Name: Valentina Vargas Date: October 24th, 2022

My travel to Concepcion

My trip to Concepcion was very exciting. In Febraury 15, 2019, my family and I decided to
travel to Concepcion for a few days. The first day we traveled from San Vicente to Concepcion
by bus, when we arrived my aunt was waiting for us at the terminal and took us to the her
house where we spend the whole day resting and sharing as a family. Then, the second day
was dedicated to go to the several places near the city and we ate sharp empanadas with
cheese, at night with my cousins we went to the circus that was just that week there. Then, the
third day, we went to visit the University of Concepcion and we had access to several place in
the University. After that, we went to eat in a restaurant near the university. That same day at
night, with my sister and my cousin we went again to the circus to enjoy the night. Then, on
the fourth day we organized a meal at home with the whole family and i met several cousins
who were born very recently. That night we went to the circus again and then went to a party
at my cousin’s friend’s house. Finally, on the fifth day we travelled back to San Vicente. For
this reason, my trip to Concepcion was very exciting.
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