Essay Writing

Paragraph⇢Essay
Introduction
Introduction
 General statements:
introduce the topic
give background information on the topic
 The thesis statement:
states the main topic
lists the subdivisions of the topic
may indicate the method of organization
is usually the last sentence
Sample Introduction
At one point or another in their high school lives,
students are faced with the question if they
should go to university. Some students decide
not to go. They might think that higher education
is not necessary for them or that they have
something more meaningful to do. Other
students decide to go to university. Although
these students all think that it is worth spending
the next four years in classrooms, the reasons
why they think so might be different. Students go
to university for a variety of reasons: academic
interest, future career, or social life.
Sample Introduction
At one point or another in their high school lives,
students are faced with the question if they
should go to university. Some students decide
not to go. They might think that higher
education is not necessary for them or that they
have something more meaningful to do. Other
students decide to go to university. Although
these students all think that it is worth spending
the next four years in classrooms, the reasons
why they think so might be different. Students
go to university for a variety of reasons:
academic interest, future career, or social
life.
High school students are faced with a big question
if they should go to university
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Some decide not to go, but others decide to go
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They decide to go for different reasons
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Thesis statement
Introduction
A person in the twenty first century has seen a
lot of changes take place in almost all areas of
human life. Some people are excited by the
challenges that these changes offer; others want
to return to simpler, less automated life style of
the past. Living in the twenty first century has
certain advantages, such as higher standard of
living, but it also has some disadvantages, such
as a polluted environment, the depersonalization
of human relationships, and the weakening of
spiritual values.
Introduction
A person in the twenty first century has seen a
lot of changes take place in almost all areas of
human life. Some people are excited by the
challenges that these changes offer; others
want to return to simpler, less automated life
style of the past. Living in the twenty first
century has certain advantages, such as higher
standard of living, but it also has some
disadvantages, such as a polluted environment,
the depersonalization of human relationships,
and the weakening of spiritual values.
My interest in international relations and
politics emerges from observation of daily
life and the events shaping our history. I
have realized that no nation in today’s
world lives in a vacuum of safety and
comfort. This has led to my interest in
history expanding into a passion for
international relations and politics.
My interest in international relations and
politics emerges from observation of
daily life and the events shaping our
history. I have realized that no nation in
today’s world lives in a vacuum of safety
and comfort. This has led to my interest
in history expanding into a passion for
international relations and politics.
Conclusion
Conclusion
 Restatement of the thesis
 Final comment (food for thought)
Techniques for food for thought

• Make a prediction
• Suggest results or consequences
• Suggest a solution
• Make a recommendation
• Call for action
• Quote an authority on the topic
In conclusion, although the twenty first century has given
a lot of advantages by making people richer, healthier,
freer to enjoy their lives, it has, in my opinion, not made
them wiser. It has made Earth dirtier, people less
humane, and spiritual lives poorer. People should
continue to enjoy the benefits of technological
advancements because they free them to pursue
interests and goals. However, they must make a
concerted effort to preserve natural environment for
future generations. Moreover, they should take the time
now to make their lives more meaningful in an
increasingly impersonal, mechanized world.
In conclusion, although the twenty first century has
given a lot of advantages by making people richer,
healthier, freer to enjoy their lives, it has, in my opinion,
not made them wiser. It has made Earth dirtier, people
less humane, and spiritual lives poorer. People
should continue to enjoy the benefits of technological
advancements because they free them to pursue
interests and goals. However, they must make a
concerted effort to preserve natural environment for
future generations. Moreover, they should take the time
now to make their lives more meaningful in an
increasingly impersonal, mechanized world.
 Controlling Stress
Introductory paragraph
The busy schedules that most adults face every day
have created a growing health problem in the modern
world. Stress affects almost everyone, from the highly
pressured executive to the busy homemaker to student.
It can cause a variety of physical disorders ranging from
headaches to stomach ulcers and even alcoholism.
Stress, like the common cold, is a problem that cannot
be cured, however, it can be controlled. A person can
learn to control stress in three ways.
Main ideas of topic sentences
A. set realistic goals
B. take up a hobby
C. maintain close relationships with family and friends.
Conclusion 1
Finally, stress brings lots of health
problems. So, it has to be dealt with in
three ways. Finding new interesting
activities, working towards a personal goal
or staying in touch with friends and family.
Conclusion 2
In conclusion, although stress acts as a
daily pain for the most of modern society,
there are number of ways to deal with it.
Purposeful life goals and joyful off-work
activities relieves tension, while tight
connection with the loved ones enhances
physical and mental health.
 Studying in Great Britain
Introductory paragraph
People come from all over the world to the United
Kingdom to pursue education. Some come for a year,
while others may stay four years or longer to complete a
program or earn a degree. Of course, the first few weeks
in a new country are always a little stressful, but
knowledge of a few British characteristics and customs
can smooth the path for new arrivals.
Main ideas of topic sentences
A. British people are usually reserved
B. It rains a lot
C. Cars drive on the left sides of the road.
Conclusion 1
In conclusion, it might get a bit stressful
coming in a new country, but knowing it’s
characteristics could help adapting a bit
more. Knowing that British people are
quiet, cars drive on the left side and the
weather in Britain is foggy might help
dealing with being new in the system.
Conclusion 2
In summary, British are self-restrained, the
weather in Britain is showery and the
culture of driving is different from other
countries. In the end, studying in Britain is
a great experience.
Overview
 Structure of an essay:

 Introduction
 Body
 Conclusion
General statement, restatement
Thesis statement, final comment
Topic sentence, concluding sentence
Support
Transition signals
Sample introduction - conclusion
The busy schedules that most adults face every day
have created a growing health problem in the modern
world. Stress affects almost everyone, from the highly
pressured executive to the busy homemaker to student.
It can cause a variety of physical disorders ranging from
headaches to stomach ulcers and even alcoholism.
Stress, like the common cold, is a problem that cannot
be cured, however, it can be controlled. A person can
learn to control stress in three ways.
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In conclusion, although stress acts as a daily pain for the
most of modern society, there are number of ways to
deal with it. Purposeful life goals and joyful off-work
activities relieves tension, while tight connection with the
loved ones enhances physical and mental health.
S Sample introduction - conclusione I
People come from all over the world to the United
Kingdom to pursue education. Some come for a year,
while others may stay four years or longer to complete a
program or earn a degree. Of course, the first few weeks
in a new country are always a little stressful, but
knowledge of a few British characteristics and customs
can smooth the path for new arrivals.
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In conclusion, it might get a bit stressful coming in a new
country but knowing it’s characteristics could help
adapting a bit more. Knowing that British people are
quiet, cars drive on the left side and the weather in
Britain is foggy might help dealing with being new in the
system.
Sample paragraph
Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important
characteristics. First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty
that is resistant to corrosion. Therefore, it is suitable for
jewelry, coins and ornamental purposes. Gold never
needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever.
For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished
today as the day it was made 25 centuries ago. Another
important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to
industry and science. For many years, it has been used
in hundreds of industrial applications, such as
photography and dentistry. The most recent use of gold
is in astronauts’ suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat
shields for protection when they go outside spaceships in
space. Thus, gold is treasured not only for its beauty
but also for its utility.