背景介绍（改写题目）+不同观点+我的表态

让步拉回（反方观点+反方可能的理由+驳斥+我的表态）

一些人支持……可能因为……（概念性强）。
……（给出这些人支持的一些具体化理由，概念性减弱）。然而他们忽略的是……
（驳斥）。所以……

（3和4是并列段，建议首句采用同样的结构这样更加清晰。另外基本都是总分总的
格式来书写3和4。）

结构逻辑和第二部分类似，同样是概念性逐级递减，也可以用例子展开。

让步拉回式结尾。总结的时候要多用句子表述是自己的观点：我认为……；我承
认……我建议……等等
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背景介绍（改写题目）+不同观点+我的表态

• 当今社会，越来越多的人倾向于选择国际快餐而非传统食物（改写题目）
• 有些人认为这对家庭和社会产生消极影响，有些人却持有不同的观点（不同观点）
• 而这篇文章将会讨论双方同时给出我的观点，那就是……（我的表态）

让步拉回（反方观点+反方可能的理由+驳斥+我的表态）

一些人支持 国际化快餐去取代传统食物 可能因为 非常方便/出于效率目的（概念性强）。

因为现在的人工作好忙，国际快餐可以减少等待的时间（给出这些人支持的一些具体化
理由，概念性减弱）。
然而他们忽略的是国际快餐不健康/对健康有害（驳斥）。
所以我认为一味支持国际快餐而不重视传统食物将会产生消极影响，尤其是对家庭和社
会方面。（我的观点）
关于家庭，传统食物相比于国际化快餐，更能够维系家庭情感纽带。……

关于社会，传统食物已经被公认为是社会文化多样性的重要一部分。……

最后，我承认国际化快餐食物有一些优点，
然而，非常明显让国际化快餐食物取代传统食物是坏处多余好处的。
综合来看，我非常确信我们应该保护传统食物，发扬它的独特魅力，这对家庭和社会都
意义深远。
第一句 In this day and age，
改写题目
• [ ] has become an integral part of our daily life and it has been exerting
• 物品 profound influence on the way we [ ……]

• 行为现象 • It is standard practice for [ ……] to do [ ……] since we have embarked upon
information era
• 带来好处
• [ ……] has been advancing at an accelerated rate in a multitude of arenas
• …… and（ boost the economic and cultural exchanges between countries all over
the world ）.
第二句 Yet when it comes to whether [ ……] or not, people hold conflicting views. Some
不同观点 think/assert/concend/believe/argue that[ ……] while others are opposed to this
viewpoint.
• whether[ ……] is a blessing or a curse in terms of[ ……]
• whether[ ……] should [ ……] or not

第三句 This essay discusses both sides of the argument and then I will give my own
我的观点 perspective, which is that [ ……]
 Granted, some people think [ ……] pose a threaten to /undermine the right
反方观点
of/bring about [ ……] because [ ……]
反方可能的理由
Granted, some people think [ ……] can profit from [ ……] because it enable [ ……]
驳斥
to do [ ……]
我的表态
However, what they are ignoring is that [ ……] so I can not agree with this
opinion.
……
开头结构一致
On the one hand, …… In response to families, ……
On the other hand ,…… In response to society, ……
• 逻辑概念性
逐渐降低，
具体化增强 概念化：关于家庭方面，传统食物是维系家庭情感的纽带
具体：尤其是对于外地打工的人，传统食物让他们想起家庭的温馨
再具体：在春节等一些重要节日，一家人一同享用传统食物不仅是重要的
风俗，更是大家情感交流的好机会

概念化：关于家庭方面，传统食物是维系家庭情感的纽带
首先，其次，最后
结论
To be more specific, there is a recent survey conducted by [ ……] revealed that [ ……]
enabled people to do [ ……] .
What is more, over 75 % resondants contended that [ ……] ,resulting in more careful
attention from both the government and public.

机构：the Ministry of
教育问题：UNESCO
犯罪问题：the Ministry of Justice
交通问题：the Ministry of Transportation
建筑问题： the Ministry of Construction
环境问题: HSUS and Greenpeace
社会问题： Chinese academy of Social Science
In conclusion, I concede that [ ……] may produce specific upsides. However, if we enforce
this indiscriminately ,that will surely generate even more downsides.
On balance, I am convinced that we should optimize……

In conclusion, I concede that [ ……] may produce specific downsides. However，I am

convinced that there are no valid alternatives to this methodology at the current stage
of…… On balance, I think ……

In conclusion, I concede that [ ……] may produce specific downsides. However, it is

obvious that the upsides of [ ……] overweight its downsides. On balance, I am convinced
that [ ……]
In this day and age，

• [ ] has become an integral part of our daily life and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we [ ……]
• Yet when it comes to whether [ ……] or not, people hold conflicting views. Some think/assert/concend/believe/argue
that[ ……] while others are opposed to this viewpoint.
• This essay discusses both sides of the argument and then I will give my own perspective, which is that [ ……]

• Granted, some people think [ ……] pose a threaten to /undermine the right of/ bring about [ ……] because [ ……]
• However, what they are ignoring is that [ ……] so I can not agree with this opinion.

• In response to families, ……（字数要多一些）

• In response to society, ……To be more specific, there is a recent survey conducted by [ ……] revealed that [ ……] enabled
people to do [ ……] .What is more, over 75 % respondents contended that [ ……] ,resulting in more careful attention
from both the government and public. （字数要多一些）

• In conclusion, I concede that [ ……] may produce specific upsides. However, if we enforce this indiscriminately ,that will
surely generate even more downsides.
• On balance, I am convinced that we should optimize……