By: Chong & Lee

Old-Fashioned
Values
IELTS BAND 9 ESSAY
INTRODUCTION
In modern-day society, the criteria according to
which people are judged are changing.

Some believe that currently, the worth of an

individual is directly corresponding to their
income, whereas traditional values are being
forgotten.

Even though there are certain individuals that

concentrate their attention on wealth, I disagree
with that statement, due to the reason that
people are appraised by the public according to
their deeds, and not their earnings.
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Without a doubt, there is a tendency to idolise and admire
celebrities for their material possessions and the status
they hold in society.
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Nonetheless, with the rise of “cancel culture” wealthy part
of the population is heavily criticised for their actions.
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For instance, well-known actors are losing sponsorship deals
as well as contracts with movie production companies, due
to their problematic pasts and wrongful decisions.

This proves that despite their wealth and influential

positions, the public will hold them accountable for their
actions, regardless of their income.
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By contrast, rich individuals, who generously share their
wealth with charities or those in need, are continuously
praised by society.

These people put their resources into a good cause,

thus gaining respect and admiration in the public’s eye.

As an example, numerous celebrities are attracting the

attention of their audience to current issues, by joining
charity organisations.

In other words, these people are getting attention and

highly valued because of their kind and giving nature.
 CONCLUSION

To conclude, it is believed that net worth

and social status are taking over traditional
values, such as kindness and generosity.

Although some people tend to judge others

by looking at their possessions,

I am of the opinion that good deeds and

personal qualities are held higher in society.