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Band 4.0
Freedom of Speech
Freedom of speech is when someone is able to talk about stuff they like to openly. They can discuss

with Friend or Family when they want about on everything they want on. This mean that they can

talk about politic or government and president without going jail or be punished. On my country

is not good to talk on Politics because on politics can go to jail and one man went on jail because

he said badly on prince of my country.

I am very like freidom on speech because it is on mean that very good peoples can talk and

improve country. Is the very good for help improve the country and help the peoples. Free mean

to go where you want like. Talk on what you like and do what on you like. I am very like this

because feel Better for life and more free. On other Country like on USA can speak opens about

peoples and governments because they are free to speak on what they want. This good because is

the very useful. In my opinion, the free speech important to helpful and society helpful.

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior.
Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
In the Recent years, between the different countries, a lot of people Keen on visit to other countries.

Those people liKe to learn the different cultural and reconize different things from other countries.

In my opinion, every host country should welcome cultural differences. Because the visitors were

stay a short time for their journey. They will travel and shopping in the Cities. Sometime, they can

bring up the cultural and economoic were development. Althought, the language and the lifestyle

are different, but we shall learn from their lanuage.

Some people cannot accept the visitors. I think they affair to effect the local customs. And..the

don’t the behavior were effect to their countries saft. Therefore the cannot accept. The visitors
might be the crime and escept from their countries. However, they afaird the visitors whose will

destronye their counties.

In summerise, the people. should accept the host country and welcome cultural differences. They

will earn a lot for other countries. such as cultural, religious, Knowledge, Arts etc, If they can

accept the other countries Visitors. They might be benefit a lot than they needs.

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Band 5.0
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think
that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to
develop your essay.
It is certainly said that learning is an ongoing process. Every person learn something

new according to their age, experience, knowledge and education. According to my point of view

it is always better to have teacher or guide for study.

One teacher has adequate knowledge to teach their student. He knows all the possible ways to

make subject easier for the students, moreover, he teaches them in an effective manner. For

example, some students are weak in some subjects but a teacher always guides them according to

their mental capacity. He teaches them as fun. Some people can learn better in group by discuss

the topics with others. In class people can know the views of others, even they know how we can

learn effectively. Where the teacher always gives an easy direction to learn.

In the today’s competitive world, everybody is busy, some people think that rather to waste their

time to go for classes they can learn better their subject. They can attend online classes by using

the Internet at home. They can get relevant information from the Internet regarding their topic.
There is not specific time or age limit to learn something new. Some new things we can only learn

from experience – for example new facts, new habits and so on.

In sum up, I would like to say that it is always better for the people to have a teacher because a

teacher has good knowledge, experience and is educated how to teach others. People will learn

from a teacher in an easier way rather than on their own.

Boys are most influenced by their fathers and girls are most influenced by their mothers. Do

you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons to support your opinion.

It is true that nowadays parent have a great influence over the children. Some people hold the

opinion that the same sex is the major determination of influencing parent, but others have a

negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that boys are most influenced by their fathers

and girls are most influenced by their mothers. My arguments for this point are listed below.

First of all, a father is the person who have already passed that ways which are his son is passing

now, in other words, sons are following their father’s footsteps. So, based on experience it is easy

for a father to notice his sons’ drawbacks and to influence them.

Secondly, it is true that a boy is counted as a strong characteristics human, but a girl is a subtle and

fragile one. It is hard for mothers to influence their sons, because it is not likely that vulnerable

something can affect a strong one.

In conclusion, it seems to me unfair that boys are most influenced by their mothers. Based on at

least two points above I strongly agree that children are influenced by a parent of the same gender.

Band 6.0
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,
career preparation, or to increase knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or
university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people attend to university or collage after their high school years for several reason which

they choose by them self. I believe that the most common reason why people attend to university
or collage to have new experiences on life, to prepare for a career, and to increase their knowledge

of their personality.

Firstly, many people attend to university or collage to have new experience in life. Many students

leave their home and move to live by them self when they go to university. This is the first time

that they had to make a resolution on their own, without their parents’ help. Making their own

decisions will increase their knowledge of themselves. Moreover, students on the university can

meet different students from different nationalities and religions so students can learn about

different culture around the world.

Secondly, many people go to university or collage to prepare for a career. Career training is

becoming more important nowadays to young people compared to old people. At college, students

learn many skills for their career and they intern to internship with a lot of chances. All of these

things prepare them for their career.

Also, students attend university or college to increase their self-knowledge of their personality on

life. They attend for that to increase their knowledge in subjects which they find interesting. For

example, many students study science because they are iinterest in science but they work on the

business area.

To conclude, I think people should not only focus on a career when they go to university or college.

They have to follow to have new experience and knowledge about their personality and the great

world around them which they live in.

Millions of people every year move to English- speaking countries such as Australia, Britain
or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want
to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?
Nowadays, language becomes a major factor to become a successful person. Many people prefer

to study abroad to English-speaking country because English is an international language. There

is no doubt that the best way to improve the English language skill is to use the English language

daily so if people study in English speaking countries, their English skill will be improved

automatically and it will give them some advantages such as they can work in many countries or

they will be able travelling to many different places without studying other languages. This essay

will describe in detail why English is an important international language.

Firstly, the English language is widely used in many countries and at present, the world traders are

currently developing rapidly. In order to compete with people from different countries, it is very

essential to be able to communicate with the English language. For example, China has been

improving a lot in many sectors. They are able to compete with other countries because many

people in China aware the important English language and they are trying hard to study English.

Secondly, many companies prefer to employ people who can speak English because if the

companies create new branch in different countries, the employers are able to move the new branch

without employ new people and the branch company is still able to communicate with the central

company. In fact, one of the largest companies in the world (Google) has created some branch in

different countries and each of the Google employers is able to discuss things or otherwise

communicate even though they are in different countries because they all use English to

communicate.

In conclusion, many people move to English speaking countries for further studies because they

believe that it will improve their English skills and in order to become a successful person in the

future, mastering English is very essential.

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điểm cho từng bài theo ý kiến của em.

Topic: Shopping online has become more popular than shopping at a regular shopping centre.

Is this a positive or negative development?

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Around the world, shopping online has become a normal activity for many people. Some feel that

this tendency may seriously affect the local retail shops while others are enjoying the benefit of

shopping from the comfort of their homes. I think shopping on the internet is a positive option –

especially for those with an illness, disability and who are very busy normally working.

Certainly, online sales have been competing with the traditional shops in a very unfair way.

Because online shops can get better prices due the absence of infrastructure and the lower amount

of employees needed to develop the enterprise. As a result many consumers choose this way of

shopping without realising how badly are affecting the local community.

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Nowadays, many people will be buying thing in online. For some people is convience, also might

be cheaper than shopping centre. This essay will be dicuss the number of people shopping online

today there’s advantages or disadvantages.

Firstly, how often people will buy thing in online? I can tell you the true thing is a lot of people

are buying thing nowadays, Such as clothes, shoes, caps and etc. Therefore, you’re not go to

shopping centre to buy stuff. You can buy it in online whatever you want and the online shop

payment is more easier to pay rather than you going to the mall, online shop just need your credit

card that all.

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Nowadays, the topic about online shopping are being discussed around the world. Some feel that

it is the best way to buy products while others disagree. In my opinion online shopping has more

benefits than negatives.

It is true that there are some negative effects when we are shopping online such as we cannot

personally check the item before we buy it. If there are some problems on the products that we

buy we can’t give it back to the seller.