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    The student gathered feedback from two peers on their voiceover script, filming plans, and 2D animation for a project. Peer 1 found the voiceover comedic with no needed changes. They suggested planning how to wire props like a computer monitor. They also recommended blending the antagonist animation with the main composition as it was already planned. Peer 2 also had no critiques of the voiceover. They advised making the filming location seem less academic. Peer 2 also had no suggested changes for the animation. Additionally, the student asked Peer 2 for help with cinematography due to injuries.

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    The student gathered feedback from two peers on their voiceover script, filming plans, and 2D animation for a project. Peer 1 found the voiceover comedic with no needed changes. They suggested planning how to wire props like a computer monitor. They also recommended blending the antagonist animation with the main composition as it was already planned. Peer 2 also had no critiques of the voiceover. They advised making the filming location seem less academic. Peer 2 also had no suggested changes for the animation. Additionally, the student asked Peer 2 for help with cinematography due to injuries.

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    The student gathered feedback from two peers on their voiceover script, filming plans, and 2D animation for a project. Peer 1 found the voiceover comedic with no needed changes. They suggested planning how to wire props like a computer monitor. They also recommended blending the antagonist animation with the main composition as it was already planned. Peer 2 also had no critiques of the voiceover. They advised making the filming location seem less academic. Peer 2 also had no suggested changes for the animation. Additionally, the student asked Peer 2 for help with cinematography due to injuries.

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    Gathering Feedback from Peers

    Student #1 – Jake

    Question Response
    Voiceover Script: Any suggestions for the voiceover? Found it comedic, no critique.
    Do any lines come across as a bit clunky

    Filming Plans: What do you feel about where my filming Think about how I would wire up the props (pc monitor).
    plans are at right now? Any suggestions?
    2D Animation: How is my animation looking so far? Do I should blend my antagonist with the main composition, planning on it already.
    you have any suggestions for how to polish things, or
    where to go next with graphics to accompany my script?

    Any other comments? N/A

    Student #2 – James

    Question Response
    Voiceover Script: Any suggestions for the voiceover? Laughed, no critique.
    Do any lines come across as a bit clunky

    Filming Plans: What do you feel about where my filming Make sure to make the HND room less academic.
    plans are at right now? Any suggestions?
    2D Animation: How is my animation looking so far? Do No critique, apparently perfect.
    you have any suggestions for how to polish things, or
    where to go next with graphics to accompany my script?

    Any other comments? Asked James to help with cinematography due to injuries.

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