Writing task 1 test 1 cam 11

Draft 1:

The given pie charts illustrate the different goals of using water in six parts of the world.

In general, (agriculture using purpose)= Cụm này có make sense vs đúng ngữ pháp k thế? makes up the
largest portion in most of the supplied areas, while using water for industrial and domestic purposes are
accounts for noticeable ratios in the charts.

Overview ko nêu rõ được đặc điểm chính, đặc biệt là câu sau mơ hồ ko mường tượng được industrial vs
domestic thì noticeable ở khu vực nào?

In agriculture, the four areas: Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America supply water
almost for growing crops and farms, at least over 70%. In contrast, in North America and Europe spend
only about 35% of their water for agricultural aims while they use two-thirds of the water in totaly for
other purposes.
It can be seen that industrial and domestic use aims are take up by far the largest proportion of water in
the pie charts of North America and Europe, about approximately 50%, while in the other area, they use
water for industrial only about 5% to 10%. Besides, the domestic use ismakes up the smallest percentage
when in South America and Europe spend around 17% for this purpose and the rest of the given other
places are under 13%.

T sẽ ko comment j về nội dung, t chú tâm vào ngữ pháp vì ngữ pháp phải chắc mới bàn đến nội dung