Without time period – COMPARISONS

1. Intro:
A glance at the graph provided reveals/depicts/highlights information of N phrase
(Paraphrase đề bài). Strikingly, the …. of … was consistently the highest data recorded, far
overshadowing/exceeding/surpassing the corresponding figures of other…. (Overview, mình
lấy số liệu cao nhất + thấp nhất hoặc 1 pattern chung nổi bật)
2. Body: so sánh nhấ t, so sá nh hơn, so sá nh (khô ng) bằ ng, ranking information (đọ c sá ch
trang 14), linking words….
- Regarding N phrase, the highest number/percentage of …. belonged to … while …
reported the lowest figure/data in…. Ranked in the second, third and fourth positions
were N1, N2 and N3 with data1, data2 and data3, respectively/in turn/ sequentially.
- In terms of N, … headed the list with (số liệu cao nhấ t) with…%, closely followed by
… with (số liệu cao nhì). Meanwhile, the third most + adj + N was/were… with (số liệu
cao ba), in comparison with/as opposed to N, whose figure only accounted for… (số
liệu thấ p nhấ t).
Page 16, sách task 1

Given is the bar chart depicting differences in language

ability/fluency of males and females in six distinct nations, namely
China, Romania, Thailand, India, Russia and Vietnam in 2010.
Strikingly, the proportions of females who had good command of
another language far dwarfed (=exceed) those of males, except for
Thailand.
Regarding females, Indian students were the most capable of
speaking a foreign language with 68%, closely followed by
Romania with 65%. 56% of Vietnamese students were shown to be
fluent speakers, compared to 43% of Russian females with good
language ability. Figures recorded in China and Thailand were less
significant, with 30% and 27%, sequentially/respectively.
S+V, compared to/as opposed to N.
S+V while S+V.
In terms of males, India’s figure overshadowed those of other
countries with 56%, far surpassing 42% of Romanian speakers at
the second position. More than a third (38%) of Vietnamese
students excelled in speaking a second language, as opposed to
Russian and Thai counterparts, with 35% and 32% in turn. Chinese
bilinguals were illustrated to be the least proficient with a
mere/negligible/modest 16%.
tử số / mẫ u số  (số đếm bình thườ ng)/(số thứ tự thêm “s” nếu tử
>1)
¼ = a quarter
¾ = three quarters
2/3 = two thirds 1/3 = one third
2/5= two fifths 1/5 = one fifth
Bài mẫ u: Two pie charts provided highlight (V) information of
average level of energy consumption and gas release of various
electric devices in a typical Australian household. Strikingly, heating
is the most energy-consuming appliance, whose data dwarfs
(vượt xa)/exceeds those of others, while water heating is shown to
be most environmentally – unfriendly. Cooling registers( ghi
lại)/records lowest percentages of both criteria( tiêu chí).
Regarding energy utilization, heating leads the list with more than
two-fifths of total percentage (42%), followed by water heating
with approximately a third (30%) of energy use. Refrigeration,
lighting and cooling record negligible figures of 7%, 4% and 2%,
sequentially, proving to be less energy – consuming (adj) than other
appliances with 15% recorded.
In terms of gas discharge, water heating is the least eco-friendly
household appliance, emitting roughly a third of total proportion
(32%). The levels of emissions of heating and refrigeration are
nearly identical with 15% and 14%, respectively, as opposed to
lighting and cooling, accounting for modest data of 8% and 3%, in
turn. 28% remaining of gas release is attributable to (resulted from)
the use of other unidentified devices.
- CHIẾ M BN %
 TO ACCOUNT FOR/MAKE UP FOR/CONSTITUTE/OCCUPY +
PHÂN SỐ

- less fertile (adj) = less productive (adj)

- contributing factor (n) = culprit (n)
- severe (adj) = dire (adj)
Given are the pie chart depicting major contributors to infertile
land and the table highlighting the impact levels of those causes
on different areas, namely North America, Europe and Oceania. It
is apparent that over-grazing is the direst/most severe culprit of
land unproductivity and Europe was the most heavily
affected/devastated area with 23% of land erosion.
Regarding the pie chart, 35% of unproductive land results from
over-grazing whilst the figure of deforestation accounts for 30%.
While over-cultivation leads to 28% of degraded land,
unidentified contributing factors constitute a mere 7%.
In terms of the table, the most severe culprit of infertile soil in
Oceania was over-grazing with 11.3% while over cultivation was
 shown to have little impact on this area (0%). In Europe,
deforestation was the leading cause with 9.8%, closely followed
by over-cultivation and over-grazing with 7.7% and 5.5%, in turn.
North America, on the other hand, was the least affected area
with data ranging from a negligible 0.2% to 3.3%.

HOMEWORK:
Đề thi IELTS chính thức ngày 28/5/2020:
 Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions
IN 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
and make comparisons where relevant.

- ACCOUNT FOR/ MAKE UP FOR/ CONSTITUTE/OCCUPY (chiếm) + TỈ LỆ 

Africa accounted for the largest percentage of world forest
- A MAJOR PERCENTAGE/ A HEFTY PERCENTAGE/A LION'S SHARE
- A MARGINAL/MODEST/NEGLIGIBLE (c2) /MERE PERCENTAGE
Đề thi IELTS chính thức ngày 21/5/2020:
 Task 1: The charts below show the distribution of the word’s water and the use
of water in three countries IN 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and
reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.