long time until its
acceptance in 1900.

Concluding sentence:

In summary, for the incredible discoveries and contributions to the development of humanity that
characterized him and for the years of dedication to his career, Gregor Mendel should be considered
a scientific genius.
 Step 5: Completed Outline

Title: Gregor Mendel

Topic sentence: Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was very intelligent
and has conducted scientific research as a naturalistic scientist for 34 years.

S. S. 1: Gregor Johann Mendel was a great naturalistic.

S. D. 1: He developed the famous three laws of genetics, which are the principle of uniformity,
principle of segregation, and the principle of independent transmission, this process
took him 8 years..

Transition: Definitively

S. S. 2: Gregor Mendel was one of the greatest experimenters in the 80s

S. D. 2: He is awarded this recognition thanks to his innovative research proposals with plants
and incest. In fact, these methods served to arrive at the origin of what today we
known as inheritance.

Connector sequence: Moreover

S. S. 3: He is one of the most experienced naturalists in scientific research

S. D. 3: He started doing science related jobs when he was 25 years old and he was an
advanced math teacher for two years.

Transition: Consequently

S. S. 4: Gregor Mendel became the father of genetics.

S. D. 4: He was the first to discover this theory for more than 30 years, his discovery
was published in 1865 although it was ignored for a long time until its acceptance in
1900.

Transition + Concluding sentences

In conclusion, for the incredible discoveries and contributions to the development of humanity
that characterized him and for the years of dedication to his career, Gregor Mendel should be
considered a scientific genius.

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 Step 6: First Draft

Gregor Mendel
Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was
very intelligent and has conducted scientific research as a naturalistic scientist for 34
years. Gregor Johann Mendel was a great naturalistic. He developed the famous
three laws of genetics, which are the principle of uniformity, the principle of
segregation, and the principle of independent transmission, this process took him
eight years. Definitively, Gregor Mendel was one of the greatest experimenters in the
80s. He is awarded this recognition thanks to his innovative research proposals with
plants and incest. In fact, these methods served to arrive at the origin of what today
we have known as inheritance. Moreover, he is one of the most experienced
naturalists in scientific research. He started doing science related jobs when he was
25 years old, and he was an advanced math teacher for two years. Consequently,
Gregor Mendel became the father of genetics. He was the first to discover this theory
for more than 30 years; his discovery was published in 1865, although it was ignored
for a long time until its acceptance in 1900. In conclusion, for the incredible
discoveries and contributions to the development of humanity that characterized him
and for the years of dedication to his career, Gregor Mendel should be considered a
scientific genius.
Step 7: Second Draft

Gregor Mendel
Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because
he was very intelligent and has conducted scientific research as a
naturalistic scientist for 34 years. Gregor Johann Mendel was a great
naturalistic. He developed the famous three laws of genetics, which
are the principle of uniformity, the principle of segregation, and the
principle of independent transmission, this process took him eight
years. Definitively, Gregor Mendel was one of the greatest
experimenters in the 80s. He is awarded this recognition thanks to
his innovative research proposals with plants and incest. In fact,
these methods served to arrive at the origin of what today we have
known as inheritance. Moreover, he is one of the most experienced
naturalists in scientific research. He started doing science related
jobs when he was 25 years old, and he was an advanced math
teacher for two years. Consequently, Gregor Mendel became the
father of genetics. He was the first to discover this theory for more
than 30 years; his discovery was published in 1865, although it was
ignored for a long time until its acceptance in 1900. In conclusion,
for the incredible discoveries and contributions to the development
of humanity that characterized him and for the years of dedication to
his career, Gregor Mendel should be considered a scientific genius.