Writing task 1

line graph

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 Biểu đồ có thời gian quá khứ
Þ Quá khứ đơn
Þ Thể hiện so sánh
Xu hướng tăng giảm
So sánh giữa các công ty

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Bước 1: phân tích biểu đồ

01 A GIẢM

02 B GIẢM BAN ĐẦU B LỚN HƠN C, TỚI CUỐI THẤP NHẤT

03 C TĂNG BAN ĐẦU C NHỎ NHẤT, TỚI CUỐI LỚN NHẤT

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 INTRODUCTION: paraphrase lại đề bài

• Show => illustrate/provide a comparison of/ compare/

provide information about/provide data about…
• The amount of waste produced => waste production
• Three companies => three different companies/ compay
A, company B and company C
• Over a period of 15 years => over a 15-year period/
from 2000 to 2015/ between (the years) 2000 and 2015

=> The line graph compares the waste production of three different companies from 2000 to 2015

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The line graph provides a comparison of the number of waste produced in different
three company over the 15- year period, between 2000 and 2015.

• The/a number of + danh từ số nhiều đếm được (the number of people, the number of companies…)
• The/an amount of + danh từ ko đếm được (the amount of water, the amount of money…)

• Waste produced by = waste which is produced by

• Three different companies, two different people, 20 different books…

• Period, from…to…

=> The line graph provides a comparison of the amount of waste produced by three different companies
over the 15-year period, from 2000 to 2015

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 Overview: nói về các xu hướng chung, không nói rõ số liệu, tuy
nhiên vẫn phải nói rõ đối tượng

• Bắt đầu bằng overall, it is clear/evident that…

• Tăng: Experience/show an upward trend
• Giảm: Experience/show a downward trend
• Tăng: Increase
• Giảm: Decrease
• Nối 2 vế bằng while hoặc whereas, hoặc 2 vế ko liên quan thì dùng in
addition

Þ Overall, it is evident that the amount of waste produced by company A and company B experienced a
downward trend, while waste production of company C showed an upward trend over the period.

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From an overall perspective, it is evident that the amount of waste production in company C
showed an upward trend, whereas a reserve pattern could be seen in the figure for company A
and company B over the period shown.

• The amount of waste of company C => company C’s waste production

• A reserve pattern could be seen in the figures for company A and company B

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 Body 1: nói về năm đầu tiên, hoặc nói về giai đoạn đầu tiên

• In 2000, company A produced the largest amount of waste, at 12

tonnes. The figures for company B and company C were lower, at
about 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes respectively.

• From 2000 to 2005, the waste output of company A showed a

steady decrease to approximately 11 tonnes, while the figures for
companies B and C rose to about 10 tonnes and 6 tonnes,
respectively.

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 Từ vựng cho các dạng chart có năm
Adj: dramatic, gradual, large, marked, rapid, sharp, significant, sudden,
minimal, slight, slow, small, steady, moderate
Lưu ý
Noun: growth, increase, rise, jump
Decline, decrease, drop, fall • Tính từ trước danh từ
fluctuation (a dramatic fall)
• Trạng từ trước hoặc
Verb: grow, increase, rise, jump, reach a peak, peak at, hit a high/low of…
sau động từ (fell
Decline, decrease, fall, drop, reduce
Fluctuate significantly,
Did not change, remain unchanged/stable/the same… gradually decreased)
Adv: dramatically, significantly, rapidly, sharply, suddenly
Gradually, minimally, slightly, slowly, steadily
In the amount of, in the number of, in the percentage of, in the price of, in the value of…
Nearly, approximately, almost, about, just under
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In 2000, the number of wastes manufactured in company A was largest, at 12 tones of waste
while the figure for company B was lower around 8 tones. Waste material production in
company C, however, accounted for the lowest number, at 4 tones.

• The amount of waste manufactured by company A

• At around 8 tonnes
• Waste production of company C

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 Body 2: nói về giai đoạn sau

• From 2005 to 2015, the waste production of company A continued to

fall, reaching about 8 tonnes at the end of the period.

• Company B’s waste output followed a similar trend, reaching about

3 tonnes in 2015, being the lowest figure shown on the graph

• Company C’s figure, however, showed a sudden increase, peaking at

about 10 tonnes in 2015, and being the highest figure shown.

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The period from 2000 to 2015, there was a steady decrease in the number of waste manufactured
in company A to just 7 tones in 2015. After reach a peak of 10 tones in 2005, similarly, company B
saw a dramatically drop roughly 3 tones of waste material in 2015. In contrast, company C’s
waste output rise significantly over the period of 15 year, and cross over company A, and B, at a
figure of about 11 tones in 2015.

• After reaching a peak of…

• A dramatic drop by roughly 3 tonnes in 2015
• By contrast,..
• Rose…
• Being higher than…

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 Bài hoàn chỉnh
The line graph compares the waste production of three different companies from 2000 to 2015. Overall,
it is evident that the amount of waste produced by company A and company B experienced a
downward trend, while waste production of company C showed an upward trend over the period.

In 2000, company A produced the largest amount of waste, at 12 tonnes. The figures for company B
and company C were lower, at about 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes respectively. From 2000 to 2005, the waste
output of company A showed a steady decrease to approximately 11 tonnes, while the figures for
companies B and C rose to about 10 tonnes and 6 tonnes, respectively.

From 2005 to 2015, the waste production of company A continued to fall, reaching about 8 tonnes at the
end of the period. Company B’s waste output followed a similar trend, reaching about 3 tonnes in 2015,
being the lowest figure shown on the graph. Company C’s figure, however, showed a sudden increase,
peaking at about 10 tonnes in 2015, and being the highest figure shown at the end of the period.

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Bài mẫu Simon:
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.

It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies
shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of
waste produced by company C increased considerably.

In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4
tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C
rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.

From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by
around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over
the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective
amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.
(192 words, band 9)

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