INSTITUT PENDIDIKAN GURU KAMPUS PULAU PINANG

BORANG AKUAN TERIMA MAKLUM BALAS KERJA

KURSUSTAHUN AKADEMIK : 2022

Programme & Intake PPISMP JUN 2022

Semester/Year Sem.1 /Year 1

Student’s Name Muhammad Fazari Bin Saparidin

Index Number 2022272310010

Identity Card Number 040814-02-0593

Academic Group PM 1

Code and Course GEEC1052 Effective Communication in English

Coursework Details Title of Submission Date

Task

1. TASK 1: 5/9/2022
DIGITAL
PRODUCT-
WRITING

Acknowledgement of Student’s Signature:

feedback received from the Date: 5/9/2022
lecturer

Lecturer’s Name DR. SHAIK HUSSEINUDIN BIN BABU ALI

Lecturer’s Signature:

Date:
 LIST OF CONTENT

Stage Page
Draft For Brainstorming 3
Brainstorming 5
Drafting 6
Editing 8
Essay 11
References 15
Publishing 16
Draft for Brainstorming
Title : Pollution is Not a Small Crisis

Introduction

• pollute the environment and destroy some places that are habitats for some animals
that are part of one ecosystem
• air pollution has reached a dangerous level, at the same time as the world is
becoming increasingly crowded and hot while vehicle engines continue to emit
poisonous gases" - (Pencemaran udara dunia cecah tahap berbahaya - WHO, 2018)
• "the health effects of air pollution are serious. About 30% of deaths from stroke, lung
cancer, and heart disease are due to air pollution" - (Pencemaran udara dunia cecah
tahap berbahaya - WHO, 2018)
• causes, effects, and measures to deal with pollution

Body 1

• cause water, air, and soil pollution

• irresponsible attitude of Malaysians
• uncontrolled dumping of rubbish in water areas will contaminate clean water sources

• air pollution often results from open burning

• our neighbouring country, which is Indonesia, has had a lot of impact on the people
of Southeast Asia caused by accidental open burning

• soil pollution is caused by using fertilizers that are not environmentally friendly
• cheap price and is easy to find everywhere
• attitude of Malaysians is more concerned with convenience
Body 2

• the effects of water pollution, which is that much aquatic life will die due to the
condition of the river or the water in its habitat has been polluted by toxics and
chemicals as well as garbage
• "The Oder River in Poland collapsed by 90 percent as thousands of fish died on the
banks of the fertile river that runs between Poland and Germany” – (Berita Harian,
2022)

• effect of air pollution is to affect the human respiratory system which can result in
diseases such as asthma patients, bronchitis patients, chronic pneumonia, heart, and
allergies
• carbon monoxide gas produced by motor vehicles that use fuel

• soil pollution is that the soil will be contaminated by chemicals and toxic that will
prevent plants from growing in the area

Body 3

• best step in dealing with water pollution is to impose actions and heavy fines and
summons to perpetrators who have violated the law related to the disposal of waste
toxics and chemicals in the wrong place or not following the procedures set by the
Water Services Commission Country (SPAN)
• air pollution crisis holds a campaign
• involve various groups regardless of religion and race

• spread awareness to every individual regarding the importance of air and how
important air is to our daily lives

• sell or only produce environmentally friendly fertilizers in large quantities and at

reasonable prices
Closing

• not a small crisis that can be carried out by one party, rather it requires effective
cooperation from all over our country regardless of race and religion
• hope that we can work together in preserving and conserving the environment from
the crisis discussed earlier, which is water, air, and soil pollution so that future
generations can enjoy the natural beauty of the environment
Brainstorming

Introduction
-pollute the environment
-destroy some places

Idea 1
- cause water,air and land pollution
- irresponsible attitude
- uncontrolled dumping of rubbish
- accidental open burning
- cheap price

Idea 2
- effect water,air and land pollution
- affect the human respiratory system
- carbon monoxide gas
- soil pollution is that the soil will be contaminated
by chemicals and toxic

Idea 3
- holds a campaign
- involve various groups regardless of religion and
race]
- spread awareness
- produce environmentally friendly fertilizers

Conclusion
- cooperation from all over our country regardless
of race and religion
- preserving and conserving the environment from
the crisis
- future generations can enjoy the natural beauty
of the environment
Drafting

Title : Pollution is Not a Small Crisis

Introduction

Pollution are no stranger to Malaysians because it is often talked about and is

also the main issue in social media. It is common knowledge that there are several type of
pollution, namely water, air, soil, and noise pollution. In 2020, the Environment Department
has receive many report, but there is one report that has involved many individuals,
especially in Johor. The report refers to an incident in Pasir Gudang, Johor that has affected
the health and quality of the environment with illegal activities, namely the disposal of oil
waste in the wrong way. Not only that, the incident of water pollution in India has shaken the
news in the present day, which is more specific to the Sungai Gangga. The purpose of my
writing this essay is to gave exposure to everyone especially Malaysians regarding pollution,
namely the causes and effects of pollution.

Idea 1

Firstly, several causes cause water, air, and soil pollution. The cause of water
pollution is the irresponsible attitude of Malaysians. This causes widespread littering all over
the place, especially in areas that are tourist attraction. It is common knowledge that
improper or uncontrolled dumping of rubbish in water areas will contaminate clean water
sources. In addition, air pollution often results from open burning. Not only that, but volcanic
eruptions in neighbouring country are also one of the causes of air pollution in our country.
Meanwhile, soil pollution is caused by using fertilizers that are not environmentally friendly.
This matter is widespread because many shop or mall have sold a lot of this fertilizer that is
not environmentally friendly at a cheap price and is easy to find everywhere.
Idea 2

First of all, I will give an exposure related to the effects of water pollution, which is
that much aquatic life will die due to the condition of the river or the water in its habitat has
been polluted by toxin and chemicals as well as garbage. In addition, the effect of air
pollution is to affect the human respiratory system which can result in diseases such as
asthma patients, bronchitis patients, chronic pneumonia, heart, and allergies. Most
respiratory diseases is caused by carbon monoxide gas produced by motor vehicles that use
fuel. Meanwhile, the effect of soil pollution is that the soil will be contaminated by chemicals
and toxic that will prevent plant from growing in the area.

Idea 3

I will reveal to all of us related measures to deal with water, air, and soil pollution.
As we know, water pollution is often caused by illegal activities by factories. While dealing
with the air pollution crisis hold a campaign like "Let's Take Care of Our Air". With this, we
can involve various groups regardless of religion and race. It is common knowledge that this
air pollution is always causes by irresponsible individuals. With this, the best way to deal with
this crisis is in that way, which aims to spread awareness to every individual regarding the
importance of air and how important air is to our daily life. Don't forget the measures to deal
with soil pollution is that fertilizer suppliers need to sell or only produced environmentally
friendly fertilizers in large quantities and at reasonable prices. With this, the crops are also
cleaner and free from poisons or chemicals. However, there is one step that needs to be
implemented at the school level, which is to apply civic values related to the environment
that can give early exposure to children in ensured that they all preserve and conserve the
environment in the future for the next generation.

Conclusion

In conclusion, this pollution is not a small crisis that can be carry out by one party,
rather it requires effective cooperation from all over our country regardless of race and
religion. I hope that we can work together in preserving and conserving the environment
from the crisis discussed earlier, which is water, air, and soil pollution so that future
generations can enjoyed the natural beauty of the environment.
 Editing

Title : Pollution Is Not A Small Crisis

Introduction

is
Pollution are no stranger to Malaysians because it is often talked about and is also the main
on issue in social media. It is common knowledge that there are several type of pollution, types
namely water, air, soil, and noise pollution. In 2020, the Environment Department has
received
receive many report, but there is one report that has involved many individuals, especially in
reports Johor. The report refers to an incident in Pasir Gudang, Johor that has affected the health
and quality of the environment with illegal activities, namely the disposal of oil waste in the
wrong way. Not only that, the incident of water pollution in India has shaken the news in the
present day, which is more specific to the Sungai Gangga. The purpose of my writing this
give essay is to gave exposure to everyone especially Malaysians regarding pollution, namely the
causes and effects of pollution.

+ pollution is often associated with activities that pollute the environment and destroy some
places that are habitats for some animals that are part of one ecosystem

+ measures to deal with pollution

Idea 1

Firstly, several causes cause water, air, and soil pollution. The cause of water
pollution is the irresponsible attitude of Malaysians. This causes widespread littering all over
attractions the place, especially in areas that are tourist attraction. It is common knowledge that
improper or uncontrolled dumping of rubbish in water areas will contaminate clean water
sources. In addition, air pollution often results from open burning. Not only that, but volcanic
countries eruptions in neighbouring country are also one of the causes of air pollution in our country.
Meanwhile, soil pollution is caused by using fertilizers that are not environmentally friendly.
shops This matter is widespread because many shop or mall have sold a lot of this fertilizer that is
malls not environmentally friendly at a cheap price and is easy to find everywhere.

+ the water source will be filtered and used for daily use such as washing clothes

+ there is no doubt that our neighbouring country, which is Indonesia, has had a lot of impact
on the people of Southeast Asia caused by accidental open burning
 Idea 2

First of all, I will give an exposure related to the effects of water pollution, which is
that much aquatic life will die due to the condition of the river or the water in its habitat has
toxics been polluted by toxin and chemicals as well as garbage. In addition, the effect of air

pollution is to affect the human respiratory system which can result in diseases such as
asthma patients, bronchitis patients, chronic pneumonia, heart, and allergies. Most
are respiratory diseases is caused by carbon monoxide gas produced by motor vehicles that use
fuel. Meanwhile, the effect of soil pollution is that the soil will be contaminated by chemicals
plants and toxic that will prevent plant from growing in the area.

+ it is possible that the product of the plant will be categorized as poisonous and will
endanger the health of humans and animals when eaten.

Idea 3

I will reveal to all of us related measures to deal with water, air, and soil pollution.
As we know, water pollution is often caused by illegal activities by factories. While dealing
with the air pollution crisis hold a campaign like "Let's Take Care of Our Air". With this, we
can involve various groups regardless of religion and race. It is common knowledge that this
often
air pollution is always causes by irresponsible individuals. With this, the best way to deal with
caused
this crisis is in that way, which aims to spread awareness to every individual regarding the
importance of air and how important air is to our daily life. Don't forget the measures to deal live
with soil pollution is that fertilizer suppliers need to sell or only produced environmentally produce
friendly fertilizers in large quantities and at reasonable prices. With this, the crops are also
cleaner and free from poisons or chemicals. However, there is one step that needs to be
implemented at the school level, which is to apply civic values related to the environment
that can give early exposure to children in ensured that they all preserve and conserve the ensuring
environment in the future for the next generation.

+ the best step in dealing with water pollution is to impose actions and heavy fines and
summons to perpetrators who have violated the law related to the disposal of waste toxics
and chemicals in the wrong place or not following the procedures set by the Water Services
Commission Country (SPAN)
 Conclusion

In conclusion, this pollution is not a small crisis that can be carry out by one carried

party, rather it requires effective cooperation from all over our country regardless of race and
religion. I hope that we can work together in preserving and conserving the environment
from the crisis discussed earlier, which is water, air, and soil pollution so that future
enjoy generations can enjoyed the natural beauty of the environment.

+ that water, air, and soil pollution will have a huge negative impact on our country
economically, politically, and socially
 Pollution is Not a Small Crisis

Pollution is no stranger to Malaysians because it is often talked about and is also

the main issue on social media. Pollution is often associated with activities that pollute the
environment and destroy some places that are habitats for some animals that are part of one
ecosystem. It is common knowledge that there are several types of pollution, namely water,
air, soil, and noise pollution. According to the World Health Organization (WHO), "air
pollution has reached a dangerous level, at the same time as the world is becoming
increasingly crowded and hot while vehicle engines continue to emit poisonous gases" and
"the health effects of air pollution are serious. About 30% of deaths from stroke, lung cancer,
and heart disease are due to air pollution". In 2020, the Environment Department has
received many reports, but there is one report that has involved many individuals, especially
in Johor. The report refers to an incident in Pasir Gudang, Johor that has affected the health
and quality of the environment with illegal activities, namely the disposal of oil waste in the
wrong way. Not only that, the incident of water pollution in India has shaken the news in the
present day, which is more specific to the Sungai Gangga. The purpose of my writing this
essay is to give exposure to everyone especially Malaysians regarding pollution, namely the
causes, effects, and measures to deal with pollution.

Firstly, several causes cause water, air, and soil pollution. The cause of water
pollution is the irresponsible attitude of Malaysians. This causes widespread littering all over
the place, especially in areas that are tourist attractions. It is common knowledge that
improper or uncontrolled dumping of rubbish in water areas will contaminate clean water
sources. Furthermore, the water source will be filtered and used for daily use such as
washing clothes. In addition, air pollution often results from open burning. Not only that, but
volcanic eruptions in neighbouring countries are also one of the causes of air pollution in our
country. There is no doubt that our neighbouring country, which is Indonesia, has had a lot of
impact on the people of Southeast Asia caused by accidental open burning. Meanwhile, soil
pollution is caused by using fertilizers that are not environmentally friendly. This matter is
widespread because many shops or malls have sold a lot of this fertilizer that is not
environmentally friendly at a cheap price and is easy to find everywhere. Furthermore, the
attitude of Malaysians is more concerned with convenience than with the negative impact
that will come.
 Secondly, I would like to give exposure related to the effects of pollution from
the point of view of the water, air, and soil pollution. First, I will provide some background
information on the impacts of water pollution, including the fact that a lot of aquatic life
vanishes when harmful chemicals and rubbish contaminate rivers and other bodies of water
that serve as habitat for it. According to the Daily News "The Oder River in Poland collapsed
by 90 percent as thousands of fish died on the banks of the fertile river that runs between
Poland and Germany”. In addition, the effect of air pollution is to affect the human respiratory
system which can result in diseases such as asthma patients, bronchitis patients, chronic
pneumonia, heart, and allergies. Most respiratory diseases are caused by carbon monoxide
gas produced by motor vehicles that use fuel. In the meantime, soil pollution has the effect of
contaminating the soil with hazardous compounds, which will prevent plants from growing
there. Furthermore, it is possible that the product of the plant will be categorized as
poisonous and will endanger the health of humans and animals when eaten.

Lastly, in this paragraph, I will reveal to all of us related measures to deal with
water, air, and soil pollution. As we know, water pollution is often caused by illegal activities
by factories. With this, the best step in dealing with water pollution is to impose actions and
heavy fines and summons to perpetrators who have violated the law related to the disposal
of waste toxics and chemicals in the wrong place or not following the procedures set by the
Water Services Commission Country (SPAN). While dealing with the air pollution crisis hold
a campaign like "Let's Take Care of Our Air". With this, we can involve various groups
regardless of religion and race. It is common knowledge that this air pollution is often caused
by irresponsible individuals. With this, the best way to deal with this crisis is in that way,
which aims to spread awareness to every individual regarding the importance of air and how
important air is to our daily lives. Don't forget the measures to deal with soil pollution is that
fertilizer suppliers need to sell or only produce environmentally friendly fertilizers in large
quantities and at reasonable prices. Indirectly, Malaysians are more interested in buying
environmentally friendly fertilizers. With this, the crops are also cleaner and free from
poisons or chemicals. However, there is one step that needs to be implemented at the
school level, which is to apply civic values related to the environment that can give early
exposure to children in ensuring that they all preserve and conserve the environment in the
future for the next generation.
 In conclusion, this pollution is not a small crisis that can be carried out by one
party, rather it requires effective cooperation from all over our country regardless of race and
religion. It is no wonder that water, air, and soil pollution will have a huge negative impact on
our country economically, politically, and socially. To close my writing, I hope that we can
work together in preserving and conserving the environment from the crisis discussed
earlier, which is water, air, and soil pollution so that future generations can enjoy the natural
beauty of the environment. Finally, I would like to invite all of us to jointly carry out the
responsibility or trust given by God in loving or protecting the environment from pollution.
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Publishing

https://sites.google.com/epembelajaran.edu.my/muhammad-fazari-bin-saparidin/home