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T V NG Paraphrase Cac CH NG Trong Ielts Writing Task 1 PDF
T V NG Paraphrase Cac CH NG Trong Ielts Writing Task 1 PDF
Tuy
các đối tƣợng so sánh trong writing task 1 không nhiều, nhƣng thực tế các bạn lại đang
gặp phải 1 vấn đề: Thiếu từ vựng để paraphrase đối tượng được so sánh.
Dƣới đây là những từ và cụm từ đƣợc tổng hợp lại giúp bạn giải quyết vấn đề trên.
One person:
He is 10 years old.
He is a 10-year-old.
He is aged 10.
It is a class of 10-year-olds
The chart shows the hobbies of children (who are) between 10 and 12 years old.
The chart shows the hobbies of children (who are) aged 10 to 12.
The chart shows the hobbies of children who fall into 10 to 12 age group
The number of people in their forties (những ngƣời ở độ tuổi 40, tức từ 40 – 49 tuổi)
2. Giới tính
- Male và female vừa là danh từ đếm đƣợc vừa là tính từ, và nó đƣợc dùng cho
ngƣời ở bất cứ độ tuổi nào
Eg: The number of males aged under 14 years old was 100
The number of male children aged under 14 years old was 100
- Men và women chỉ dùng cho ngƣời lớn. Tức khi đề bài nói đối tƣợng là
children hoặc là ngƣời dƣới 18 tuổi thì không nên dùng từ này để thay thế
- Boys và girls chỉ nên đƣợc dùng cho trẻ em
- spent on average
- average expenditure
- levels of spending
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Tên nước Người ở nước đó
Canada Canadians
England The English/ English people
Turkey The Turkish/ Turkish people
Spain The Spanish/ Spanish people
The USA Americans
Germany Germans
Italy Italians
Sweden The Swedish/Swedish people
Mexico Mexicans
Japan Japaneses
Ireland The Irish/ Irish people
Trong phần đề bài, nếu câu hỏi không liệt kê tên nƣớc (e.g. "in three countries"), bạn có
hai cách để viết lại trong introduction của mình nhƣ sau
Không quên dùng “the” trƣớc 1 số nƣớc nhƣ "the USA", "the UK" và the “US”
The number of Americans aged 65 and over rose over the period shown.
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The percentage of people who used the Internet
Internet usage
Eg:
- The proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was about 20%.
- The proportion of Internet users in the USA was about 20%.
6. Tỷ lệ thất nghiệp
The proportion of people who were unemployed
The proportion of people who were jobless
Levels of unemployment
Unemployment rate
The proportion of people without job
Level of joblessness
Eg:
- The number of 16 -to 24-year-olds who were unemployed in England was around
18% in 2000
- Level of unemployment in England fell to only 10% in 2002
- Unemployment rate in England was higher than the figure for Mexico
- The proportion of English 16 -to 24-year-olds without job was around 18% in
2000
- Level of joblessness in England fell to only 10% in 2002
- The proportion of people who were jobless in England fell to only 10% in 2002
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7. Tỷ lệ người nghèo
Poverty rate
Level of poverty
The percentage of people who live in poverty
The percentage of people who live under the poverty line
Poverty level
Be poor
Eg:
- Poverty rate in Vietnam was much higher than that of Canada, at 10% and 2%
respectively.
- The percentage of people who live in poverty in Vietnam was much higher than
that of Canada, at 10% and 2% respectively.
- 10% of Vietnamese people were poor, compared with only 2% of Canadians.
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- The per capita consumption of beef in the US rose from around 60 to a peak of 90
pounds
- US beef consumption rose from around 60 to a peak of 90 pounds per person
- The amount of beef consumed by the average American rose from around 60 to a
peak of 90 pounds
Các từ và cum từ paraphrase số lƣợng ngƣời dùng xe ô tô, chúng ta sử dụng tƣơng tự
với nhiều phƣơng tiện khác nhƣ bus, train…
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The number of people who commute by car
The number of people who travel by car
The number of car users
Eg:
- Approximately 5 million was the number of bus users in 2010.
- Around 5 million commuters traveled by bus in 2010
- The bus was used by about 5 million people in 2010
Nếu đi bằng xe đạp: The number of people who cycle to work = the number of
cycling commuters
Nếu đi bằng tàu hỏa: The number of rail passengers
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- Don't try to describe every number on a chart or graph (unless there are only a
few numbers). A key skill in task 1 is being able to choose the key information
and describe or compare it well. I usually mention around 6 or 7 numbers in my
main paragraphs.
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