Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do

not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may
improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

D/Opinion

Plans
BP1 :

T : Unreliable quality of new products

S : Lack of verification

E : New brand

A : If customers .... keep buying,

R : => waste of money and time, more risk

BP2 :

T : overloaded by the ads ....

S1 : do not meet the demand

E1 : secondary students get recommended by real-estate/properties companies

S2 : spoil the experience of users

E2 : pop-up
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do
not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may
improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Intro

Over the last few years, commercial companies have been reaching a large
numbers of consumers worldwide/in every corner. While some people believe
that promoting latest/ brand-new / current merchandises / goods / items has
brought about such an improvement toward our living standard / daily life, others
argue that it is unnecessary to be persuaded/ urged to purchase goods.I tend to
agree with the latter argument and in this essay I will support my view with
examples
BP1 :

T : Unreliable quality of new products

S : Lack of verification

E : New brand

A : If customers .... keep buying,

R : => waste of money and time, more risk

With the development of social media, new-born items tend to have unrealiable
quality through a large number of advertisements. This is because new customers
are not likely to give it a try, which leads to the lack of experience and provement
of products’ standard. For instance, a recently developed medicine brand often
finds it difficult to attract potential consumers. If some customers keep buying
without hesitation about the creditworthy of merchandises, they will end up
wasting money and time as well as taking more unwanted risk.

BP2 :

T : overloaded by the ads ....

S1 : do not meet the demand

E1 : secondary students get recommended by real-estate/properties companies

S2 : spoil the experience of users

E2 : pop-up

In recent years, contents in social networking have been overloaded by a wide

range of/a variety of promotions. As a consequence, realistic demands would not
be met, this is because firms which purchase promoting services could hit the
wrong target market. To illustrate, Secondary students who are still fianancially
dependent on their parents get recommended to buy real estate by brokers.
Furthermore, Digital advertising would not only interrupt a video, but also spoil
the experience of users by popping up suddenly. For example, while a family are
singing along through a karaoke beat from youtube, a window intermediately
comes up.

In conclusion,
Intro

Over the last few years, commercial companies have been reaching a large
number of consumers worldwide/in every corner. While some people believe that
promoting latest/ brand-new / current merchandises / goods / items has brought
about such an improvement toward our living standard / daily life, others argue
that it is unnecessary to be persuaded/ urged to purchase goods.I tend to agree
with the latter argument and in this essay I will support my view with examples

With the development of social media, new-born items tend to have unrealiable
quality through a great number of advertisements. This is because new customers
are not likely to give it a try, which leads to the lack of experience and provement
of products’ standard. For instance, a recently developed medicine brand often
finds it difficult to attract potential consumers. If some customers keep buying
without hesitation about the crediworthiness of merchandises, they will end up
wasting money and time as well as taking more unwanted risks.

In recent years, contents in social networking have been overloaded by a wide

range of/a variety of promotions. As a consequence, realistic demands would not
be met, this is because firms which purchase promoting services could hit the
wrong target market. To illustrate, Secondary students who are still financially
dependent on their parents could get recommended to buy real estate by
brokers. Furthermore, Digital advertising would not only interrupt a video, but
also spoil the experience of users by popping up suddenly. For example, while a
family are singing along through a karaoke beat from youtube, a window would
intermediately comes up which may prevent them from watching the video
properly.

In conclusion, while some people believe that the condition of recently produced
output could be reliable, I strongly argue that the social media is overwhelmed
with a variety of advertisements which do not meet the demand but annoy the
viewers.