INTRODUCTION

My name is your full name. I was born on the date of birth. I am an 18 years young, energetic and
enthusiastic person, a permanent resident of the full address. I am the son of the father’s
name and mother’s name. My father is a Government officer, he works in the company name. My
mother is a Private Sector Trainer. My family shares a strong bond and I have received all the
positive love and support from my family members.
ACADEMIC BACKGROUND AND EXPERIENCE
Talking about my educational qualification, I completed my S.L.C (School Leaving Certificate)
from school name in the year 2016 with your GPA. Right from my initial stages, with different
exposes, my school helped me to develop my skills in the field of Science and mathematics which
became my inspiration to continue my secondary education in that subject. So, for the intermediate
level, I decided to study Science. I enrolled myself in the institution name in the faculty of Science in
the year 2017 and completed it in May 2018 with **** CGPA. After completing high school, I realized
the importance of international exposure and its implication on my entire academic and practical
knowledge gained throughout high school education. So, for that purpose, I joined the IELTS class
of 45 days commencing from May 25, 2018, from Kathmandu Infosys Education Centre. I took an
IELTS exam on September 15, 2018(IELTS certificate attached) and secured an overall score of
6.5 (8-L, 6-S, 6.5-R, 5.5-W). As I got my IELTS score, I started looking for universities in Australia.
After a lot of research, I found the university name as the perfect option for me. So, I applied for the
offer letter of university name on, October 4, 2018. Later, I got a Conditional Offer Letter
from university name with a 20% international student scholarship on my Tuition fees on the date
October 23, 2018. Right from that moment, I started preparing for GTE. For the purpose of preparing
GTE, initially, I started researching the Banks for my education loan purpose. As the required
property for sanctioning loan is situated in Bhaktapur. I started looking for the A-class commercial
bank there itself. After visiting some of the A-class banks, Everest Bank offered quick and swift
service and Education loans with a comparatively low-interest rate. Then, the procedure of the loan
took a few weeks. On the date November 14, 2018, my GTE was submitted to the university and I
got my GTE approval on December 7, 2018, and got my COE on 27th December 2018.
REASONS TO CHOOSE AUSTRALIA
Australia has been one of the most preferred destinations for Nepalese and other International
students. Australia is currently the third most popular destination for international students following
the United States and the United Kingdom and the 2nd most popular for Nepalese Students. This
isn’t surprising as Australia has seven of the top 100 universities in the world. It is highly selected for
education because it has got over 22,000 courses across 1,100 institutions where international
students can easily find the school and field that are right for them.
Australia has 5 of the best 30 cities in the world for students in terms of affordability, quality of life,
safety, which are all important elements for International students when choosing the best study
destination. There is a positive outcome in terms of a number of graduate students from Australian
universities and colleges. Education provided by Australian universities is recognized globally and
qualification gained is globally accepted. Education in Australia has been flourishing in recent years
with an edge curriculum and high-quality teachers. The institution in Australia come in all size and
location making it easy for students to find a school that rightly suits them and their motives.
Besides, employers and universities all over the world recognize the Australian degree thus the
graduates are successful in finding jobs and holding prominent positions worldwide. The standard of
living in Australia is among the highest in the world. Similarly, the weather and climate condition is
like that of Nepal. So, it could be easier for me to adapt to the environment.
Moreover, there is the Education Services for Overseas Student (ESOS) Act that sets out the legal
framework governing the delivery of education to the international student in Australia on a student
visa. The ESOS Act covers everything from financial protections and laws protecting the rights of
international students through to work rights, student welfare and complaints along with Tuition
Protection Service (TPS) and Overseas Student Health Cover (OHSC). The Tuition Protection
Service (TPS) assists international students whose education providers are unable to fully deliver
their course of study whereas OSHC is health insurance arranged to assist the hospital and medical
costs. This shows the dedication of the Australian government to provide quality education and
protect the rights of international students due to which there is a safe environment for international
students.
By analyzing various factors of Australia and Universities of Australia such as affordable fee
structure, course content, climate condition, safety, practical education, scholarship opportunities,
low crime rate, cultural diversity, drives me to choose Australia for higher studies.
REASON FOR NOT CHOOSING MY HOME COUNTRY, NEPAL
Nepal has very limited development in the sector of technology and insufficient education materials
for IT students. The quantity of universities is also very low. There are only 5 universities that are
officially verified by the Nepal Government. Still, those university examinations and results are never
held as per schedule because of political influence.
Moreover, what I realized until now is that the Nepalese study is totally based on the theoretical
system rather than focusing on its practical implications. Lack of study materials, resources and very
limited specialization subjects available for postgraduate study are leading to less skillful manpower
in this fierce global competition.
REASONS FOR NOT CHOOSING OTHER COUNTRIES
Studying abroad and getting an international degree has been a priority for so many students today.
There is no doubt that there are various countries that I can apply for my postgraduate degree but
there are various reasons for not choosing the countries like the USA, UK and Other European
Countries.
USA: The requirement of GMAT and GRE courses along with high tuition costs is the main reason
for not choosing the USA. The cost of living is also high in the USA. ($1=NRS 116.02)
European Countries: The major reason for not applying to European countries is due to the
language barrier. On the other hand, the weather is not favorable as there is an extremely cold
climate. (1 EURO= NRS 126.51)
UK: The cost of living is high and low job security for international students. The constant
amendment in policies regarding international students and in other various rules also makes it quite
unstable to stay there. (1 POUND = NRS.131.53)
On the other hand, Australia is one of the best destinations for international students to gain highly
qualitative education in prestigious and top-ranked universities which will benefit in future flexibility.
Comparing the exchange rate of Australia and other countries, Australia has a lower exchange rate
which makes the fee structure affordable for international students (1 AUD = NRs 83.88). Moreover,
Australia’s policies are highly favorable for international students which made me choose Australia
over other countries.
(The exchange rate is dated on November 10, 2018)
REASONS TO CHOOSE UNIVERSITY NAME.
After doing a lot of research online and other ways I came to know about some universities that offer
the course that I am intended to learn about such as X University, Y University, Z University. The fee
structure of all these universities is higher than that of university name with an annual fee
i.e. University name (AUD XXXXX), University name (AUD XXXXX), university name (XXXXX),
whereas annual fee of university name is (AUD XXXXX) and has also offered 20% scholarship
which has made it more affordable. So, comparing all these universities, I found that university
name is best among all of them in every sector and I have identified the university name as an
institution whose values align with mine.
University name originally began as the Queensland Institute of Technology in 1967. It was granted
full university status in 1992 and was named the university name in 1994. By 2006, the university
was operating its four Australian International Campuses at Brisbane, Gold Coast, Sydney, and
Melbourne. The University restructured its international activities in the period 2006 to 2009 and
rebranded its image in 2008, changing its brand from university name to university name.
University name is for the first time recognized among the world’s top educational institutions by the
international QS World University Rankings system. university name ranks among the world’s top
600 universities according to the prestigious and trusted Times Higher Education World University
Rankings (2017–2018). university name now has more than 30,000 students spread across 24
campuses and locations Australia-wide and is regarded within the sector as Australia’s most
inclusive and engaged university. It has firmly established itself as one of the largest universities
based in regional Australia, with campuses in Adelaide, Brisbane, Bundaberg, Cairns, Emerald,
Gladstone, Mackay, Melbourne, Noosa, Perth, Rockhampton, Sydney, and Townsville.
University name is committed to student success because this ultimately defines the success of the
University. university name offers several support services, activities and programs to bring about
successful student outcomes and ensure their students have the best experience possible during
their study journey. university name provides the student with a variety of service that assists and
help the student to achieve their intended goals through different student support facilities relating to
counseling, proper guidance, different student mentors’ programs, financial assistance, and
scholarships. university name also pays special attention to student’s health and welfare along with
a range of facilities to a student with a disability.
University’s name provides a wide range of learning support to its students. The Academic Learning
Centre gives academic advice and guidance to assist in becoming confident and independent
learners. ALC provides the students with different facilities relating to, Academic Communication,
Computing, Mathematics and Statistics through on-campus workshops, personalized online services
and one to one meetings. It expects to enhance the knowledge, skills, and abilities of its students
and make them realize their potential rather than expecting every student to become a so-called
successful. The university has a huge student success rate likewise it has always supported
students even overseas to be capable enough to lead and progress. Graduates from university
names also have some of the best employment outcomes indicating that there is full-time
employment 80.4 percent of the students according to the data released by Graduates Careers
Australia. The data released by Quality Indicators for Learning and Teaching (QILT) also proves
that university name is best among so many universities of Australia in terms of study support
employment and salary outcomes of graduate students.
A combination of all these elements- highly experienced faculty, leading-edge course structure,
advanced research facility, global outreach, inclusiveness, engagement and plenty of options that
cater to students’ interests and experiences, has led me to apply for the Bachelor’s in Information
Technology at university name.
REASONS TO CHOOSE BIT
Bachelor’s in Information Technology (BIT) is a completely technical course that has always grasped
my attention and has remained my dream since college days. Science and Mathematics is the
subject I have always been passionate about and I intend to pursue Bachelor’s in Information
Technology as I am backed up by my keen interest in science and technology. Due to the huge
demand and growing industry, the earning potential of an IT specialist has increased so far. Enrolling
as a technology student I can work both physically and virtually for any company all around the
world. This kind of technical course offers a boundless opportunity to learn new things and be
updated in this era of technology.
BIT enhances a student with professional skills with Data management, software development,
communication technology, economics, statistics, and Business law. It is a suitable course for
graduates who are interested in employment in computer and Technology. This program is suitable
for me to meet the entry requirements and seek a career as an IT specialist in an IT company. This
course offers the opportunity to gain crucial life-long learning and transferable generic skills such as
critical thinking and problem-solving.
BIT is three years full-time course with six semesters in which I must study 8 unitswith48 credit
points which I have listed below:
Core Structure
COIS12036 Human-Computer Interaction
COIT11222 Programming Fundamentals
COIT11223 Information Technology and Society
COIT11226 Systems Analysis
COIT11237 Database Design & Implementation
COIT12208 ICT Project Management
COIT11238 Networked Infrastructure Foundations
COIT11239 Professional Communications Skills for ICT
 
Elective Courses
COIT12204   Web site development
COIS11011    Foundations of Business computing
COIS13034    Cloud-based smart application management
BUSN19024   graduate Employability skills
COIT12209     Data science
 
I am motivated and determined in pursuing my bachelor’s degree in Australia through a bachelor’s
program at university name as this course will help me build a career in the field of computer and
technology.
INTERNSHIP
An internship is an opportunity offered by an employer to potential employees, called interns, to work
at a firm for a fixed period. Students must do an internship as an opportunity to experience in a
professional environment within the Australian workforce related to the chosen discipline. It is a way
to test drive possible jobs and explore different career options.
By doing the internship I will be able to develop different essential qualities and skills such as
Leadership skills, technical skills, time management skills, communication skills and so on. It will
help me to understand and adopt different Australian culture and work practices. The internship will
not only get me to participate in multiple tasks, but I will also be able to gain hands-on training and
feedback that empower me and provide me the confidence to tackle any task at my next job.
FUTURE PLANS AFTER COMPLETING BIT
After the completion of my study, I will be returning to my home country and working in the potential
fields of employment. BIT leads me to a top-notch career in my life. I shall also gain relevant
practical experience and skills in order to perfectly implement my education into effect.
Choosing CQU and BIT as my course of study will help me to catch my dream careers. After getting
a BIT degree I can employ myself in the potential fields like Application programmer, Computer
programmer, Chief information officer, Enterprise Architect, Security Analyst, System analyst.
Moreover, the Post Study Work Visa Permit will help me to acquire international working experience
and exposure in Australia. The Post Study Work (PSW) visa allows graduates to work in Australia
temporarily after they finish their studies. After the completion of the BIT, I expect to get the PSW as
it will strengthen my knowledge regarding the concerned field. It offers extended options for working
in Australia to eligible graduates of a higher education degree. Students get two years of PSW visa
which will help me to acquire international working experience and exposure in Australia. It will help
me to implement the theoretical knowledge learned into practical experiences. It will provide real
work experience as well as will give me the opportunity to enhance my skills related to technology,
computer and software management. In the two 2 years of PSW visa, I am planning to work in
different companies such as Sunflower Lab, Parangat Technologies, Diceus, Cyber Infrastructure
Inc and so on. In case if I am not able to achieve the PSW option, I have planned to return to my
own country and will execute and explore hereby with the knowledge acquired in a Three-year
bachelor’s degree.
Ultimately, Post Study Work Visa will help me to gain different international working experience and
global exposure which will be one of the most important aspects to shape my future. I can also
develop technical knowledge, professional communication skills and know the workplace culture.
The Knowledge I obtain from all during my PSW visa will also help me a lot after I return to Nepal as
it will be a plus point to my career and help me to get a good job in one of the renowned companies
here in Nepal.
As per my research, after returning to my home country I can see huge potential for an intelligent
and competitive candidate in the different related fields of communication and computer systems. A
country like ours is in the developing phase and there exists a high scope for highly qualified
candidates. There is a great demand for young manpower who understand technology and
 communication system to create innovative solutions to help people and benefit organizations. They
still need well educated and experienced and creative mind to handle various projects for the growth
and development of their respective companies. I will be seeking a job in different companies and
expect good packages after completion of a bachelor’s degree from CQU. I intend to apply for
potential employment profiles of a Computer programmer, Chief information officer, Enterprise
Architect, Security analyst, a System Analyst in a different organization like Braindigit IT Solution,
Microsoft, IT Expert Nepal, NGO’s, INGO’s and even work virtually for different Kickstarter
companies all over the world and so on. Technological advancement, information explosion, and
increasing competition have created enormous pressure on organizations to change not only what
they do but how they do it as well which has created a high demand of the potential employees who
can foster their ideas and knowledge in a more prominent way. So, holding a BIT degree with my
experience with international companies will help me to deal wisely and change the working
procedure in a more effective and efficient way which will ultimately uplift my career. Some of the
portal from where I can hunt the job in Nepal are:MeroRojgari.com, JobsNepal.com, MeroJob.com,
KantipurJob.com, KumariJob.com, etc. Analyzing the various aspects regarding Nepalese and
International degrees, the international degree is more preferred than the degrees we obtain here in
Nepal. It also reflects the growing demand for international degrees as the education system of
abroad is high better than the Nepalese degree in terms of quality, practicability, exposure.
Statistically, the average salary of an international degree holder is about NRP 50000-60000 per
month according to the job because Nepalese companies prefer International degree, especially
from Australia whereas the average salary of Nepalese degree holder ranges from 20,000 to 30,000
which is half of the average salary gained by an International degree holder.
Basically, the return on investment of my education expenses is the amount of salary and the
incentives. The amount of salary will help me recover a lot of expenses in my studies in Australia.
Moreover, engaging with companies will enhance my knowledge and make me financially stable
which will support me to see myself as successful within 5-7 years. So, even though the cost of
studying is a bit higher, it will benefit and help me to outgrow my career in a lot better way leading
myself towards a successful life. To conclude, I intensely believe that the unique structure and
flexibility of the course will allow me to develop my capabilities in a progressive manner and expand
my professional networks and real-world experience.
INCENTIVE TO RETURN BACK TO MY HOME COUNTRY
Well, after gaining so much knowledge on the subject and spending my valuable years, the time will
arrive when I must get back to my own land. As I am applying for a student visa in Australia, my
major focus will always be on my studies. So, after completing my study there in Australia, I will be
returning to my hometown as my whole family is residing here. Since my childhood, I have always
thought of pursuing higher education, holding a degree, working in a successful organization and
become a successful person and so are the wishes of my parents. Since we belong to a typical
Nepalese family, there is always the tendency of living together and my parents have great
expectations from me. Like every child, I have a strong attachment towards my parents and I cannot
even think of living apart from them.
As a responsible child, I also believe that I have a responsibility to take care of all the assets and
properties including our house and the lands. My parents have always encouraged and inspired me
to be a better person and have always been there throughout my studies. So, it’s my turn to give
them back all the happiness they deserve, and I believe that I have a lot of responsibility towards
them.
VISA CONDITIONS OF SUBCLASS 500
I am mentally prepared to obey all the visa conditions under visa subclass 500 which I have
highlighted below in brief:
 I need to maintain 80% attendance.
 I can work 40 hours per fortnight on a part-time basis.
 I need to clear 50% of the subject in each term.
 I cannot change the university for 6 months upon enrolment.
 I need to maintain the health insurance until I remain in Australia.
 I must notify to universities/DIBP within 7 days if I change the address or contact details.
As we know that opportunity doesn’t knock one’s door time and again so, one should be able to
open the door with the right key in order to grasp the opportunity. So, I hereby with the letter commit
to follow every laws and regulation of the university and government, live as a law-abiding student in
Australia. I am very much focused on this program and wish to make the best out of it by studying in
CQU.
 
Sincerely,
Your Name
Student ID: ********
Mobile No: +977 **********
Email – your email address