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NAZI GERMANY Task: Video Presentation

Ella Stimpson
3

Use historical terms and concepts.

Presentation is engaging and


makes use of different forms of
media: images, video, narration,
information etc
Successfully communicate
knowledge and understanding of
overall unit.

Address the focus question/s


specifically and have a coherent
and clear response to it.

Sources:
At least two primary and two
secondary sources:
1) Analyse the
relevance of these
sources by drawing
conclusions about
their usefulness.
2) Identify and
describe points of
view, attitudes and
values in the
sources.
Total
Comment

10

28 /35
A really excellent piece of work Ella, well done!
Your speaking voice was clear throughout and was well paced.
The use of primary sources through your images and videos was
fantastic although these were not analysed for their usefulness.
The first video clip in particular was well selected and it was great
to hear you explain its significance and the context behind it.
Fanaticism was mentioned at least twice throughout your video
which was really good and demonstrates your knowledge of the
overall unit also this means that you have utilised this
assessment well for your final extended written response.
My one suggestion for you would be to be a bit more explicit in
addressing the focus question. I think it was answered well
however re-addressing it after every sub-topic (e.g, Hitler Youth,
Concentration Camp) would have strengthened your presentation.
Overall, I am really impressed Ella!

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