1.

Identification of parts of the letter:

1. Part 1 is the address of the sender.

2. Part 2 is the address to whom the letter was sent.
3. Part 3 is the letter body.

2. The mistakes:

 3 January 2022, the correct one is: January 3rd, 2022.

 Would it be posible, the correct one is: Would it be possible.
 ...by 10 January 2022, the correct one is: by January 10th, 2022.
 Thanking you very much, the correct one is: Thank You very much.

3. The body of the letter is:

Dear Mr. Ozy

We are looking for high quality speaker parts and we are interested in your company products.
For your information, our company, Maju Mundur Company, is a well-known smartphone
company in Europe.

We'd like to see if we can work together to a high profit collaboration in future. So, kindly please
send your product catalogue, price list, and product sample.

We are looking forward to hear good news from you.

Sincerely,

Hasnawati

4. The body of the email is:

Ozy’s boss and respected colleagues

I really appreciate this precious tablet gift from you guys. It's really wonderful how we spent our
time working together, since you were my most respected leader, and my colleagues were my
best co-workers and always be.

I hope we all have a bright future wherever we are.

Sincerely,

Hasnawati