1 16th February 2014 Jordan Crichlow Subject: Media Class: 12A/Me1 Teacher: Mr Becker

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Location A suburban street in Tadworth Video (visual action) C !"#$ 16$ walks out o% his house$ walks down his &athway' C !"# is walkin( down a street' )e is walkin( with his hands in his &ockets$ and lookin( down at the (round' )e is wearin( rou(h lookin( clothes$ and his hair is not co*bed' T+,A#T -%il* na*e. A wo*an is washin( her car on the other side o% the street' n the &a/e*ent there is litter' A &erson walks &ast C !"# in the o&&osite direction' C !"# turns his head and looks at hi*$ and then looks %orward a(ain' 0"+1CT +2 J +0A# C+"C)! 3 C !"# walks down the &a/e*ent and stands outside a se*i4 detached house' 0o(s barkin( !udio C !"# s %eet on the (round' Seconds 15 seconds

2 utside 6T17)1# s se*i4detached house' C !"# looks at house' CAM1+A2 J +0A# C+"C)! 3 C !"# turns around and looks around' C !"# looks to the ri(ht$ and his eyes widen' C !"# runs to a skateboard on the &athway$ and &uts his ri(ht hand on it' )e be(ins to skate down the &athway' utside Bur(h )eath woods' 6T17)1#$ 14$ is lookin( at his watch' )e is stood standin( still outside the woods' )e is wearin( s*art clothes$ which look a bit all o/er the &lace' 6TA++"#8 -T"T!1.2 Jordan 9ent 6T17)1# looks u& %ro* his watch and u& at the loo*in( trees in %ront o% hi*' The trees surroundin( the woods loo* u& /ery hi(h' There is a *ound o% earth stickin( /ery %ar out o% the (round$ and has been *ade into a sort o% ra*&' -T"T!1.2 !ee Cheese*an 15 seconds

C !"# s %eet'

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6ound o% trees rustlin(

@ 6T17)1# looks back u& at the trees$ and his shoulders %all as he hea/es a hea/y si(h' -T"T!1.2 Jack )i((s 6T17)1# be(ins to walk %orwards$ at a slow &ace' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' 6T17)1# continues 6T17)1# s %eet on 5 seconds walkin( %orwards in the the (round' woods$ with another hurried (lance at his Trees rustlin( watch' 6T17)1# be(ins to &ant sli(htly$ and hurries %orward' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' Further on in the woods$ T+1#T$ 16$ is stood on the outskirts o% the &athway' 6o*e o% the branches on so*e trees are han(in( loosely %ro* the trees' T+1#T is wearin( a white school shirt$ with his tie e;tre*ely loose and han(in( down %ro* his collar$ and he is leanin( a(ainst a tree with his &hone in his hand' T+1#T is lookin( at his &hone$ readin( a te;t' At the to& o% the &hone screen$ it says it is %ro* T<+ #1$ and the te;t says2 =Mate where u at> At school waitin('? T+1#T locks his &hone$ and then looks !ockin( o% &hone' T+1#T2 :6i(h:

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4 u&' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' 6T17)1# is walkin( %orwards at a %ast &ace$ lookin( down at his %eet whilst he walks' T+1#T s*iles and sto&s leanin( on the tree and *o/es %orwards$ whilst s*okin( a ci(arette' 6T17)1# sto&s suddenly in the *iddle o% the &athway' There is a &athway leadin( one way$ and a &athway leadin( the other$ and there is a &athway in %ront o% hi*' T+1#T %u*bles around his &ocket' 6T17)1# s eyes look ri(ht and le%t and then %orwards' T+1#T *o/es behind the tree$ and &okes his head around the corner$ so he can see down the &athway' 6T17)1# be(ins to ste& towards the &athway' C !"# reaches out his hand and &uts it on 6T17)1# s shoulder' 6T17)1# s %eet on @ seconds the (round'

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5 6T17)1# turns around Buickly' C !"# is &antin($ his shoulders are hea/in(' C !"# whis&ers2 6te&henC 3hat are you doin(>

6kateboard is in back(round$ on its side' ' C !"# re*o/es his hand %ro* 6T17)1# s shoulder' C !"# &oints to the le%t' 6T17)1# walks in the direction C !"# &ointed' C !"# looks down the &athway' C !"# then runs a%ter 6T17)1#' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' T+1#T ste&s out onto the &athway and looks %orwards' )is e;&ression turns into a (ri*ace' )is li& ti(htens$ and his eye twitches' T+1#T turns around and walks down the &athway' Total Ti*e2 1@4 seconds 10 seconds