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其他技巧

 插入语:总的来说:,as a rule, /就某人而言:,in one's part,


 副词修饰:widely、particularly、actually=genuinely
 形容词修饰:比如一个聚会,可以扩展成一个热闹的聚会
 障碍、困难:A remains a key hurdle to B
 be relation to
 举例子:be living proof of sth,

第一种是对照构词法
pros and cons of…; “n” versus “n”; “n” against “n”
常见的对照表达有利弊、对比和对抗
第二种是用疑问词来构造主题词
How / Why / What …
第三种是“套就完了”的构词法
The purpose / theory / mechanism / fabric / ingredients / the (immature/mature) way of;
a willingness to / a sense of

其中 fabric 是布料材质的意思,可以用来表示……的构成

P1:1 概括+2 描述(+小标题)+图画内涵


1 概括图画句
 Expressly depicted in the/on the(left-side of)cartoon,
 sb react in distinctly different manners when they....
2 开始描述→写作储备(暂不看)\1 动作描述.docx
——表情:
 Wearing a adj. look,one man(可具体) does 动作 1 and 动作 2,情绪动
词 , “ .......”while the other does 动 作 1 and 动 作 2 , 情 绪 动 词 ,
“......”
——动作:找 2-3 个描写
 It can be seen that,doing sth(坐着躺着站着),Sb+V(be/has)+O
有对比图的: sb on the right-hand side of the picture,by contrast, is
doing....
——啥都没有:环境、陈设
 添加伴随的不重要动作:xxxx while doing sth and doing sth.
eg : two young men are boating on a lake while reading books and
talking with each other.
3(有文字说明)+揭示图画真正想表达内容
 Below the drawing an eye-catching caption reads, “xxxxx”
 The picture casts an intense light on the tremendous value of /the all-
pervading phenomenon/truth / (或者更具体的行为) that......
(若第一段发挥的太长,这句话就写在第二段开头)

P2:揭示主题+论证
别忘了用逻辑关系词连接:What’s more/Moreover
1 提出问题
 Admittedly,sth have\has altered, but what remains the identical is......
 我 们 生 活 在 一 个 ... 的 时 代 , 一 切 都 .... , .... 也 不 例 外 : We live in an
unprecedented age of ( globalization/fiercely competitive ) , where
everything(the advent of sth) is ( increasingly mobile across notional
boundaries),and (culture) is no exception.
2 论证支持:
① 分析原因
 ,and much of this can be boiled down on..../因 act as a trigger for sth
 A is association with B/on the grounds that +主谓宾
 ,in no small part because 很大程度上因为...
 ....问题的症结在于忽略/不能....:At the heart(inherent problem) of xxx is
turning a blind eye to xxx/an inability to xxx .

② 说明好处(激励 motivate/促进 facilitate/重要性)or 坏处:


(一般用于支持的第二句)
 【 正 】 What is particularly significant,to be frank, is xxx ,which for
(teaching us to respond to each adversity with confidence.)
(boosting your capacity for sth )
 It promises to put you on the road to fruitful results.这将助你收
获累累硕果。
 It is the very condition to impel man to unfold his power.
这是促使人们施展能力的条件。
 【反】However ,(to do sth)....is the very condition to invite the possibility
of..., while too much pursuit of/indulgence in....... would subject us to its
slavery/could threaten to....
 be detrimental to(be conducive to) one’s academic progress and career
advancement 不利于(有利于)某人学业进步和事业发展
 好结果:sth open a window into ..../make sth a catalyst for..... 用 sth 促进....

③ 分析完了说该怎么做
 具体该做什么:rather than doing sth, sb should do sth as......
 it is imperative(必要的) for sb to embrace sth
 only in this way can sth/sb unleash its boundless potential and better
recognize the ideal vision that
 In a larger sense,要达到什么结果 should be approached by translating our
preoccupation with A into B(as soon as possible),and such a shift may
hold a (particular) promise of savoring(享受到;品味到)......
 Let us not always rest our eyes on what we can get from nature.But let us
direct our attention to what we can do for the nature./how much we can get
from.
Our way of treating/Our attitude towards the environment could make the
difference between a green world/success and a grey world/failure.

④ 补充论据:反证;例证;对比
 The drawbacks of xx (pessimism)and benefits of xxx (optimism)are self-
evident.
 ... 是 这 个 时 代 的 显 著 特 征 , 对 .... 大 有 溢 出 : ( Multicultural
integration ) is a noteworthy feature of the time and is of great
benefit to (the inheritance and development of world culture.)
 A grasp of mundane affairs is genuine knowledge; an understanding of
worldly wisdom is true learning.

P3:总结态度+有所行动+畅想
1 正面褒奖 0r 反面批判(也可以当论证句)
 正面再次强调好处:
In the final analysis,.(driven by.... is ultimately essential to .....,and it
will provide us with the increasing opportunities for/the means of (navigating us
into a life with deeper meaning.)
 反面说解决仍需努力:
It's not an overnight affair to (address/tackle/approach/grapple with the
immense task), and lengthy-processed concerted efforts are in need.
 它向灯塔指引人们向正确方向:It should be upheld as the beacon(灯
塔) for everybody,guiding us forward along the right course.
2 采取行动
 To serve as responsible stewards of xxx, sb has/have better press
forward on deeper
(initiatives/publicity/research/regulation )concerning xxx.
 relevant authorities 相关部门
3 畅想
 Should we not abide by the (measures/ideologies)enumerated above,
sth(the xxx of 的结构) would be an impossible dream,to be realized.
 To wrap it all up,we can establish that, by…., it can put the
answer to…in place, and our (efforts) will pay great
dividends.
材料作文开头
1.表明作者观点
As presented /explained in the arguments, the author deems that...如论证所
述,作者认为......
2.表明我的观点
1) 同意: And I see it the same way,since it makes(total) sense when (it
comes to)..我也持相同的看法,因为考虑到......,这番话颇有道理
2)不同意: But l see it another way,since it doesn't make sense when it
comes to...但我持另外一种看法,因为考虑到......,这番话没有道理
3)部分同意: But from where l stand,it only offers a partial picture because,
although (n / doing sth) is vital,(n / doing sth) matters far more.
图表作文开头
bar chart 柱状图
pie chart 饼状图
table 图表
描述:There was a(n) drop/increase of+百分比, from A to B.
...dropped/grew from A to B, a(n) drop/increase of+百分比.
突出重点:What is surprising/interesting about...is that...

预测:sth be set to reach...

下降:fall, drop, decline, diminish, dwindle, shrink, downward, plunge, plummet,


dive, nosedive.
增长:increase, grow, rise, swell, mount, shoot up, soar, rocket, surge.

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