Title: Online Shopping Vs Traditional Shopping

I. Introduction (paragraph 1)

A. Hook:

How beautiful it is to sit in your sofa and get what comes in your mind?!

B. Connecting information:

Online shopping allows people to buy anything they need without passing their door step, but

many other people still stick to traditional shopping.

C. Thesis statement:

There are many contradictions between both online shopping and traditional shopping such as

saving time and saving money.

(time)

I. Topic Sentence for Point #1

Firstly, shopping online is different from traditional shopping in saving time. During online

shopping.

A. Subject A (online)

1. It may take too much time to receive what people ordered (2 sentences at least)

2. Less time __(2 sentences at least)

B. Subject B (traditional)

1. People can take what they have bought immediately. _ (2 sentences at least)

2. People spend a long time to shop in different shops _ (2 sentences at least)

(price)

II. Topic Sentence for Point #2

Secondly, the total price in both online shopping and traditional shopping is disparate.

A. Subject A (Online)

1. Customers can save the money of gas and parking. __ (2 sentences at least)

2. Customers have to pay for shipment__ (2 sentences at least)

B. Subject B (traditional)

1. People will play for gas and parking __ (2 sentences at least)

2. People can save the shipment fees. __ (2 sentences at least)

Topic sentence point 3:

purchasing from credible source is not the same in online shopping and traditional shopping.

Subject A: (online)

1. Shoppers cannot guarantee the source

2. return process takes long time

Subject B: (traditional)

1. Shoppers rely on the source.

2. Direct return process

III. Conclusion (paragraph 4)

A. Restated thesis:

Shopping online and traditional shopping vary from each other in the time that people spend in

both of them and the amount of money that people can save.

B. Suggestion, opinion, or prediction:

In my opinion, online shopping is the best choice for me because of the Covid 19, and it can save

my time.

Online Shopping Vs Traditional Shopping

 How beautiful it is to sit in your sofa and get what comes in your mind?! Online shopping

allows people to buy anything they need without passing their door step, but many other people

still stick to traditional shopping. There are many contradictions between both online shopping

and traditional shopping such as saving time and saving money.

Firstly, shopping online is different from traditional shopping in saving time. During

online shopping. people are not able to get what they have bought directly after the payment, but

they have to wait until the shipment company delivers it. People who shop online can save too

much time as instead of leaving their home and check every shop until they find what they need,

they can search easily on the internet and buy it. On the other hand, Traditional shopping gives

people the opportunity to get what they want immediately after paying money, so they will save

the shipment time. Moreover, people have to go to every store and visit different shops in order

to find what they want to buy, so it takes a lot of time and effort.

Secondly, the total price in both online shopping and traditional shopping is disparate.

online Shopping customers do not have to pay for gas and parking because they will not even

leave their home. Customers who shop online have to pay for shipment which makes the total

price increases. In contrast, traditional shopping customers have to pay for gas and parking, or

they have to pay the cost of transportation during shopping. Customers who prefer traditional

shopping do not have to pay for shipment because they take the goods which they bought after

paying with them.

 Lastly, purchasing from credible source is not the same in online shopping and traditional

shopping. Shoppers in online shopping cannot guarantee the source that they buy from, and they

are able to be cheated. Return availability in online shopping is difficult because it requires many

online procedures, and it takes time. On the contrary, traditional shopping shoppers completely

know the location of the shop that they bought their goods from. Traditional shopping makes it

easy to return as the shoppers go directly to the shop and return back what they bought, but they

have to return it during allowance days.

In conclusion, Shopping online and traditional shopping vary from each other in the time

that people spend in both of them and the amount of money that people can save. In my opinion,

online shopping is the best choice for me because of the Covid 19, and it can save my time.