Class code: 223_71ENG110013_11

Student’s name: Nguyen Ngoc Bao Tram

Peer editor’s name: Pham Anh Thu
Date:

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON _16__

Unit:
Topic:

My favorite food is pho. One is its deliciousness. Pho has rice noodles, beef sometimes
chicken, beef balls, vegetables and many other spices. Next, pho is a popular food in
Vietnam. Pho is available all over the country, from the north, central and south. In addition,
Pho is a Vietnamese food that is introduced around the world. because of the curiosity of
tourists when visiting Vietnam. Finally, pho is a pride for me and the Vietnamese people.
Because The word "pho" was added to the Shorter Oxford English Dictionary in 2007, Pho is
listed at number 28 on "World's 50 most delicious foods" compiled by CNN Go in 2011.When
you have a chance, you should try pho all over Vietnam Nam because each place will give us
a different delicious taste.

• 1st draft

• Self-assessment (checklist)
Paragraph Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Are there a topic sentence, supporting sentences,
Y
and concluding sentence?
Does the topic sentence state the main idea of the
Y
paragraph?
Do the supporting sentences provide explanations
and/ or evidence (descriptions, facts, examples and Y
reasons) to support the main idea?
Do the supporting sentences use at least 1
Y
transitional word and phrase to connect the ideas?
Are the supporting sentences arranged in a logical
Y
order?
Are there any sentences unrelated to the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence rephrase the topic
sentence, summarize the main ideas, or give a final Y
opinion?
Does the writer use correct punctuation? Y
Is there any spelling error? Y
Does the writer use verb tenses correctly? Y

• Peer assessment (checklist)

Paragraph Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Are there a topic sentence, supporting sentences,
Y
and concluding sentence?
Does the topic sentence state the main idea of the
Y
paragraph?
Do the supporting sentences provide explanations
and/ or evidence (descriptions, facts, examples and Y
reasons) to support the main idea?
Do the supporting sentences use at least 1
Y
transitional word and phrase to connect the ideas?
Are the supporting sentences arranged in a logical
Y
order?
Are there any sentences unrelated to the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence rephrase the topic
sentence, summarize the main ideas, or give a final Y
opinion?
Does the writer use correct punctuation? Y
Is there any spelling error? Y
Does the writer use verb tenses correctly? Y
 • Final version

My favorite food is pho. One is its deliciousness. Pho has rice noodles, beef sometimes
chicken, beef balls, vegetables and many other spices. Next, pho is a popular food in
Vietnam. Pho is available all over the country, from the north, central and south. In addition,
Pho is a Vietnamese food that is introduced around the world. because of the curiosity of
tourists when visiting Vietnam. Finally, pho is a pride for me and the Vietnamese people.
Because The word "pho" was added to the Shorter Oxford English Dictionary in 2007, Pho is
listed at number 28 on "World's 50 most delicious foods" compiled by CNN Go in 2011.When
you have a chance, you should try pho all over Vietnam Nam because each place will give us
a different delicious taste.

• Rubric for grading

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