LET’S EXCEL IN WRITING!

(Paper 2)
WITH TEACHER MARIAM!
By the end of this seminar,

You should be able to:

1. Learn the new template and the 4 steps given for writing
email/short message.
2. Apply the steps given for email/short message
independently.
3. Understand the 4 concepts given for Note Expansion.
4. Apply the concepts given in writing your essay.
Today, we will cover:

01 02
Email / Short Message Note Expansion
80 words 120 words
20 marks 20 marks
Let’s cook our
essay!
01
● Short Message
● Email
● 80 words
● 20 marks
Let’s go through the format!

Format: Format:
Let’s go through the format!

Short Message
Let’s go through the format!

E-mail
Let’s practice!
How to answer?
Decide 01
01
02 Choose

Justify 03
End it
04 Positively
Let’s assemble
your burger!
 Step 1: Decide!
Positive Negative

1 Congratulations! A I’m sorry to hear that

I am happy/excited It is a pity that…
2 B
/delighted…

That is a great / C My condolences…

3
wonderful news

4 Wow, that’s fantastic! D My deepest sympathy

 Step 2: Choose the right phrase!
In my opinion, I think that, I feel, You could,

01 03 05 07

02 04 06
You You can You may want to,
should… consider,
 Step 3: Justify your choice!

#01 #02 #03

This is because… This would be It would boost your
beneficial for you… motivation…

#04 #05
It could enhance your Afterall, it is important /
stamina… essential that…
 Step 4: End it with a + note!
1 I hope that you will succeed.
2 I wish you the best!
3 I am sure you will ace the test.
4 All the best in your studies!

5 May you succeed in your future undertakings /

endeavours
6 Get well soon! / Speedy recovery.
Let’s practice!
02
Note Expansion

● 120 words
● 20 marks
Note Expansion
Assemble your lasagna! (BEEP)

Brainstorm 01 Elaborate
02 point

Examplify 03
04 Proofread
Sequence Connectors!
To begin Continue End
Firstly Next Last but not least

In the first place As soon as To summarise

To start with In addition Lastly

For a start Furthermore To conclude

To begin Secondly/Thirdly All in all

At the end of this seminar,
You should be able to:
1. Learn the new template and the 4 steps given for writing
email/short message.
2. Apply the steps given for email/short message independently.
3. Understand the 4 concepts given for Note Expansion.
4. Apply the concepts given in writing your essay