Thesis

1. Problem solution

• The problems associated with this as well as the solutions for the same would be analysed in the
following paragraphs.
• This essay is an analysis of the problems created by this scenario as well as the possible measures to
mitigate the effects of this.
• An analysis is made here to figure out the factors responsible for this as well as to suggest the
possible measures to mitigate the effects of this.
• This essay intend to discuss the causes of these issue/problem and suggest some measures/solutions
to alleviate the issue/problem.

Conclusion

• In an analysis, this is observed to have adverse effects/implications on 1 and 2 which would

elaborated further along with the possible solns for the same.....
• Consequently, both 1and 2 should take collective actions to mitigate the effect of this.

2. Discuss both

• The significance of both views would be analysed and compared here to identify the most convincing
observation...
• It is essential in this context to have a detailed examination of the arguments behind both to
identify the most convincing notion /opinion
• To arrive at a definitive opinion, it is essential to examine, compare and analyse both the brighter as
well as darker aspects of this transition/development.
• An attempt is made here to examine and compare the arguments behind both these conflicting
views.
• This essay examines the premises/relevance of arguments behind both these conflicting views in
order to determine a convincing observation
• A thorough examination of both seems inevitable to obtain a sensible standpoint.
• In order to arrive at a convincing observation the premises of both these mutually exclusive
arguments need to be examined in detail which would be done further.
• A definitive opinion can only be arrived aftr a detailed examination of the arguments behind both
views which would be done further.
• The premises/possible arguments behind both views would be compared and analysed to arrive at a
convincing opinion.
3. Advantage disadvantage

• An attempt is made here to figure out and compare the brighter aspects and the possible negative
aspects of this change.
• The merits associated with this as well as the limitations of the same would be analysed in the
following lines.
• This essay is an analysis of the possibilities offered by this as well as limitations of the same to
identify which aspect is more impactful.

Or

Complex sentence using although....

• Although there would be some positive outcomes of this, it is observed to have a number of
detrimental effects on x and y.
• This appears to offer a number of promising opportunities to PPL, although there would be some
negligible drawbacks.

4. Agree disagree

• On account of the factors described further, I tend to agree with this statement.
• While analysing the subject in different dimensions, it seems reasonable to agree with this
statement/ it seems unreasonable to agree with the statement.
• I tend to agree with this statementz and the following lines will explain why
• This essay Is in agreement with the stated argument, the reasons for which would be examined in
details.

5. Outweigh

Outweigh outnumber outshine outstrip eclipse

Vastly outnumber
Significantly outweigh
Disadvantages are outnumbered by the advantages.

6. Positive or negative development

• While examining the possible brighter effects of this on X and Y, it appears to me as a positive
development.
• On account of the possible brighter side of this on X and Y, this can be considered/referred to as a
positive development.
• Taking into account the adverse effects of this on X and Y, it is reasonable to believe that this is a
negative sign of change.

Advantages

Promising side/aspects
Brighter aspects
Ideal effects
Desirable effects
Merits
Possibilities that X can offer

Disadvantages
Limitations
Shortcomings
Undesirable effects
Inappreciable outcomes
Unpleasant outcome
Unfavourable
Hazardous effects
Harmful effects
Harms caused by this
Dangers derived from this
Adverse implications
Dangers involved in it
Difficulties associated with this
Inconvenience caused by this

More advantages
Thesis 1

This is observed to offer a number of benefits to both 1 and 2, though there may be certain practical
difficulties associated with this.

Disadvantages more
Thesis
Although it is true that this could benefit children in certain ways, the negative effects of this on 1 and
2 are much impactful...

Introducing disadvantages

Meanwhile, it can also be observed noticed that

Meanwhile, there is also a negative side to this, which needs to be mentioned in this context...
While glorifying all these aspects, it can be noticed that...
Meanwhile, in certain other aspects, it could also be the case that......

Meanwhile, it could also be a possibility in certain other cases that...

It could also be a possibility that certain children may find difficulties doing home work

Refuting Disadv

Perhaps, this can be true to some extent, however, the brighter aspects appear to be more
promising...

Perhaps, this can be a mere possibility.

However, the merits appear to be far more impactful..

Although there is no denying this possibility, the merits are noticed to be more impactful...
 Admittedly, it is true that
It can be admitted that
It is acknowledged that
Undeniably, irrefutably indeed, it is true that

Disadv more

As such, There is no denying the fact that

As such, it could be admitted that
As such , it would not be unfair to admit that
It can be reasonably said that....
As such, it is true that......
As such, it is acknowledged that this would benefit children in certain ways

However, the undesirable effects of this on both the environment and economy cannot be
overlooked.