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1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |rdutta@email.com | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | vincent.prasad@email.com | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When
we first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across
teams. Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by
me, but also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm
absolutely confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She
can bring the skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can
quickly become an asset and help your company grow.
If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
Answer :

1. Opening Sentence
2. Content of the letter
3. Closing

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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms
of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)

Answer :
1. Avoid using
abbreviations. For example
"u" in "Thank u for your
letter...".
2. b) Use capital letters in
words that indicate the
name of the month. For
example "july" in
3. "...4 july...".
4. c) Declarative sentence
ends with a punctuation
mark. For example "?" in
"...and terms of
5. payment?"
1. Avoid using abbreviations. For example "u" in "Thank u for your letter...".
The truth is : “Thank you for your letter...”
2. Use capital letters in words that indicate the name of the month. For example "july"
in "...4 july...".
The truth is: “We would like to thank you for the letter of 4 July inquiring about
our latest catalogue,price list,and terms of payment”.
3. Declarative sentence ends with a punctuation mark. For example "?" in "...and
terms of payment?".
 The truth is : “Thank you for your letter of 4 July inquiring about our latest catalog,
price list, and terms of payment.”
4. We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory.
The truth is: “We hope you will find our prices and terms satisfactory”
5. I look forward to receive your order
The truth is : I look forward to receiving your order.
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.

November 3, 2023
Surabaya,Indonesian
Hello Prof. Allen Smith,

I would like to sincerely thank you for your willingness to be a guest speaker at our
international seminar. We greatly appreciate your contribution and expertise in this field.

Your presence as an expert at our seminar will provide valuable insights for the
participants and will make this event a success. We are confident that your knowledge and
experience will have a great positive impact on the participants.

We are very grateful for the time and effort you have taken to share your knowledge with
us. May this event be a good opportunity for you to interact with other professionals and
academics in this field.

Once again, thank you very much for your participation in our international seminar. We
look forward to working with you in the future and establishing closer relationships.

Sincerely
Aqsha Kharisma Hidayat