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TE 801
Dr. Moore
12/13/2020
In Merlin’s Honors English 11 class, all the students signed a participation agreement at
the beginning of the year that detailed our expectation that every student contribute to each class
discussion. Because of online learning and the state’s two-way communication requirement,
student participation is recorded for attendance. In order to be marked present for that day,
students must participate at least once in each class discussion. Discussions are generally based
on comprehension and analysis questions that the students complete as they read. They are also
required to have their cameras on unless they have communicated to either me or my mentor
teacher that they have a technology or other barrier. Merlin consistently participates once during
each class discussion, but generally does not share his ideas beyond the required amount. In our
discussion of the second half of The Scarlet Letter, I decided to remind students about the
participation requirement because several students, including Merlin, still needed to contribute to
the discussion as we neared the end of class. After this reminder, Merlin was the first student to
volunteer to share his ideas, which were well-developed and thoughtful. However, that was the
only time he participated during the discussion. He also frequently has his camera turned off at
the beginning of class and does not turn it on until it is his turn to speak. Usually, once he turns
his camera on, he keeps it on for the rest of class. At the beginning of the school year, students
completed an “About You Questionnaire.” In his submission, Merlin stated that he enjoys
reading and that English is his favorite subject in school. He also explained that he likes it when
Focusing on Merlin for this project will help me figure out how to get students to expand
their potential. Merlin, like many students, is doing fine in my class, but is capable of engaging
and doing more than the required minimum. Particularly in a time when grades and test scores
are emphasized so much, I want to develop my ability to get students excited about their
learning. I dream of a class in which students participate because they want to and not because
Student 2: Theodore
Theodore participates very well in class, often offering complex and developed insights
about the text(s). Despite his clear understanding of the course content, Theodore is currently
failing due to a large number of missing assignments. He is currently missing 2 reading quizzes,
Native American fiction and nonfiction response questions, and transcendentalism response
questions. My mentor teacher does not accept any late work after the first month of school, so
Theodore cannot get any points from the work that he has not yet completed. We do give each
student 2 late paper passes, one per quarter, which give the students an additional week to finish
one assignment of their choice. After speaking with my mentor teacher about his missing work
and his grade, Theodore decided to use his first late paper pass to finish and get credit for
response questions to “Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God” and modern-day shaming/scarlet
letter articles. His responses for this assignment are very thoughtful and went well beyond the
required number of sentences, and he earned full credit. In addition to the missing work,
Theodore’s attendance is not the best. He is in the Career Center program, which does create
scheduling conflicts for some students, but Theodore has assured me on multiple occasions that
his Career Center schedule does not overlap with our class time. Theodore has a habit of joining
the Google Meet, and then leaving immediately after I say anything pertaining to an
assignment/reading that students needed to do before class. For example, on the day the students
presented drawings they did in response to The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian,
Theodore was in the Google Meet at the beginning of class, but left the Meet after I explained
how we would determine the order or presentations. He did not return to the Meet that day. This
causes his to miss important discussions and explanations for how to complete class assignments.
Both I and my mentor teacher have sent many emails to Theodore, his mother, and his counselor,
voicing our concerns about his progress in the class. We have not received any responses to our
emails, but have spoken to Theodore after class twice. In both of those meetings, we have gone
over missing and future class assignments, focusing on helping him get caught up.
Focusing on Theodore for this project will help me try to figure out how to help students
who do not struggle in class, but who have challenges outside of class. While I don’t believe in
assigning homework for the sake of giving extra work, there are some instances, especially in an
English class, where students need to come to class having read the assigned texts and prepared
for discussion and/or relevant activities. I do not currently know what to do when a student does
not do that reading or other assignments that are important for their learning. This behavior
occurs largely outside of the classroom, so I feel like there is very little that I can do to help. But
I refuse to accept that fact, and hope to learn some strategies that I can use for supporting
Hypothesis 1: The student does not actively participate in discussion because he does not feel
online. Many of the students have been in honors classes before, so they were already friends
before beginning my class. Additionally, about 2/3 of the students in my focus class are in band
together, so they are very close. Merlin is not in band and is the only student in my class who is
on the football team. He wrote that he is on the football, basketball, and baseball teams in his
About Me Questionnaire. As far as I have been able to tell, he is not close friends with anyone in
my focus class. Furthermore, Merlin is one of three black students in my focus class, and the
only black male. He may feel isolated from his classmates because he does not have a lot in
common with them and because many of them are already so close. It is possible that this causes
him to avoid participation beyond what is required. We have not done very much group work
yet, so it is difficult to tell if his participation is different when he is in a smaller group than when
we are doing whole class discussion. The stakes are pretty high for him whenever he
participates, since he does not know how the other students will react to his opinions and/or
ideas. He may feel afraid of being judged, or of being further separated from his classmates. By
only participating when required, he avoids potentially being thought of differently by his
classmates while still gaining the points he needs to succeed in the class. However, if Merlin
achieves his dream of becoming a professional chef, Merlin will need to be able to communicate
with people in the kitchen with him, even if those colleagues are not his close friends. He will
also need to be able to break into social groups that exist before he joins the workforce. By
limiting his participation, Merlin is losing the opportunity to practice a “specific skill [that will]
allow [him] to live, play, work, exist in ways that are measurably better” (Minor 21). For my
stakes, I worry that altering my teaching strategies to directly help Merlin could cause him to feel
So far in class, we have studied The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian,
transcendentalism, The Scarlet Letter, and The Awakening. Of these, The Scarlet Letter and The
Awakening are particularly difficult for students to connect with, as they involve women from
long ago struggling with issues not normally faced by teenagers. I know that students have more
to say and are more willing to participate in educational ways when they are interested in the
material (Tovani, “Do I Really Have to Teach Reading?”). It is possible that Merlin does not
participate because he does not have anything to say about the text. The text(s) might not
interest him. For example, we recently had the students watch the movie Saved! and compare it
to The Scarlet Letter. For the question about the Scarlet Letter, which has an adult woman from
hundreds of years ago as its protagonist, Merlin wrote one, relatively vague sentence. For his
response to Saved!, which has a teenage girl from modern times as its protagonist, Merlin wrote
four very detailed sentences. His engagement with the more modern, more relevant text is clear,
whereas his engagement with The Scarlet Letter is not. From his About You Questionnaire, I
know that Cedric enjoys multimodal texts, such as videos. It is possible that he wrote a lot more
about his reaction to Saved! because his engagement was higher and he had more to say about
that text. The stakes for Merlin involve time. By limiting his participation, Merlin gains more
time to spend on things he actually enjoys, like sports, cooking, and watching movies. In order
to participate extensively, Merlin would need to give up some of that time in order to think about
the text and prepare more for discussion. Whenever he participates, he risks showing that he is
not engaging with the text. As the teacher, Merlin’s behavior makes it difficult for me to
facilitate interesting, authentic discussions, since I need to make sure that every student
participates to earn attendance. Having to individually call on Merlin to speak makes it more
difficult for me to facilitate discussion and could cause other students to think that I am mean for
Hypothesis 1: The student does not actively participate in discussion because he does not feel
Alternative for Action A: Try to ask attendance questions that emphasize Merlin’s
interests.
o Merits: These questions would allow Merlin to share more about himself with his
classmates and would cause the other students to get to know him better. He may
find that he has more in common with some of the students in the class than he
thinks he does. This would possibly make him more comfortable participating in
class.
o Drawbacks: Attendance questions may not be enough to help Merlin feel like a
part of the class community. They also tend to be more surface level, which may
not be sufficient to make Merlin feel comfortable sharing more personal ideas
o Risks: If I don’t choose attendance questions carefully, Merlin may realize that I
am trying to include him more in the classroom community, which could cause
him to feel singled out or further distance him from the other students in the class.
Some questions could also cause other students to feel like their interests are
being ignored.
Alternative for Action B: Do more small group work with random groups.
o Merits: Small groups can make it easier for shy students to share their ideas, since
there are fewer students with the potential to judge them. Because there are fewer
students, it also allows students to talk more in the same amount of time. Random
groups allow Merlin to work with different students every time and are more
likely to split up tight-knit groups of friends. This gives Merlin the chance to get
to know his classmates better and become a part of the classroom community.
o Drawbacks: Since we haven’t done much small group work yet, I do not know if
Merlin’s participation is different with a small group compared to with the entire
class. Random groups may force Merlin to work with students that he is not very
o Risks: I cannot control random groups, so students who may feel uncomfortable
working with each other might be placed in the same group, potentially stifling
Alternative for Action C: Do more small group work with groups that the students
choose.
o Merits: In addition to the merits of small group work that I describe in the
previous alternative for action, student made groups allow students to work with
their friends, the people that they are the most comfortable sharing with. This
allows Merlin to work with those students that he is closest with and may make
know if small groups increase Merlin’s participation. Student choice groups limit
students to only working with their friends, which prevents the class as a whole
o Risks: Whenever students make their own groups, there is the chance that one or
more students will be left out and need the teacher to find a group for them. This
is potentially embarrassing for students and forces them to work with students that
they know did not choose to work with them. This could negatively affect both
Hypothesis 2: The student is not interested or engaged in the material, but participates minimally
o Merits: Multimodal texts tend to be more engaging and accessible for students
because they allow students to interact with the text using more than one of their
senses. Students with different learning strengths and strategies are more likely to
find their specific learning strengths addressed by multimodal texts. For Merlin,
who explained that he enjoys watching videos for class, multimodal texts may
o Drawbacks: I don’t have a ton of choice in the texts I teach right now, so it will be
difficult for me to incorporate new multimodal texts into the curriculum. For
older more obscure texts, like The Awakening, there are often not any multimodal
o Risks: Introducing multimodal remixes of focus texts may increase the students’
workload, which could cause them to feel stressed and potentially disengage
further. I need to be very careful not to overwhelm students by introducing a ton
Alternative for Action B: Find ways to connect the issues in the text to modern day
o Merits: This would help my students relate more to the characters, which
about the lessons of a text when those lessons can be applied to one’s old life.
the texts, allowing him to read for pleasure in addition to reading for homework.
o Drawbacks: Some texts are very difficult to relate to the lives of adolescents. As
a young black boy, Merlin does not have much in common with the middle-aged,
undeniably important for students to see themselves in the texts they read, it is
also important for them to be able to empathize with characters that are nothing
like them. Depending on how I frame it, relating the text to the issue of modern
teenagers may send the message that they only need to care about those that they
o Risks: Doing this requires me to make assumptions about the issues that teenagers
Action Plan
Since I already do attendance questions nearly every day, I believe that alternative for
which relate to some of Merlin’s interests but are also common enough topics that the other
students should feel included as well. Due to the size of the class and the relative superficiality
of the attendance questions, I do not believe that this plan will be enough to make Merlin a part
of the classroom community, so I also intend to try using small group work.
I believe that small group work will help Merlin get to know his classmates and
eventually lead to an increase in participation. Small groups take away some of the pressure that
he may be feeling when asked to share his ideas with the entire class. They also give him more
chances to speak. Of the two alternatives for action related to small groups, I prefer 1B over 1C.
Practically, it takes a very long time to manually put students in breakout rooms in Google Meet.
This waiting time could cause students to switch out of school mode, which is already incredibly
difficult for students to enter while learning from home. More importantly, the risk of certain
students, including Merlin, being excluded when students choose their own groups is too large. I
never want a student to feel like they are not liked or wanted by their classmates. I like random
groups because it means that students work with different people every time, potentially helping
Merlin become closer with all of his classmates instead of a select few. If 1B proves to be
ineffective, I may reconsider alternative 1C, but for now, I plan to only use random grouping
strategies.
Because I do not have a lot of control over what texts I teach, both alternatives for action
2A and 2B will be difficult for me to implement. My ability to effectively use multimodal texts
and relate texts to my students’ lives depends on conversations that I have with my mentor
teacher and on the focus text for each unit. If done carefully, however, the risks are very small
compared to the potential increase in interest and engagement for Merlin. Both alternatives for
action are things I already try to do in my teaching, so I plan to continue doing as much as I can
The next unit we will be studying in class is a book club unit. Each of the students
randomly received one of six possible books, all focusing around African American stories, at
the beginning of the year. The students will be put into groups based on the text they are
reading. I think that this unit will be a good opportunity for me to observe the effects of small
groups on Merlin’s participation. I also think that this group of texts will be much easier for me
relate to modern issues of racism and identity. I hope that Merlin will be able to see himself in
the texts from this unit more than he has been able to so far in class.
Part 4: Evaluate
Over the course of this project, my Honors English 11 focus class finished a unit about
Kate Chopin’s The Awakening, which I planned and implemented in its entirety, and began a
book club unit centering around African American language and stories, which my mentor
For The Awakening unit, we had three days of discussion solely focused on the text. The
first day began with an activity in which the students created memes connecting one of the four
Students worked in four random small groups to make their memes, then joined as a whole class
to present their memes and engage in a more general discussion about the first part of the book.
The second day was very similar to previous discussions we have had in class. Students received
reading guides with discussion questions that we used to direct our conversation. The third day,
which focused entirely on the ambiguous and rather shocking ending of the novel, involved a
take a stance activity on a Jamboard. Students placed sticky notes with their initials along a line
based on their response to two questions about Edna’s decisions at the end of the novel, then
explained why they put their sticky notes where they did in a whole class discussion. Students
also completed their first long term writing assignment for the semester, which required them to
choose a literary device from the text and connect it to one of the four -isms we studied in class.
Students participated in a writing conference, in which I placed them in breakout rooms based on
their ideas for the assignment and students worked together to formulate claims they could use in
their writing. Some students also earned extra credit for attending an optional peer review
session. At the end of the unit, students did a reflection journal about their writing and
For the book club unit, students are divided into seven groups based on the novel they are
reading. Books were handed out randomly at the beginning of the semester. Instead of breakout
rooms, groups were assigned a specific time slot (approximately 15 minutes) during the class
period in which their group would meet to discuss their text(s). My mentor teacher and I led the
discussion for the first of six book clubs and will slowly reduce our involvement over time in
favor of the students taking more responsibility for their discussion and learning. Before
beginning book clubs, students watched the documentary American Tongues to prepare them for
the various dialects and sociolects they would encounter in their texts. They completed
comprehension and discussion questions and participated in a whole class discussion about
language difference and discrimination. Students are also working on a Regional Literacies
Research Project, which asks them to choose a state and create a presentation with information
about the language communities in that state. This will be the final project for the unit.
Before this project, Merlin participated in class only to the extent that was required. He
often needed a reminder of the requirement before he shared his ideas in whole class discussion.
Since this project and the two most recent units, Merlin’s participation has increased to slightly
beyond the required minimum, but I have not noticed any drastic changes in his behavior.
In the first part of my action plan, I decided to include more attendance check questions
that directly related to Merlin’s interests. I was hoping that this would help him feel more
included in the classroom community and therefore increase his willingness to share his ideas.
The discussion heavy structure of The Awakening unit meant that I didn’t have many
discussion, so I didn’t end up doing any attendance questions during the entire unit. We did,
however, have a pet day in the middle of The Awakening unit, in which students could introduce
their pets to their classmates. Many of the students, including Merlin, seemed very excited for
pet day. Although he was one of the last to do so, Merlin did volunteer to show the class his dog,
which is a very large pitbull named Rocky. This was the first time in class that Merlin
volunteered to speak in whole class discussion when it was not required. Pet day highlights one
of the benefits of remote instruction, which is that students can see more of each other’s daily
lives. Many of my students are feeling very isolated, so it was wonderful to have an opportunity
to connect and learn more about each other’s live and families outside of school. My mentor
teacher got to introduce her dogs as well, which has helped the students get to know one of their
teachers better. It is difficult to evaluate the success of part 1A of my action plan because I only
tried it once. It may be possible that Merlin felt closer to his classmates because the activity
revealed something he has in common (pet ownership) with many of the other students, but it is
also very possible that Merlin volunteered to show his dog because he loves Rocky and wanted
people to see how cute he is. Overall, I definitely think that the reactions of Merlin, the other
students, and my mentor teacher support an activity like Pet Day, but I cannot say definitively
whether it made a significant difference in Merlin’s feeling of belonging in the classroom
community.
The second part of my action plan involved having the students do more work and
discussions in random small groups. I wanted the groups to be random (1B) so that students
could work with different people each time and to avoid the exclusion that can occur when
students choose their own groups. The first time we tried small group work was for our
discussion of the first part of The Awakening. To prepare students for their final writing
assignment and to warm them up for a large group discussion, I had students complete an
activity in which they made memes based on an assigned -ism and The Awakening. Google
Meet assigned students randomly into four groups and the students worked in breakout rooms to
analyze my example memes and create their own. Merlin was in a group with four other
students that created a meme (Figure 1) connecting feminism with Edna’s relationships. Because
of the way breakout rooms work, I was not able to observe all of Merlin’s group’s discussion.
When I did join their room, the students were actively engaged in discussion, which many of the
other groups were not, but I did not witness Merlin participating. One significant limitation of
breakout rooms is that Merlin may have actively participated while I was with another group and
meme. Merlin was not that student for his group. While it is entirely possible that Merlin
participated when I was not in his breakout room to witness it, for this particular activity I did
final writing assignment and conferenced in groups to turn those ideas into strong, supportable
claims. At the beginning of class, students completed a Google form in which they wrote a few
of their ideas and any questions about the assignment. I put them in groups of four based on
shared interests and topics. It took me about five minutes to put students into breakout rooms,
during which time the students just sat and waited. As the teacher, non-random groups like these
felt burdensome and I would really only do it again if I had a strong reason to not do random
groups. Based on his check-in (Figure 2), Merlin was placed in a group of people with very
different topics but a similar understanding of the assignment. While most of the students had
very vague ideas that needed a lot of developing, Merlin and his group mates already had clear
ideas of what they wanted to write about. While I ended up spending most of my time working
with the groups who needed more help, I did notice a significant change in Merlin’s participation
Figure 2
during these writing conferences. Despite my limited time with his group, Merlin participated
more than once for the first time all year, not only sharing his idea for his paper, but also giving
his opinion about the other student’s ideas as well. While Merlin is typically one of the last
students to submit in-class work, he was the second student to submit his exit ticket (Figure 3). I
believe that Merlin’s apparent confidence in assignment coupled with the smaller group
environment led to his feeling more comfortable participating. There were significantly fewer
As we continue to do small group work in the book club unit, I will get to further observe
whether Merlin participates more in this type of discussion structure. Merlin, who is in one of
the larger groups with four other students, is reading The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks,
Figure 3
which is about a black woman whose cervical cells were unknowingly taken by doctors and used
in some of the largest advances in medicine in recent history. We have done one book club
meeting so far, in which Merlin participated several times, but always after his classmates
shared. His participation followed a pattern in which each of his group mates would comment
about something before he would be willing to share his thoughts on it. It is possible that the
small group environment doesn’t necessarily make him more comfortable sharing, but rather
makes him feel obligated to share more times. Fisher, Frey, and Hattie argue in The Distance
Learning Playbook that book clubs “linked to a common theme” (in our case, African American
hoping that as he continues to work with the same group members every day, Merlin will
continue participating multiple times in a class period and that he will begin offering his ideas
earlier in the conversation, particularly as my mentor teacher and I begin to relinquish control of
included more in the classroom community, the last two parts addressed a possible lack of
engagement in the material. Because of my limited control over the curriculum, I was not able to
do as much with these alternatives for action, but I was still able to try some different things in
order to hopefully increase Merlin’s engagement. My first idea was to add more multimodal
texts, which Merlin mentioned enjoying in his “About You Questionnaire.” I added the meme
activity to The Awakening unit to get students to represent their ideas in a new, more humorous
way. As I mentioned earlier, I did not witness any change in Merlin’s participation during this
activity, possibly because of the difficulty of administering multiple breakout rooms at once.
The only other multimodal text we have studied since I began this project is the documentary
American Tongues. From reading Merlin’s answers to the accompanying questions, I can tell
that Merlin watched the documentary closely. His answers were very specific, often including
quotations from the film (Figure 4). During discussion, Merlin participated more than once for
the first time in whole class discussion. He used examples from both the documentary and his
Figure 4
own life to support his opinions, talking about how the phrase “party store” is something most
people outside Michigan would not understand. Given his response to the film Saved!, which I
mentioned in my analysis of hypothesis 2, I feel confident in saying that videos and movies, if
not all multimodal texts, do increase his engagement and participation in class. Many of the
other students participated a lot more willingly as well, leading to one of the best discussions we
have had all semester. Multimodal texts like film follow the principles of UDL (Universal
Design for Learning), which states that presenting information in multiple mediums “can make
the information in text more comprehensible for any learner and accessible for some who would
find it completely inaccessible in text.” Including the film made it easier for students with
different learning needs and strengths to access the information about dialect, which led to
In my action plan, I also planned to address my concerns that Merlin was not able to
relate to the texts we were studying. I did my best with The Awakening unit, encouraging the
students to think of their mothers, aunts, older sisters, and other women in their lives when
reading, but I did not notice any change in participation or engagement from Merlin as a result of
this advice. I am hoping that the book club unit will be more relatable for Merlin since it centers
around African American stories and since his focus book has a wider range of character with
which one can relate. However, I cannot assume that just because both Merlin and the
protagonist of The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks are both black means that they will have
similar experiences. I will need to observe more book club discussions before I can say whether
or not this unit is more relatable than the previous one. So far, however, Merlin has responded
well to our discussion of American Tongues, as I mentioned previously. The discussion required
students to reflect on their own dialects and languages, which meant that every student had to
make a connection between themselves and the people in the documentary. The students were
given twenty questions and were required to respond to ten of them, giving them the option to
write about the things that interested them the most. Merlin answered several of the questions
about language discrimination and code switching (Figure 5), potentially indicating that he can
relate to these things. As I mentioned earlier, Merlin participated more in our discussion of
American Tongues than he has in any other whole class discussion. Because this activity
involved both a multimodal text and more relatable content, I am not able to determine whether
Merlin’s increased participation is due to the film, the personal connection, or something else
entirely. I will continue to observe his engagement and participation for the rest of the book club
Overall, I am pleased with Merlin’s progress in my focus class. I had hoped to see a
large increase in his participation, but I recognize that behaviors are not likely to change
overnight and that part of Merlin’s lack of participation is due to his shy personality. While I do
believe that my action plan, particularly the small group work, contributed to his increase in
Figure 5
sharing, it is also very likely that Merlin just needed a bit more time than the other students to get
used to the classroom community. I hope that I can continue to help Merlin feel like an
important part of our class, since “students need to feel safe enough to ask for help, but a safe
community is also essential if students are going to take academic risks” (Christenson, Teaching
with Joy and Justice, 15). Looking back at my hypotheses for explaining Merlin’s behavior, I
think that it is most likely that both of them are true to some extent. I have noticed Merlin
reacting to his classmates with more natural facial expressions, laughing, smiling, and nodding.
To me, this indicates that he is starting to feel more comfortable with his classmates. I have also
noticed Merlin writing more on his assignments for the book club unit, indicating that his
engagement is increasing. One potential explanation that I did not address in this project is that
Merlin lacks confidence in his abilities. After observing him over several weeks, I have
discovered that Merlin always asks for permission before participating, saying “Can I go?” any
time he wants to say something. A few of my other students do this as well, possibly due to
being drilled in hand raising their entire education. Online learning has eliminated a lot of hand
raising, so students have found other ways to determine speaking order. However, Merlin also
frequently says “but I don’t know” after sharing his ideas. I think that he may need more
positive encouragement in order to feel more confident that his ideas are valid. In the future, I
hope to help Merlin increase his authority over his voice and feel that his ideas are worth
At the end of the day, I don’t think there is ever one single reason that a student is not
participating or engaging in class, nor is there one single solution. Everything that happens in a
classroom and with a student is so complex and interconnected that it is nearly impossible to
definitively say that one change in pedagogy will solve everything. This project has given me
the skills to think more deeply about how every choice I make has an effect on students and to
feel more confident experimenting with my curriculum and my teaching in order to effectively
educate and support my students. Just as students are always changing, so too must the teacher
be always changing, always looking for something better or more effective. My teaching
philosophy and methods will always be evolving and developing in response to the needs of my
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