Class code:159

Student’s name:Nguyễn Ngọc Minh Thư

Peer editor’s name: Nguyễn Ngọc Quỳnh Anh
Date: 10/11

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 11

Unit:
Topic:

Street foods

1st draft

BẢN NHÁP-
Topic sentence
In Vietnam, street foods are very popular for many reasons.
When talking about street foods (in HCMC), there are three things that you should ---.
Street foods are very popular in Vietnam among young people for many reasons.

Supporting sentences
6Wh-

Concluding sentence

Self-assessment (checklist)
Comments/
Sentences Y/N
Suggestions
Do the supporting sentences provide explanations or evidence
(descriptions, facts, examples, or reasons) to support the main idea Yes
(topic sentence)?
Do the supporting sentences use at least 1 transitional word and
Yes
phrase to connect ideas?
Are the supporting sentences arranged in a logical order? Yes
Are there any supporting sentences unrelated to the main idea in the
Yes
topic sentence?
Are there about 4-6 supporting sentences in the paragraph? Yes
 Does the sentences use correct punctuation? Yes
Is there any spelling error? Yes
Does the writer use verb tenses correctly? Yes

Peer assessment (checklist)

Comments/
Sentences Y/N
Suggestions
Do the supporting sentences provide explanations or evidence
(descriptions, facts, examples, or reasons) to support the main idea Yes
(topic sentence)?
Do the supporting sentences use at least 1 transitional word and
Yes
phrase to connect ideas?
Are the supporting sentences arranged in a logical order? Yes
Are there any supporting sentences unrelated to the main idea in the
Yes
topic sentence?
Are there about 4-6 supporting sentences in the paragraph? Yes
Does the sentences use correct punctuation? Yes
Is there any spelling error? Yes
Does the writer use verb tenses correctly? Yes

Final version

Street food is the name for sidewalk snacks in most countries around
the world. I personally like those dishes because they are delicious
and reasonably priced. This is a unique feature in the cuisine of
Vietnam and other countries that tourists cannot miss when they
have the opportunity to visit these places. You can easily find street
food when running along the roadside. My favorite street food is
mixed rice paper. It's quite delicious and rich, stimulating my taste
buds. I hope to have many opportunities to go to many countries and
discover their famous street foods
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