Revision Matrix

In my feedback from Sam, she judged my feedback by saying,

“Clumping these quotes like this is not effective. It takes away
Judging Feedback from your analysis.” I agree with Sam by judging this
comment, because I should’ve had analysis after each quote.

In my feedback from Sam, she coached my feedback by

saying, “Clumping these quotes like this is not effective. It
Coaching Feedback takes away from your analysis.” I agree with Sam with this
coaching comment, because she gave me good advice that I
can work on, just like a coach does.
In my feedback from Sam, she said, “Clumping these quotes
like this is not effective. It takes away from your analysis.” My
Reacting Feedback reaction to this comment gave me an “ah ha” moment,
because I completely understood what she meant. Now I
know to not do this in the future.
In my feedback from Sam, the only feedback she gave me was
about my quotes from the text. Therefore, there was no other
Other Feedback feedback she gave, because the rest of my essay was pretty
good.

Out of my entire Major Assignment 1 Essay, Sam only gave me two corrections, which I am very
proud of because both corrections were about the same thing. The first correction she gave me
was in the second paragraph when she said, “Clumping these quotes like this is not effective. It
takes away from your analysis.” The second correction she gave me was in the third paragraph
when she said, “same issue as the first body paragraph”. Now, I know to put an analysis after
each quote instead of grouping all the quotes together and giving the same analysis at the end.
Sam’s corrections were very helpful for my future writing.