Huggins 1

Aidan Huggins

Ms. Gonzalez

ENC 1101-026

16 November 2023

Looking at Feedback from Major Assignment 2

Judging Comments “While this sentence outlines your intention to use rhetorical
situations to analyze and break down two artifacts their
effect in getting you accepted into UCF, it doesn't clearly
present a central argument or position. Remember a thesis
statement typically includes a clear and concise claim or
assertion that you'll explore and support in your essay.”
– Sam
- Sam judged and stated here that my thesis did not
meet the requirements necessary to have an effective
thesis, so I will change it according to what she said.

“Great job integrating the sources here, as well as,

connecting them to your first example” – Sam
- This positive judgmental feedback helps me know
that I am correctly incorporating my artifacts into my
essay.
Coaching Comments “needs to be centered” – Sam
- My Works Cited title was placed on the left of my
page, so Sam says that I need to fix it by centering it.
Reacting Comments “Good introduction” – Sam
- Sam reacts to my introduction paragraph and states
that it meets the requirements.
Other Comments N/A
- There were not any examples of other comments in
my feedback.