Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Sample Outline
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II.
Issues
II.
I.
II.
Strategies
III.
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II.
III.
IV.
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V.
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III.
VI.
Role Conflict
Identity Issues
Gender Attitudes
Life
Workplace
Home
Juggling
Methods
Results/Discussion
Role Conflict
Identity Issues
Gender Attitudes
Conclusions
Writing Additional
Drafts
Writing is never done. Its just
due.
Take a break.
Print a copy to read.
Read your draft aloud.
Ask someone else to read
your draft.
Revising Paragraphs:
Effective paragraphs
are:
Well-developed
Unified
Coherent
Revising Paragraphs:
Strategies for Improving Unity
Revising Paragraphs:
Strategies for Improving
Coherence
Revising Paragraphs:
Coherence Example
Revising Paragraphs:
Example
Revising Paragraphs:
Examplecontd
Exercise 2:
Revising Paragraphs
The power to create and communicate a new
message to fit a new experience is not a
competence animals have in their natural states.
Their genetic code limits the number and kind
of messages that they can communicate.
Information about distance, direction, source,
and richness of pollen in flowers constitutes the
only information that can be communicated by
bees, for example. A limited repertoire of
messages delivered in the same way, for
generation after generation, is characteristic of
animals of the same species, in all significant
respects.
Revising Sentences :
Hierarchy
Revising Sentences:
Hierarchy
Revising Sentences:
Parallelism
Revising Sentences:
Parallelism Example
Avoid unnecessary
repetition
Eliminate unnecessary
nominalizations
Readers
Ask questions about audience
Look at overall argument, as well
as paragraph and sentence
structure
Be specific with criticism and
praise
Describe the effect of the writing
on you
Writers
Ask for clarification
Be open to suggestions